What Should I Do If My High School Girlfriend Is Too Strict?

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I hope the author can see it. The plot has been a bit strange since it was released. The male protagonist and the female protagonist should have known each other's feelings from the first time they went back, but then they reset frequently, so I didn't understand it. And, after this, the two people have been watching their former selves falling in love? I don't know why I have a stomach ache. I can't watch Damu and Daxuan make sweets before the plot is completely over? Watching Da Mu and Da Xuan unable to see each other in the middle of the night makes me feel sick to my stomach. This is just a sweet text. . . When Xiao Mu and Xiao Xuan were making candy, I felt sorry for Damu and D Xuan, no, could they both bear it? If I were to see my other self living such a wonderful life, I would be jealous. Why would I not collapse if I couldn't move? Let's talk about the advantages. The subject matter is great, the literary talent is very good, the author's thinking is clear and organized, and he is very good at making things interesting. Unfortunately, there is often a Da Mu or Da Xuan doing it on the sidelines, making people feel bad for her or him. Again, I hope the author can see it. （11.6 03:03 A middle school student suffered from stomachache in the middle of the night）

Note to book lovers: This is a imaginary love story, with a bit of hell word déjà vu, but the sense of déjà vu is the same, and it can be regarded as a parallel world. It will not be turned into fantasy or science fiction, it is just a sweet story with an inversion of imagination.       ，，， And there is no need to worry about the cabbage being lost or the ending being unfinished, the outline has been designed and the ending is sweet. What we are selling is a big reversal of dog food. In short, bosses, please bear with me!

Xiaoxuan

Beautiful girl

Come "When the Fantasy of Youth Realizes" "I really don't want to fall in love with a hedgehog girl" "Senior, shut up! The top student's male god, his girlfriend overheard his voice "I really didn't want to be a bitch" "What should I do if my girlfriend, the top student, is too strict?" "When I loaded up the matchmaker system, I met the breakup master" Anything else?

Just handsome

Let me talk about my personal feelings. The main line of this book is not clear. This is probably the main reason why this book cannot retain people. The beginning is not bad and attractive enough, but I feel that the main line is missing. My personal feeling is that I can't find a plot in the book that I particularly want to see. Also, the focus of the content feels a bit wrong. Shouldn't this book be about daily campus romance? However, I don't feel that there are too many campus elements. Maybe this is also an important factor in the loss of readers. (It only represents my personal opinion. If there are any deficiencies, please do not criticize or criticize me. Please also please give me your proof. Thank you 🙏)

Just kidding: Is there a future self ntr high school self? 🤭 How does it feel to dance on the horns😎

Let's work hard together. Those who can invest, remember to invest. I love you so much. Thank you so much❤️

I haven't watched it yet, why was my first reaction to Lu Manman and Ma Xiaotiao.

At first I was a little confused when I saw the young male protagonist and the future female protagonist. I felt that there was a bright spot, just like the hello world, but I felt that something was wrong. This felt a bit like a dream. The future female protagonist could only enter by lying next to the male protagonist. Moreover, the young male protagonist felt a little bit poisonous. I didn't write that feeling. Let's see what happens next. And what is this arrangement like? No matter who this little male protagonist is with, it feels wrong. In the past, the female protagonist liked the male protagonist, but he is completely different from the young male protagonist. If the author cannot handle this relationship well, then this book will be considered extremely toxic. Let's wait and see how it develops. Keep it first.

Finished spreading flowers yyds! ! !

Well, how should I put it. To sum up, this book still lacks writing skills. The plot in the middle is not sweet enough, especially the fake world segment. It is really boring and empty. I hope the author can go further. There are also good things. The material selection is very bold. Generally, authors will not choose such slow-burning time-type themes. It is easy to lose readers in the early stage, and many people will not understand the settings, leading to deviations. The beginning is undoubtedly well written, and it has not lost its standard until it is put on the shelf. Unfortunately, this is the author's first book, and there is no accumulation of readers, so people are slow to catch up. The ending is also eye-catching. The disappearance of the imaginary Su Yuxuan, the waiting of the real Su Yuxuan, and Xiao Mu's gratitude are all heart-wrenching and amazing. It is a pity that the gap in the middle leads to the loss of readers. I hope the author can go further, and I believe the author can bring you more exciting works. Similarly, I would like to apologize to the author. As a student, I really don't have any pocket money. One day, when I make money, I will make up for a full subscription.

It's too bland, too everyday, too cliche and self-guided.

The cabbage should be made faster, it's not enough to look good.

Could the author change the title of the book? Remove the previous rebirth. It feels too strong. I feel it might be better if I remove it. 😄😄

I feel a little watery. I have also seen the same daily life as you, but your sugar content is a bit low, a bit unbearable, a bit poisonous, the progress is too slow, and there is no desire to watch. You are imitating Hello World, but I have also seen it. There are no conflicts, it is too bland, and there is no climax. But this is a problem with your writing technique. It is not necessary to write the conflict points, but is there a climax? There is no climax or attraction at the beginning. When you write for the first time, you must write it according to your own ideas, but you must be able to retain people! I don't usually read many Japanese comics. The writing feels like the atmosphere of Japanese comics. If you just look at the opening few pictures, I will give you eight points, but for the rest, I will only give you five points. The opening is already very good, and it has surprised me. Maybe I am not suitable for reading this kind of thing. Conflict can promote the progress of relationships between men and women, but the progress of their relationship is really worrying. I thought the exam would be a climax, but it is still the same dull. By the way, when will they confess? Or can it be reached to that extent? Of course, someone will definitely like it, so I will contribute a collection to you.

Although I just started reading it, I felt that when the author first described the heroine, he shouldn't write about school beauty, class beauty, pretty, etc. It was too cliché. I feel like I can describe my appearance and figure when there is interaction later.

Hungry, why did I write so many chapters about the plot of the young male protagonist? From my own point of view, because the novel was written from the perspective of the adult male protagonist at the beginning, I naturally brought in the adult male protagonist. As a result, a young male protagonist came out later, and this young male protagonist is better than the adult in every aspect. The male protagonist is awesome. Even his appearance is exactly the same. His life is twice as good as that of the adult male protagonist. He has everything that the male protagonist dreams of. He compares the adult male protagonist to a rat in a smelly ditch. Although I may say that my brother is a 🐭 in life, but you make me look at the kid. It's a bit too much to act like a mouse when I say it. You don't read novels to look in the mirror. This is why readers like me, who are introduced to adult male protagonists, are very indifferent and even disgusted with this young male protagonist. It's very defensive. It's really quite offensive. And now I've read about 170 chapters, and I'm still writing. Now I am in a state where I want to watch the plot of the young male protagonist, but I am also worried that if I jump to watch it, I will skip the plot of the adult male protagonist. And there are only more than 130 scenes left. The second and third layers are still far away. It feels like there are really few plots of the adult male protagonist. In fact, it is a bit too much to pursue two worlds. It turns a good love novel into a group novel, but it also focuses too much on possession, and not much emphasis on the subject, which is a bit self-defeating. Yysy, let me express my own thoughts at the end. In fact, I feel that this book emphasizes redemption, that is, the redemption of the male protagonist for himself. In this way, I feel that there are two ways of thinking. One is pure redemption, writing about the adult male protagonist and the female protagonist; the other is the male protagonist's rebirth. Just like at the beginning of the article, it only writes about the adult male protagonist and the young female protagonist. However, this is a bit bad. Although these two are definitely not as new as this novel, I always feel that these two are better than what they are now. It feels good, but now I can only feel the strong malice from the novel, reminding me all the time that I am a fw, and they also want to give me dog food. This is not what I want, what I want is the character I brought in and the heroine to give me dog food😭 Anyway I must have fully subscribed to support the author. After all, this novel really gave me a bright-eyed feeling at the beginning. I really don't mean to attack the author by posting this comment. I just feel that I can't stand it anymore and I'm here to complain. Of course I will definitely watch it all^_^😘

How should I put it? The sweet article turned into a thought-provoking article. I really want to persuade you to quit.

Author, can you tell me about the plot? I saw about 30 pictures and the discussion, and I felt a little confused. I covered my head when I read the comments. It seems to be a parallel world of space or something.

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For some reasons (I am not the audience for this book) I can't read it, so I'll talk about it a little bit here I suggest changing the title That's it

I'm actually a little curious about how this book will fare. The writing is pretty good, but if you can't get popular even if you write it like this, how can your top work be promoted?

Apart from anything else, combined with the setting of hello world and the perfect ending mentioned by the author, this book has a different feel to it. It's awesome!

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