Tirisfal Guardian of Konoha

There is a bug in this article! 1. Spells such as Pyroblast and Flame Storm are simply not something that a rookie mage like the protagonist can master in WoW, let alone the ability to transform into a sheep and flash. In wow, there are people who play transformation to death! Flash more. Don't look at Jaina's group teleportation. Mage player 44444 flashes everywhere. The flash trainer has mentioned this problem. Flash teleportation can easily kill people. 2. Even the apprentice's fireball can kill someone as long as it hits a vital point, not to mention sustained injuries such as burns and igniting clothes and hair. The author has no intention of worrying about logic at all, he just writes according to the gameplay. No matter what type of damage ➕ effect is given, it is done. This is really a drama. 3. Any of Hokage's own jutsus are absolutely confidential. If the leader of the team gives you a C-level, it is considered very friendly. He is not allowed to teach the village's jutsu in private. Even the Hokage will not explore the ninjutsu developed by himself. If he doesn't make good use of this, he will actually gain presence everywhere. It's a bit poisonous! Finally, when converting games into novels, you cannot just use numerical values. If what is written cannot be connected with real people's cognition, it will be difficult for people to have a sense of immersion. If the novel does not have a sense of immersion, it will be a drama, and it is basically inevitable to be disappointed 😅. It's good to use World of Warcraft to attract votes, but there are really many World of Warcraft players who have tested the party, so don't ruin your reputation.

Author, can you tell me, do you think Mitomon Yan's surname is "Mito" or "Mitomon"? Do you also trust Baidu Encyclopedia for everything?

Sheep Transformation + Pyroblast will never kill anyone. Then you can learn the Pyroblast Technique, turn into a sheep and stab him to death with a kunai. Author, your settings are really speechless, so you just stick to the game mode. Even if you flash a kunai, it is better than the embarrassing transformation into sheep and severe burns. The game severely limits the damage caused by player skills. It's disgusting that you forcefully apply the settings in the game to reality.

A mage is not a pure combat profession, but a scholar, an explorer of truth. It is too wasteful just to study pure combat skills (similar to game skills, such as flash, shield, etc.). A real mage does not say that he has a mage tower, but more about scientific research, using results instead of going to the battlefield, and then studying some esoteric magic.

The writing is very good, and the subject matter is also very attractive to me, but there is a big problem, that is, it can't kill people. The ninja is buried in the ground and then emerges. The protagonist's face-to-face flames are only injured. There is also the Dragon Breath Technique at the back. The ninja was beaten to half death. The protagonist's Dragon Breath Technique only knocks him into confusion. There are no other changes.

It's a woolly study. There is no principle of magic and no steps to dismantle it. The protagonist just relied on my power of thinking in half a month to "research the magic". The spell effects are exactly the same as in the game. So what spell book should I write? Wouldn't it be better to just give the protagonist a system? In addition, the character is seriously OOC, Danzo can even reach out to the elder's son? What kind of Hokage does Danzo think of as the Supreme Emperor? Fortunately, I thought it was good when I first read it and ordered 20 chapters just to talk about it.

That thing everyone hates is the brainless harem! What do you think this is? Maliciously engaging in ambiguity and then forcing yourself to be single? Slip away! Anyway, there is no shortage of me.

I was disgusted when Orochimaru blatantly asked the protagonist for secret techniques. It was really poisonous. When did the secret techniques developed by the Hokage have to be reported to the Hokage at any time? Is there any need for family secrets? The common people tolerated it. As a descendant of one of the top officials, were they afraid of Danzo? Damn how far Danzo is going to be hacked! This joke is too forced! Any ninjutsu that is C level is precious to civilians! What's more, Orochimaru directly asked the protagonist for the secret technique development know-how for an entire series? ? ? For ordinary people, this thing can completely create an awesome family! What do you think?

If nothing else, I think this novel will die prematurely. For an author who has had good results in the past, his current results are too poor. Generally, he will rewrite a novel like this.

It's not low-key at all. The main character is stubborn, but his body is very honest. He can't help but show off. In addition to Dai, Dai is not a ninja from a big family. When many people know the protagonist's strength, it's not low-key, but showing off. What's the difference between this and the original work? Therefore, it is better to set up a genius character from the beginning. Double standards will not have good results.

In this era, only the main character's mother is outstanding. Nonou has a deep relationship with Nabekage. She is a saint of character. As a heroine, she can backstab the main character for the sake of the orphanage, unless she twists her character. Kushina's physical injury has profit bonuses and knowledge of sealing techniques, but Naruto will be missing something. However, he can turn Naruto into his own red-haired son. Mikoto's words have no effect on the two pillars at all. Changing mothers, good wives and mothers plus sharingan genjutsu and other research, the shortcomings will cause trouble for Uchiha.

Halfway through watching it, I realized that the male protagonist is a eunuch.

After reading the last few chapters, I feel like it's a bit fake, forced to be single, self-conceited and lofty ideals, and a blank and powerless "Avengers" (this is what I want to complain about the most after reading the latest chapter. Author, don't you know that the biggest factor in the popularity of the Avengers in China is the special effects? How many people are talking about the plot of the Avengers?)

I watched it after watching Holy Light Pirates, and I felt a little disappointed. I saw that the biggest problem is that the top management of Konoha is afraid of Uchiha because of the ability of the kaleidoscope and the ability to control tailed beasts, not how you open the blood chakra eye. Even undead lovers and friends can open the kaleidoscope. The top management of Konoha will also be afraid because you can still control the tailed beasts and open Susana.

Rejecting Nonoyu is a little bit poisonous, and it's not good to be forced to be single. I feel that this relationship has basically come naturally. But I like it in general and look forward to a logical transformation of Uchiha. The tickets are for you, come on.

The character of Pig's Knuckle is too,,,, too characterless,,, and to be honest, I do think the Akatsuki team is very handsome, but if I were to put myself in the shoes of the Konoha camp, then the dead Akatsuki team would be the best, and I would just take them away in their embryonic state and dig them out. With the Rinnegan, if Black Zetsu comes out to stop him, he will be exposed directly. Then let Jiraiya, an idiot, see what the so-called savior is. It is all a routine plan. In fact, no matter how you look at the toad camp, it looks like a villain manipulating Jiraiya.

The writing is a bit childish and the writing style could be more calm. After reading the first few chapters, the best way to put it is to be out of touch, and the worst way to say it is to be careless. I have read a lot of good books about Naruto, such as the big boss system in Naruto a long time ago, Hinata Yugumo in Naruto, Konoha no Shadow Stream, Kinoshita no Kage, and now Escape from Konoha. These writings are all good, and the subject matter and creativity can attract readers, but without delicate writing, you will not be able to retain your good ideas, and naturally you will not get good grades.

The chuunin turned into a turtle and ate the fire blast, but was seriously injured and retreated.

The subject matter is quite good, and the second setting is also reasonable. Unfortunately, the protagonist is a virgin. If you want to watch Dream Realm, you can check it out. Akimichi Dingza has lost weight, so it's obvious that Danzo Orochimaru can find out with just one check, but the protagonist still wants to hide it? If you see anyone wanting to drink water, you will be exposed to the water-generating technique. I don't see the point of helping Matt Dai, and neither does the protagonist of Eight Gates Dunjia. As the protagonist in this period, there is no need for bodyguards. It is impossible for such a person to work for the protagonist. He will only be loyal to Konoha, unless the protagonist becomes Hokage. But will a mage who studies arcana want to be Hokage?

That's Pyroblast. It's a spell that only archmages are qualified to learn. Its destructive power is astonishing. It's also a killer combination with the transformation technique. Is this spell so weak? Is Azeroth not as good as Naruto?

The update time after it is released, I should have mentioned in the introduction that it will be at 12:00 noon. To be precise, it is 12:01 for the first chapter, and 12:02 for the second chapter. It is easy to remember, and it also makes it easier for me to go through it again and pick out typos when I am fishing in the morning. You don't have to wait for updates in the early morning, and you don't have to worry about eunuchs. I won't delete the few comments involving eunuchs, but it's too troublesome to reply one by one, so I'll just say them here. Finally, stay up late less (ಥ_ಥ)

Is it over? You can start reading. By the way, the next one will be the old shaman in Death, right? 233333333

The protagonist has no temper and feels aggrieved. 1: Tsunade rigidly arranges for the protagonist to contact Orochimaru. 2: It's too much to live here and still learn something here and there. 3: The skills are rigid and the settings are not flexible at all. 4: What are the benefits of Danzo targeting the protagonist? There are so many secret techniques in Naruto that are a bit novel. I'm afraid Danzo, you and I are at the same level as him. How can you still dare to reach out and become Hokage? 5: Free Orochimaru Another system has not received any benefits! How long will it take to develop this thing? Can you give it away casually? 6: That's it. Goodbye.

What's going on? Why are you asking for money? There's still some time.

I just made a full order and you gave me a limited fee. Are you doing something wrong? ? ?

I just want to know why it is suddenly unlimited? ? ? Lost? ?

Finished spreading flowers! I really like the setting of the combination of Warcraft and Naruto. I support it with full subscription 😎

The next Death Knight of Death, the Demon Hunter in Death, and the Shaman of Death's World

The writing of battles is so rubbish. Every time I encounter an enemy, I have to say harsh words. I don't know if I don't know how to write battles or if I'm just running out of words!

Why was the limited exemption suddenly canceled? What's going on?