Martial Universe: The Fire Ancestor

How does the protagonist raise the beast spirit fire first? This alien fire is ranked low in power. In terms of practicality, the protagonist should first find a way to cultivate the fallen heart flames. This alien fire is practical and can be used as a cheating tool in practice. In fights, it can also summon the inner fire in the opponent's body to hurt the enemy. It is impossible to prevent it.

Let's all vote for the female protagonists, 1 Lin Dong, 2 Qing Tan, 3 Ling Qing Zhu, 4 Ying Huan Huan, 5 all, 6 long and beautiful women will do, 7 long and handsome men will do.

When I first watched Wu Dong, I was disgusted by the Lin family. Unfortunately, Lin Xiao was deposed when he represented the family in the war. Those people in the Lin family immediately changed their faces and added insult to injury. Lin Dong actually continued to protect the Lin family, even compared to Naruto. For a normal person, who would care about this broken family? They are all enemies.

Is this good? 🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫

I just finished reading Chapter 12 and have some thoughts. First of all, the strange fire seeds show that the energy is not enough, but the characteristics are still there, and it also shows that it can be activated and refined, so you can play with it. You don't have to worry about practicing cheating and falling heart flames after activating your practice; Let's look at what is best suited for body quenching. Three Thousand Flames of Fire, which automatically absorbs the power of the stars to strengthen the alien fire itself, can also restore and strengthen the protagonist himself; Cultivation means fighting for resources and machines. If you want resources, you shouldn't use the Flame of Life. This is equivalent to Old Demon Han's Sky Palm Vase. Just having it is enough. Wang Gou adds the previous Three Thousand Flames of Flame and Void Swallowing Fire, which automatically repairs internal injuries and various self-traumas. As long as you still have a breath, you can slowly recover. Coupled with the Void Swallowing Flame's crazy devouring and absorption, this is Lang's perfect match. Even if you accidentally get poisoned, there is Nether Poison Fire to absorb and detoxify; if you are cursed or something, there is Pure Lotus Demon Fire to purify you; when escaping, coupled with Feng Lei Nu Yan's own wind speed, it can also paralyze the opponent. The above are some of my suggestions, that is, I suggest that the author can write additional functions of the alien fire. Every additional function is a bug. Even the Qinglian Earth Core Fire can communicate and control underground magma. The last one is to write less emotional scenes, it's really too embarrassing 😅. Continue reading and say goodbye.

Note, this is the first time the protagonist and Qingtan meet. Is it disgusting

It's so troublesome for the protagonist to raise a beast spirit fire. How to raise other strange fires later? Should we just throw them away if they can't grow enough? 😅

It's annoying to read about "Double Heroes" in the book. They haven't even developed their strength yet, and their reputation is unknown to everyone. Lin Dong in the original novel is not that famous, but in your book, "Double Heroes" and "Double Heroes" are mentioned endlessly. . . Okay, what's the point of having a reputation as a duo? Your opponents won't come to slap you in the face, right? A useless title for a duo not only messes up the word count, but also disgusts readers. I vomited.

After reading Chapter 24, I almost feel helpless. Just fight, why is there so much bullshit? What the hell is this? Can you hurry up? I paid 100 points just to complain. If it is put on the shelves like this, it will probably be unpopular. Don't follow the example of 🥔 and rest on your laurels like crazy. Now, after Dou Po Wu Dong, there will be no more potatoes.

To be honest, novices can watch it, old bookworms can't accept it at all, especially the emotional scene at the beginning. Good guy, it's too deliberate. It embarrasses me to death. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't describe it too deliberately. I think novices will be persuaded to quit after watching it. I've tried the poison, so feel free to do as you please 🙂.