This Forward Is a Little Freakish

The protagonist's teammates targeted the protagonist again and again, but the protagonist endured it. On the volleyball court, the opponent made malicious fouls again and again, but the protagonist endured them. One of them almost blew out the protagonist's eyes and even saw blood, but he could endure it. It was the first time I saw such a cowardly protagonist in a basketball novel. For such a useless person, no matter how good his skills are, he may not survive one season in the NBA and will retire.

A weakling can't survive in the basketball area. . Here are all macho men. Giegies are not popular. . The protagonist feels like, well, let me give you a nickname: Candy is super sweet. . Very suitable for the protagonist. Soft balls, sweet candy, sissy gege. . Endorse Wallace, invincible

The introduction persuaded me to quit. I didn't have much to say, so I read the introduction and found it boring. Then I came to the book review section. I didn't want to read it anymore. I was beaten by a criminal and didn't fight back. This kind of character is really unpleasant. Although glory is important, it is not that important. There will be countless glory waiting for you in the future. It seems too weak not to fight back against the criminal, and you can't see the toughness. Not to mention the iron blood, they are all excuses. And it's just a high school league, so what if we lose and lose the honor? Will losing affect your entry into the NBA? Won't! Will you earn more if you win? Won't! In this case, why not be tougher? It's too soft and I can't stand it!

Please change the introduction. The introduction is too outrageous. It almost covers the first half of the book. It's not interesting anymore. Besides, the Bobcats are really unattractive. They're a garbage team.

The problem is not the character. But the writing style Let's put it this way: discriminating and insulting criminals arouses the anger of readers. But the writing style cannot guide readers to vent this anger. It only makes readers feel humiliated, but not happy. Of course I can't stand it

What are you writing about? You should read more about basketball and see what the masters write about it. Do you think what you are writing is a Korean idol drama? If you don't rush to the street, who will rush to the street?

Forget it if the protagonist is a softie, since he keeps abusing the master, writing about domestic abuse, abusing the master in society, abusing the master in playing games, going into battle with injuries without anesthesia, and not fighting back when being made weak, this is torture to death. He is a talent. Is honor so important in the United States? What do you want to show? Idiot?

Drive high and go low, the beginning is very attractive, but the later part is too bloody. The serious competition process is written in an ordinary way, and there are also some family ethics dramas and love soap opera plots mixed in. . .

Holy shit, there is no eunuch in this book. It's unreasonable.

In the previous version, the main character traveled through time because his mother froze to death without caring about him. Now that the main character is rich, he is licking his face and looking for his mother, which makes him angry just looking at it.