The Azure Helmsman

The beginning of the book was not handled well, and it was too slow to get people involved. Many people stopped reading after three or two chapters. The presence of the protagonist in the first few chapters was too low, and two chapters of the protagonist's past were inserted in order to shape the character's personality. The description of Goldfinger was not very intuitive, and many people could not find it interesting. I briefly read the description of Goldfinger, but to be honest, I didn't quite understand it. After reading about 30 pictures, I slowly started to get a taste of it. I suggested that the author overhaul the first ten chapters. The golden three chapters directly point out that the protagonist's family is extremely rich, the protagonist's golden finger, and the protagonist's preliminary main plot. It is best to leave a foreshadowing of a small climax. In addition, the description of the golden finger in the front should be simple, direct and rough. The relevant settings can be added later. Otherwise, according to the current results, there is a higher possibility of recommendation. If you change it, two more recommendations will take off. The author's writing style is great, much better than those of studio writing, but it is a mistake. I hope this book will become popular. There are too few urban novels to read now.

Let's put it this way, there can be no real fairness in this world

When I publish a new book, I don't even mention posting a notice on the old book.

What can I say? It feels better than planting trees.

It's very well written, why doesn't anyone comment? ? ?

The introduction is interesting 😁 A work of subtle knowledge

Did you offend the editor? You don't have any recommendations?

As an author with a representative work, this review is a bit sparse, so we still need to promote it.

What the hell is this? What kind of setting are the place names and school names? It's too middle-school. I feel like I'm getting goosebumps. I couldn't watch it from the beginning.

The big killers such as the water melody singer and letting the bullets fly have been briefly mentioned.