When Games Mirror Reality

At the end of the first game, there are 3 ordinary cards, one epic and one legendary. The epic is a professional card, and the legendary is a standard battle card. After the game is released, the legendary battle card is sold directly, leaving an epic career card with only a bag of ordinary seeds. The reason given is that it does not match my style.

It feels like a big miscellaneous painting with similar contents.

The protagonist's starting point for joining the military is a bit low now. Why don't you develop a little bit? Good guy, everyone who can lift a building has come out. If they don't develop, wouldn't they still be at the bottom? I think at least the ability to win in the game is enough. Shouldn't we develop a game?

Meeting a woman brings wisdom, it's like never seeing a woman before

Shen Nong said that he is too scared to try grass in the future. What should I do? I have only read eight chapters. The author repeatedly tried to set up, forcibly derailed the intelligence, and brainlessly gave the protagonist tricks that appeared out of thin air. He tried his best to slap himself in the face. Every one of the above is wrong. Welcome to slap him in the face. The subject matter is not new. I have seen more than one book with the same theme. Even the settings are similar. The starting chapters are basically the same, but none of them are so poisonous. Goodbye.

Such a strong combat follower has been sold. Anyone with any brains would not sell it. Don't borrow the poisonous points from others.

How should I put it? It's like a running account. There is nothing exciting about the whole process. The game process is obviously very ups and downs, but it feels like there are no waves. I feel that the subject matter is very good, but the writing style is not good.

This book is useless. What a pity. I saw that the theme is from the previous Small World game stream. It's a pity, it's a pity, the author can't control it.

Since joining the country, this book has been unreadable. The protagonist is just a tool man. He has golden fingers and can't hold up the mud.

If I hadn't looked through old books, I wouldn't have even known about opening a new book 😄

As soon as the golden finger comes, all kinds of monsters and monsters will appear.

I quit after seeing Chapter 15. This kind of thing was basically behind the scenes and ended up joining the army. How funny! The lack of maternal love doesn't have to be so obvious. That's it, that's it.

The idea of ​​the novel is good, but the writing method is too old-fashioned, a bit resurrected from ancient times, and there are too many poisonous points. The author's writing style ruins the idea of ​​the novel.

Suddenly, many Yuan Chu became weaker. I'm so embarrassed that I can dig out three bedrooms and two living rooms

Good guy, I started fighting life and death, came up with a legendary card, and then sold it! Sold! Who would sell legendary cards without knowing anything, and just sell top-level cards so casually? Sell ​​it, 7000 gold coins + may be taken away *2. Don't sell, open a small account/vest, and leave all kinds of things that are inconvenient to do by yourself to the vest. How many bosses have only one identity? Who doesn't have a vest/glove for doing dirty work? The protagonist is sold out. Have you considered using other identities to kill the enemy when there is a conflict in the future? Every time you play by yourself, a deck of cards can defeat the whole world? As long as there is an enemy with a higher status, all the cards used by the protagonist can be found. The legendary card from another deck was abandoned at the beginning. Is this a normal person? How much can you sell? You will lose money if you sell it, but you will lose money if you buy it! Sell ​​a legendary card when you are new. What do you think? Just for a few thousand gold coins? Anyone who has played games knows that game masters will not sell high-end resources in the early stage! I will only buy it! The protagonist is the protagonist, so he is a master and a strong one. Then I sold the only legendary card in the early stage because I was not used to it and it was not easy to use. How many legendary cards does the protagonist have? How many premium cards? The premise is that there are alternatives if you are not used to it! Are there any replacement legendary cards? No. There is already a zombie legend card. Is it difficult to come up with an evil identity in the future? A righteous knight and an evil master. How nice. Creating a selling card requires someone to bring it, which requires unnecessary resources. What do you think? Could it be that he was led by someone to release high-level resources? Enemies appear, and hostile forces appear after you kill them? Hehe. Also, continue to make friends with the trading party, and then a small enemy appears, becomes a enemy, and after killing it, a hostile force appears? Hehe.

I feel like the text is not very immersive to read, but if I read it faster, I won't be able to understand what I want to write, and I can't keep up with the evolution of online literature.

There is a problem with the focus. In a game that is obviously a game flow, the second game focuses on leveling up and fighting monsters instead of the game itself. It is boring and boring. It can be seen that the author has written similar things before and lacks imagination.

After reading Chapter 12, I thought about it and decided not to read it.

I'm wondering if the author wants to write a Genshin Impact?

Do you have any similar books to recommend?

What are these chapters 2-10 about~

I'm convinced. The protagonist's halo has just been played in the panoramic game, plus the physical fitness plus ten plus the seeds and knowledge have been loaded. In the next chapter, the parents are here and they don't remember anything?

This book is also similar to a small world setting. This is actually not a big problem. You can write similar settings, but it is best to write in your own style. The quality of a book cannot be completely controlled by how good the setting is. After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that the author's writing skills are indeed lacking, and the characters are not full enough. Except for the protagonist, the characters are basically just to promote the subsequent plot. It is designed based on emotions, lacking the character traits and behavioral logic of the characters. It seems very rigid and lacks vitality. Overall, there is not much problem with the plot. However, the writing still lacks foreshadowing and hidden lines, or "buttons". It is not eye-catching enough and makes it difficult for people to feel bright. I hope to work hard to improve these aspects in the future, and the popularity may increase.

The book is okay. It is very smooth to read in Reiki Recovery. Come on, author, stop being eunuchs. Eunuchs ruin your character.

Good guy, I thought it was over as soon as it was put on the shelves. This is a breakthrough in combat power of Semir sand sculptures.

It's such a cut-and-discard, top-notch novel.

Fifth

Since they are all plant-based superpowers, wouldn't it be nice if we didn't set up a company to buy some medicines?