This Forward Is a Little Freakish

The protagonist's teammates repeatedly targeted him, and he endured it. On the volleyball court, the opponents committed malicious fouls time and time again, and he tolerated it. One time, they almost bleed his eye, and he even saw blood. He could still tolerate that. This is the first time I've seen such a cowardly protagonist in a basketball novel. Even if someone with exceptional skills is incredibly incompetent, they probably wouldn't last a single season in the NBA before retiring.

A "softie" persona won't work in the basketball court. Here, it's all tough guys. Girls aren't welcome. The protagonist gives off a vibe, well, I'll give him a nickname: Super Sweet Candy. Perfect for a protagonist. A softie, sweet candy, a sissy guy... He'd be a Wallace endorser, unbeatable.

The synopsis was off-putting; I didn't have much to say. I just read the synopsis and thought it was uninteresting. Then I came to the book review section, and after reading it, I was even less inclined to read it. The fact that the character didn't fight back against the villain was really unlikable. While glory is important, it's not that important. Countless glories await you in the future.

You should revise the synopsis. It's too far-fetched; it practically sums up the first half of the book, making it uninteresting. Besides, the Bobcats are really unappealing—a trash team.

The problem isn't the character's persona, but rather the writing style. To put it simply: the discriminatory and abusive language directed at the perpetrator ignited the reader's anger. However, the writing style failed to guide the reader in venting that anger. It only allowed the reader to experience the feeling of being humiliated, without providing any sense of satisfaction. Naturally, it became unreadable.

What the hell are you writing? Go watch some basketball pros write, you think you're writing a Korean drama? If you don't flop, who will?

The protagonist is already a coward, fine, but to keep torturing him—domestic abuse, social abuse, even in sports games—and having him play injured without anesthesia or stitches, being taken advantage of for being weak and not fighting back—this is torture to the point of exhaustion! Is this some kind of talent? Is honor really that important in America? What are you trying to portray? A complete idiot?

It started strong but faded quickly; the beginning was captivating, but the later parts were overly melodramatic. The actual competition proceedings were unremarkable, interspersed with family drama and soap opera-like plots.

Holy crap, this book wasn't abandoned! That's impossible!

The protagonist's previous life ended because his mother neglected him and froze to death, which led to his transmigration. Now that the protagonist is successful, he still shamelessly goes back to his mother. It's infuriating!