Xiao Mingzi's Diary

Don't tell me, just read the first chapter and it's pretty good. Keep it up from now on, don't drag it out, and then the characterization should be more detailed, with more descriptions of psychological activities, character movements, language, and expressions. And the plot should not be bland, there should be difficulties that hinder the protagonist, otherwise it will be a good article.

It looks good. I look forward to the update without delaying it. Keep working hard and persevering. You will succeed and the plot will become richer.