Douluo's Five Elements Rotation

This book is quite good among fan fictions. The plot is smooth, there are no major poisonous points (comparisons set it off), and the character is a normal person (it's hard to find normal people nowadays). It's a good book.

Originally, I thought this article was clear, but it turned out to be a time-traveler with the author's bias. The kind of fan fiction I like is the kind where the protagonist witnesses and experiences the wonders of another world after traveling through time, rather than the kind of plot where the protagonist dreams. Let's not talk about whether the protagonist follows the plot or not. You just say that every time you meet a sample described by Douluo, you have to criticize it. And most of the criticism is contemptuous. I came to see the fan fiction, not to see you criticize it throughout the article. Why do you write so many fan stories? It's too unqualified. Why don't you write a paper to show your critical skills towards Douluo. The character design of the protagonist is also not good, so why write that the fairy grass is too simple, just practice and keep up with Shrek? ? Don't be afraid of what people say, please accept your prejudices. You, the protagonist, don't even know how to repay the most basic kindness, and you still despise other people's original characters as rubbish. Do you have the qualifications? After reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. The whole text is full of the author's bias. Why bother? If you don't like it so much, why bother writing about Douluo? I can imagine that you are embarrassed to read the whole text and write a book review at the same time.

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The protagonist's character is very immersive and makes it easy and enjoyable to read. I think the protagonist's five-ring martial spirit is a hurdle. He could be quite strong before, but once he gets five rings, it's a qualitative leap. The five elements circulate in the body and strengthen the body all the time. A strong body brings a series of benefits (such as strong five senses, strong physical recovery, rapid spiritual growth, strong soul power and soul power recovery speed, etc.) Anyway, there are too many benefits, and it is a virtuous cycle. But there is also a disadvantage, that is, the author of the soul rings after the fifth ring must be careful and reasonable when writing. At least it cannot conflict with the previous Five Elements, otherwise you will easily abandon the book if you are not happy with it 😁.

This is the original work with a protagonist added, which is no different from reading the original work.

The so-called no harem means messing around and not sure about the relationship. This is the first time the good guy heard that there is no harem.

The comments are really interesting. This book barely describes Tang San and it can be considered as licking Tang San. I really laughed out loud. You said that the protagonist licked Tang San, but did he do anything beneficial to Tang San? Does he consider Tang San his eldest brother or Ritian his adoptive father? The protagonist in the whole story is just a douchebag, and his relationship with Tang San is at best just friends. Is this also called licking? Besides, if you are foresighted and know that you cannot change the plot, it is not wrong to have a good relationship with someone who is sure to have the ability. What if you were reborn 20 years ago and didn't hang out with the old horse? People's thinking nowadays is really weird

Emmmm, I finished reading these 89 chapters in one go. How can I put it, it's definitely poisonous, but it's not really a big poison. The main thing is that the fairy grass part makes me a little confused. I understand that the protagonist is uncomfortable, but I have already guessed that it might be because of Yu Xiaogang that he can't get the fairy grass, so I feel that the reaction is a bit weird. It may be better to express it in other ways. The protagonist's anger and murderous intention really make people feel immersed, but after being angry, I want to complain.

You don't even have a harem. When you see a girl, you go up to her immediately.

I want to complain about this Wu family. They have so many families and have such high innate soul power. Are they still a small force? ? ? ? Is this reasonable?

Thanks to the author for taking us to review the original work. It's the same without you. You might as well just copy it again and send it out.

When I read Douluo's fan fiction now, the first thing I pay attention to is whether the explanation of his martial soul and soul skills is reasonable? For example, in the future, self-created soul skills, soul skill transformation and development, etc., It would be better if there was a better theoretical explanation. I think this book is well done! The second thing to note is what level does the protagonist belong to in the society of Douluo Continent? For example, the protagonist of this book is just a small aristocrat in the mainland, a small aristocrat in a small town. He is too far away from the level of big forces. Compared with ordinary people, he is no different. The third thing to pay attention to is the protagonist's behavior. Is it reasonable? About this book, I think the most relevant issue is this. First of all, the protagonist mentioned above is just a small nobleman. Compared with ordinary people, he may have a better life and relatively better resources. Being able to live a stable life in Douluo Continent, the Wuhun Palace plays a major role. Whether it is the Wuhun Palace's great power, which deters the two empires from easily starting a war, or it gives ordinary civilians a channel for advancement and the distribution of training resources. In addition to following the empire or joining some sect, there is an additional channel for joining the Spirit Hall: after all, not everyone is a genius; the distribution of training resources: the most obvious one is that if you don't have gold soul coins, what will you eat? Some people may argue that these are funds from the two empires and will be distributed by Wuhun Palace. I don't care what the reason is? But this golden soul coin is issued by martial soul practitioners, so its benefits to civilians, civilian soul masters, are quite obvious. If I were a civilian soul master, there would be no such thing as deep grudges. If I followed the development of Douluo Continent in the original book and arrived at the Spirit Hall and fought a decisive battle with the two empires, I think at most I would not be able to help each other. It is impossible to say that I would fight with the two empires in the Spirit Hall. Why? Because I will help anyone who can make my life better? Regarding publishing posts, I am posting my opinions. I think it is okay. It is okay for everyone to discuss and discuss, but if you are a good person, you can automatically close and return.

What the fuck is going on? I spent so much money on this for you, but in the end you only got 200 pictures, and all of them were watery. Who are you trying to fool?

Is this a mess? It's so peaceful. Let's fight for a while. .

Are you going to the Spirit Hall like this from now on? Forcefully drag the protagonist into the Spirit Hall? Then what did you write before?

Are you going to the killing city again? Can you come up with some innovations so that the whole film can't survive without Tang San? The combat power of your elemental control fluctuates. If you just find a way to improve your mental power and control ability, you will be invincible. With the rules, you still care about the weak chicken killing god field.

Everyone, stop complaining, I am Shennong, wait until I come back after watching this!

Forcibly arranging to join Wuhun Palace, what do you think?

The Golden Three Chapters Take You Away. Anyway, I can't stand it anymore. The protagonist written by the author is a loser. Those who promised it really don't know what they think.

Classic bad ending😅😅😅😅

It sucks, are you sorry? 🔪

The middle part of the marriage was so well written, but the rest of it was so messed up that I was really confused, 🌿

After working so hard with the protagonist Tang San, the fairy grass was given away because he wanted to join Wuhun Palace, and he didn't get anything. He died of frustration after working hard as a nanny, and the relationship he cultivated with the protagonist in the early stage of joining Wuhun Palace was all wasted. I don't know why the author wrote this, it's so disgusting 🔪

This is the first time I see the protagonist who is walking around Goulan 🙂

Who would be disgusted by being labeled as a single female protagonist 😰😰😰 When you are a bitch, you still have to erect an archway

It's really disgusting to label a single female protagonist. To be honest, she's just a loser.

In fact, the master is quite good. If no one arranges a one-stop service for soul rings, do you know the soul beast as a time traveler? Can ordinary people have the master's understanding of soul beasts? Brainstorming does not mean that you can get the skills you want from the soul beast. Many Douluo fans are black for the sake of black.

Now that you have joined Wuhun Palace, why don't you take the fairy grass? What's wrong with you if you don't know me? As long as he ate the three kinds that Tang San ate, the rest would be destroyed. Why should he leave them to Tang San? Isn't this causing trouble for himself?

It's just a copy of the original work. I don't see the value of the protagonist, whether he has the same accessories or not.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.