Douluo: My Wife Is Gu Yuena

Author, please stop abusing the protagonist. The protagonist is really miserable. His mental power is already at the Shenyuan level and you forcefully weaken it and prevent him from using it. It is really a big failure.

Really, if the author can't write about invincibility, then don't level up in the early stage. If it doesn't work, you can write about practicing sub-professionals in the later stage instead of focusing on training. Who wants to read this after the level goes up and then drops down all day long? Originally, it looked like an invincible and refreshing novel in the early stage, but when it was converted to a normal novel, it was still readable, but at this level, it would turn into a sluggish and dull novel!

The front is good, but the back is too deliberate and has double standards. What does it mean not to kill soul beasts? You can't do it (the concept of the previous life). In front of you, you kill people quite easily. Double standards. Wuyu is the same as Tang San.

No, since the heroine is Gu Yuena, why should she write about Yali and others' love for the protagonist? I was curious, is this book about my wife Gu Yuena, or me opening a harem in Douluo? What's even more awesome is that the protagonist also likes Yali and others! Isn't this a bit fancy? If the writer hadn't made it clear about the relationship between you two, I would have thought that the heroine was Yali. As he said, Yali is over a hundred years old, married, and she likes someone 5 times younger than her, not to mention that the protagonist is married, and there is also Shenshuna. I don't want to talk about it anymore. You can see for yourselves 🥱

So far, this is also the most thorough Dou San fan I have followed. Although the author's writing is slightly flawed, I still tried to read it. Regarding the content of this book, perhaps it is because of the author's unique style of writing the book. The content is not very toxic, but it is still an issue of female protagonist that many netizens are concerned about. 1. The author mentions "single heroine" three times in the introduction, but sets up two heroines, Gu Yue and Na'er, in the character list. I don't know if the author is using this hint to express that Na'er and Gu Yue will eventually merge into Gu Yuena. If so, then this can be ignored. 2. Regarding the emotional line of the character Leng Yaozhu, anyone who has read the original work knows her attitude towards feelings. Once you know it, it will last a lifetime. The author wants to use the character of "Meng Li" to let Leng Yaozhu let go of his feelings for Yun Ming, so as not to be affectionate and unrequited. But it is not that easy. The author lets "Meng Li" change Leng Yaozhu as a disciple, and finally It is true that "Meng Li" can be compared with or even better than Yun Ming in Leng Yaozhu's heart, but the single female protagonist mentioned by the author once again pushed her to the starting point. Yun Ming's position in Leng Yaozhu's heart was eventually replaced by "Meng Li", but "Meng Li" was not allowed to accept her. This did not change anything for Leng Yaozhu, it was just a different person, and he continued to suffer from his own emotional pain. 3 Another point is about the role of Yali. In fact, when it comes to the role of Yali, I am quite confused. How can a woman who is nearly a hundred years older than "Meng Li" have an emotional relationship with "Meng Li"? Then I sorted out the plot, from "mutual attraction of similar blood" to "symbiotic friendship on the black market", then "spiritual communication" and finally the "Yin Yang Bracelet" to the emotional foundation that Yali has been following during the adventure of "Meng Li". Because of the author's single-female protagonist setting, both parties thought it was a mistake after this time, and the relationship gradually became estranged. Because of the setting of a single female protagonist, there are some emotional poisonous points. In fact, if the author changes the single female protagonist to four female protagonists, there will be no emotional poisonous points to choose from. It would not be impossible if the author still writes the story with a single female protagonist, but the main reason is that the author has given too much foreshadowing to the character of Yali, such as "bloodline", "heart connection", "yin-yang gem" and "angel mark on the forehead". If they really just gradually become alienated, then all these foreshadowings will be meaningless. I also hope that the author can consider the rationality of the previous plot for the subsequent plot. I burst into tears and didn't know what to say.

Author: It doesn't make sense that you don't have four female protagonists. Although I haven't tracked down the four female protagonists yet, it really doesn't make sense if you write about a single female protagonist.

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Gu Yuena

I feel like you either accept the female protagonist or you don't accept it, but it ends up being written so much that they like the male protagonist, which feels very awkward 😅

I'm really speechless. The level jumps repeatedly. One moment it's very powerful, and the next moment it's suppressed. This is what I write about invincibility. If you want to abuse the master, don't be so invincible at the beginning. You want to be invincible and you want to abuse the master at the same time. It's poisonous to death.

My brother, can I still see you finish this book in my lifetime? 😐

My dearest wife Naer

Really beautiful

The emotional line is a bit poisonous. If you have a single female protagonist, don't make it so ambiguous. If it's ambiguous, don't make it so ambiguous.

The spiritual power of the Shenyuan Mirror was eaten by the author. When I think about the protagonist having the mental power of the Shenyuan Mirror and still not using it, there are all kinds of dangers. Author, you are really 👍

Author, please accept Yali and Leng Yaozhu! Stop being cruel.

It's really frustrating to watch the black market. The Four Sons Fighting Armor and Ultimate Douluo are just like decorations. The protagonists are also useless. Both of them are holy mothers. Their own lives are almost gone, so they are just putting them here and there.

Guyue

If the author has something that cannot be updated, please tell me. You can say that it will not be updated for the time being, but don't pretend you didn't see it.

To be honest, the writing at the beginning of this book is really average, whether it is the various erroneous sentences, the paltry details and combat processes, the broken logic, money, and combat power system, as well as some inexplicable and embarrassing behaviors of the protagonist, etc. The back will be better than the front. . . It's a little better. If you want to see the front part of Yali and Gu Yuena, you can read it at a glance. If you think this is nothing interesting, there is no need to read this book.

Can you survive the second life? 😭 I have updated three chapters in a row 😭

Can you open a chapter to explain the update? 😫 Brother, I was so excited when I saw the fake corpse 😭

Brother, can we still finish this book? I beg you, I must finish it. I read it on the pirated website and got the revised version from Qidian.

Come to life! Mine! ! Spouse! ! ! ! ! !

Brother, are you still alive?