A Wizard's Journey That Begins with Conjuring Spirits

This is my first fantasy novel, and I admit that I do have many shortcomings. The character creation is indeed not good enough, some of the fighting scenes are not exciting enough, and the horror atmosphere is not rendered well enough. I don't want to lick my face and talk about being tolerant, but this novel just doesn't work. At the beginning, I also responded to the comments very actively, but gradually I found that for some people who came to specifically criticize, no matter how you explain it, it is useless. If you don't like it, you don't like it. There is no use in explaining it so much. The protagonist is selfish and is said to be cold-blooded. The protagonist is said to be a virgin when he helps people who are trapped in darkness. In the beginning, the character of the protagonist's sister was not like this. Instead, she was a yandere and perverted existence, and her talent was not very high. However, she was later selected as the object of possession by the goddess of pain's clone. Then with the help of the protagonist, she designed to swallow the goddess of pain's clone, gaining part of the goddess of pain's power and divinity. I think this character and behavior are great, and they are not cliche at all. The coach who teaches the protagonist to masturbate is an ogre. He was originally a small copy for his sister, because his sister has a serious desire to control and will get rid of women who appear next to her brother. Then some people said that they don't like it and it's a perversion, so I'll change it. Changed to a good and obedient sister, and now she is talking in a cliché way. If his talent is not high, you will think his sister is a burden. If the talent is too high, it will feel very cliché. OK, the first idea was passed, and the second idea was hated again. I'm sorry that you clicked in and saw this book. It's really... Alas! Nothing to say, nothing to say. I don't expect that this book will be able to earn a few of you subscriptions after it is put on the shelves. I'm so sorry that I'm so disgusting to you. But one thing to say is that your comments really affect my mood and creation. So I want to increase the comment to 1 fan point, so that you can create with peace of mind and you don't want to look for me.

I would like to give the author a suggestion. The development of the plot and background introduction should be transitioned from the perspective of the protagonist. Currently, there are many scenes that feel fragmented and difficult to get into.

The writing is good, but can I stick to it?

I found this picture, I like it.

If the author had not been a prisoner, how many books would he have written? Can I write it and put it on the shelves? I think your book is very good

Very well written. But the fact that you have clicked 8 copies makes people afraid to pursue it.

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This look is a bit cruel

Who dares to read this? I have written so many books.

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Hey, it seems I have to change my book cover and my shirt.

It should be this

You have some creativity, can you speak now if your fan value is 100 or above?

Basically, these characters have been decided, and their personalities will remain roughly the same and will not change. Also, in my original setting, this sister was a yandere and pervert, which has nothing to do with cuteness. Now I have rewritten it back to the setting. If you don't think it's cute, it's just poison, and I can't do anything about it.

Already collected, no comment for now, I'll talk about it after reading it.

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