
Dragon Ball Super: I, Broly, Join the Dimensional Chat Group
龙珠超:我布罗利加入次元聊天群
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- Light Novel
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- Fan Fiction
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- 4y ago
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I've read a lot of books about Broly, and there's a lot of back and forth between starting with 10,000 combat power and 5 combat power. And it was a narrow victory.
What I hate the most is deliberately undercutting the main character. Obviously so strong. But he insisted on being cut into a monkey. What to do. Gods of lower planets. Something. What settings. The will of the world. If it doesn't work, fly out and destroy the entire world. He can control what happens to the protagonist who is more powerful than him. Wipe. Grass<(`^´)>
🙄🙄A 6-year-old child. Saiyans grow overnight. Kakarot was still a child when he was a teenager. After practicing for a period of time, he suddenly turned into a young man, and then it became fixed. Saiyans should only have a cub stage, an infant stage and an adult stage. You can refer to Little Goku, Goku, Little Gohan, Gohan, Little Goten, etc. They are either children or adults. They probably have a slightly longer childhood period of about ten years, and then suddenly become adults🌝 and they will always be at their peak as adults.
All I can say is that the author has never watched Dragon Ball at all, and the settings of Z Broly and Super Broly have been adjusted back and forth. Also, Broly's magic defense is described as being so low. Doesn't it mean that the super power in his hand is completely useless, don't you understand?
Even if Broly doesn't train. Your strength will skyrocket every day if you train. You can directly blast Beerus in a short time, no problem.
The most oppressive original boss in Dragon Ball! The brutal and bellicose Legendary Super Saiyan! Broly!
If Broly's combat power is calculated at a growth rate of two per year, that pig's foot is now six years old, and his combat power must not be 320,000. He's even taller than Captain Ginyu. Directly destroying the planet is just a matter of one blow. With a fighting strength of 320,000, it would be difficult to defeat a parasitic beast, but Prince Vegeta has a fighting strength of several thousand. It didn't take much effort to destroy the world.
Please don't set Chinese girls to have the character of girls in Japanese comics. OK
As soon as I saw that the group leader was a woman, I knew it. . The heroine didn't run away. The routines are all the same
Speaking of which, parasitic beasts are a threat to ordinary humans. But for Broly, he's just something that can be eliminated with just a raise of his hand.
It's best if you're writing about Zhutianliu, you shouldn't have an organization of villains wandering around in the universe. I'm tired of seeing it. It seems like you won't be able to write without arranging villains.
The protagonist's soul will be very annoying if it is undefended. No matter how weak other chat groups are, they can still protect their souls. Even if ordinary attacks are ignored, soul searching and body seizing are either obliterated or seriously injured. Even the group members will be protected. Otherwise, the world such as the Magic Forbidden City will be exposed at once. If you don't pay attention, if someone joins the martial arts world, the enemy can use the Nine Yin Manual to torture them out.
Reminds me of what is said in a novel. This kind of chat group is most taboo with the group leader pretending to be a boss, because you, a person who has lived for less than a few dozen years in the 21st century, can be more scheming than someone who has lived for hundreds or thousands of years? Can you be more scheming than Yue Buqun?
Don't just read a review and leave, click through.
In addition to some pornographic scam ads and malicious trolls, I will delete them and permanently ban them. If you have any questions about other people's posts, I will respond promptly. There are answers to every question. Friends who have just come in, don't leave after being affected by just one. At the same time, I have not set any fan points to restrict your comments. If you point out any problems, I will correct them. But try not to include them in book reviews because it will affect the perception of other people. You can put them in chapter reviews. Thank you all.
Author, one thing I want to tell you is that it is true that Saiyans have very low magic resistance! But they are not completely weak to that extent! Such as the ability of time and space! If the energy gap between the two parties is too big! No matter how incredible this ability is! It won't work on stronger people either! The original comic Super Saiyan God Goku vs. Hit is a living example! So the power of time and space in Game Life cannot affect the protagonist at all, okay? As long as the protagonist turns on the energy to a high level, it can be dealt with by surrounding the whole body at all times! The same goes for spiritual power! Wasn't the original Vegeta able to get rid of Babidi's control with his own powerful strength? Plus, they did it on purpose! That's why it was controlled! If only these things could be useful to Saiyans! Then the original Goku, Vegeta and the others have fallen long ago, okay? The real fatal threats to the Saiyans are things like space, lifespan, and the inability to eat!
I've always been curious about a question. It stands to reason that it's Superman's Man of Steel. A bullet couldn't even hit his eyeball. Take those ordinary women on earth. Shouldn't he be like poking a plastic bag? Can you feel it? I'm afraid no normal human being can touch his cock, right? And you can crush a paper figure if you don't pay attention. Can you survive?
The heroine really doesn't need to be so two-dimensional, and there's no need to write it so childishly. If you really want a heroine but are afraid of readers leaving, you can be like Sun Wukong and Sun Wukong's wife, and be together in an ordinary way. There is no need to do these silly things. Writing a heroine will definitely make some people leave, but the process of being together can keep more people.
It's not very pretty, but it's very attractive.
Why do some people always think that the old version of Broly will lose his mind? It is obviously the new version of Broly who loses his mind. If you look back carefully, you will find that the old version of Broly has reason, at least in the first part.
Who is the strongest between Superman and Thanos?
Everyone thinks that Thanos with 6 Infinity Stones in the Marvel Cinematic Universe is more powerful, or Superman in the DC Cinematic Universe is more powerful. Please note that we will not discuss comics here but movies. After all, comics are too ridiculous.
? What's going on? Why don't people write books anymore?
It was too big a step. I was originally planning to go to the heavens after Dragon Ball ended, but I felt like it was getting colder since the chat group between the heroine and the villain started.
Last time I read a novel about traveling through time and becoming King Frieza. It is also the astronomy. However, the writing style is very mature. This novel feels like the author's writing techniques are not sophisticated enough. You are a newcomer, right?
"Are you afraid?" Suddenly, such a voice came from his heart, the voice of a gentle adult man, full of magnetism. "Are you afraid?" Li Mingyu had no reaction to the voice that appeared in his head, and his will was on the verge of collapse. "Do you hate them?" The voice was very patient and continued to ask. A warm and healing breath gradually soothed Li Mingyu's collapsed heart. "Do you hate your own incompetence? Because you are just a scum, you can't save them, you can only watch them being eaten bit by bit!" The voice was as gentle as before, but gradually, it took on a hint of darkness and evil, and the tone was full of malice and ridicule. "I can help you and give you the power to avenge them!" "Revenge...?" Li Mingyu's empty eyes finally had a bright red color! "That's right! The power to avenge them. With this power, you can bring this group of people to justice." Kill all the lowly and ugly lives, pile up mountains of flesh and bones, and the soul becomes your nourishment. Not only that, you can also play with all the creatures in this world wantonly, and you are their master, how about it?" This voice is extremely evil, like the whisper of a devil, and the previous gentleness is just a disguise. "Kill them all..." Li Mingyu muttered dully, the red light in his eyes became more and more bright and terrifying, and black mist began to wrap around his body. "That's it! Kill them all! Kill everything you don't like and release the evil in your heart! Destroy wantonly and destroy to your heart's content. The more you destroy, the more you will get. All your actions are correct!" The devil's whispers were extremely twisted, and behind Li Mingyu, a huge shadow emerged. The top of the head has sharp horns, like a crab claw head, the eyes are as bright as lanterns, the body is staggered with blue and silver, and it carries an intimidating pressure, extremely terrifying! It slowly stretched out its hands and held Li Mingyu tightly, and the evil whisper continued. Author: "Be angry! Be hateful! Be sad! Be depraved! Be crazy! Then destroy everything! You are the ruler destined to rule the world, and you are also the only heir to me, the great Rayblood. As the only Leonix in this universe, you Enjoy destroying everything!" In its hands, the red light and black mist become more violent, and the chaos twists, "My name is Ray Brad, the omniscient and omnipotent god, the master of the universe for tens of thousands of years, after Li Mingyu shouted in pain. In the movie, Li Mingyu became one with the ultimate life as Rebra laughed wildly. Hahahahahahahaha... With uncontrollable laughter, Li Mingyu rose into the sky, wrapped in strong dark power and endless killing intent, and rushed into the universe
Forced to set fan value
I'm very tired now. In addition to training, I have to update novels every day. The results of the novels are not satisfactory, and people keep asking some cute questions, which makes me exhausted mentally and physically, so I can't set the fan value. I want to reiterate the settings 1. The protagonist is a time traveler, and now Broly is from Dragon Ball Super, not Toei. I beg some readers, please don't judge the actions and thoughts of the protagonist with the thoughts of a child. 2. The protagonist is an egoist, neither good nor bad. In the early stage, he could not control his power and went on a rampage and killed some innocent people. Later, he was lost because of his power. Now he can control himself. Subjectively, he is still a normal person. He will not say that he kills innocent people "without purpose" and takes pleasure in killing people. I really can't accept this kind of dark and cool protagonist in the minds of some readers. Because I think killing decisively is against the enemy, not extending the butcher knife to innocent people in other dimensions. My personal opinion is that this is indiscriminate killing of innocent people. 3. I really don't want to talk about the combat power issue. Some readers always use some collapsed combat power to measure Dragon Ball's combat power with me. For example, if Kame Sennin has 300 combat power, he can blow away the moon regardless of the distance from the earth to the moon. And King Vegeta raised his hand to blast three stars, ignoring distance, space, and the size and weight of the planet. What's more, they keep saying that the villain doesn't want to destroy the earth, and the earth has been strengthened. I am really speechless and don't want to explain. If they don't fight, everyone has the power to destroy the earth. When they fight, no one wants to destroy the earth. This is the standard of combat power I set. If you can see it, accept it. If you can't see it, there's nothing you can do about it. Ordinary Earthling: 5 Minimum power to destroy a planet: 10,000 (you need to find the right angle to penetrate the center of the earth and detonate the planet) Normal power to destroy a planet: 500,000 (can directly destroy the planet regardless of angle.) The damage caused by using qigong waves is different from the damage caused by pure physical combat. The above two combat powers can only destroy a planet by using qi. For example, in Dragon Ball Z, Frieza and Goku both have a combat power of more than 100 million. They can use Qigong waves to destroy Namek, but if they fight purely physically on it, they will not destroy the entire planet with one punch. Don't ask me again why Broly, who has more than 10,000 combat power, can't split the earth with one punch. He just shook his fist and didn't use any energy. According to what some readers said, if he farts, wouldn't it destroy the earth? In Dragon Ball Super, there is nothing wrong with beating the earth for so long. There are also other villains in Dragon Ball, such as Cell, who can only cause limited damage without using his energy. It is impossible to say that if he steps on him, the whole earth will crack. I'm really speechless! I really don't want to set this fan value, but I'm really tired and speechless. It's already past 2 o'clock when I write these things. I'm exhausted from reading the comments. I haven't earned much money. Now I'm waiting for three months to finish writing, and then it's over. But I read some cute questions and book reviews every day, and I'm really speechless. I'm easily influenced by others, so I'd better keep an eye out for it.
Regarding the issue of single female protagonist, multiple female protagonists or no female protagonist.
I can do either. It mainly depends on which plot the readers like. I will write whichever plot has more readers. However, the answer must be given before it is put on the shelf, otherwise the outline cannot be changed once it is finalized. I hope that if there are many female protagonists, please leave the words "multiple female protagonists" below the post here. I hope the single female protagonist will remain the single female protagonist. I hope that if there is no heroine, there will be no heroine. Before putting it on the shelf, I would count the number of people and then start thinking about how to write it.
The Tailed Beast Jade can flatten a hill with one shot. About as powerful as a small nuclear bomb
I've read a Dragon Ball fan novel before! What I wrote is to arrange the ninja world to a remote place in the Dragon Ball universe. The sacred tree is approximately equal to the vitality tree. Is there any problem? No problem(=_=)
Time travel and become Broly? 🙂