Mortal's Mediation Cave Heaven

Space ripening medicinal materials + flag transmission + advanced skills plug-ins, promotion is like drinking water, but being targeted by senior monks, the plot and setting are relatively reasonable

The author's writing style is very good. The words are very comfortable and the characters are cute and vivid.

Personally, I still think it's a bit perverted to wear a man wearing a woman 🤫. In the same way, he can dress as a male of the Chen family. In the same plot, excluding the person named Lu, it doesn't matter whether he accepts Chen Qiaoqian or not. This man wears a woman. If he adopts a male favorite later, this person will not be able to accept it. 😅

Do not accept Han Li 😏

Let's take a look at the protagonist's plug-ins: 1. Know the mortal plot 2. There is a space that can accelerate the elixir 3. You can anchor multiple locations and transmit each other directly through the space 4. There are many exercises that can be directly practiced from the Qi refining period to the Daluo Jinxian system. Secret skills, as well as many secret books involving alchemy, weapon refining, formations, talisman making, puppets, spiritual plants, etc. Really, earth, magic, companions, and wealth have already taken up several categories, and even in the fairy world, they are the best ones. If they are too open, they are invincible.

The protagonist of this book was a man in his previous life, and he was reincarnated as a girl with the memories of his previous life. He has a certain male mentality, but he has spent more time growing up as a woman in this life, so he prefers female protagonists. The tone is single, light at best, and I don't know how to write emotional scenes. It is unlikely that there will be any romance scenes. Newbie trying it out, sorry for any inconveniences.

The beginning of this book is quite nonsense. A cultivator at the fourth level of qi training becomes very tired after walking a little and starts sweating. Isn't this nonsense? Doesn't Reiki have the effect of strengthening physical fitness? Is it possible that after cultivating to the golden elixir stage, my physical fitness is still the same as that of ordinary people? Isn't this funny? How can an ordinary person fight with his physical fitness? Does it all rely on magic to fight? Ordinary people's physical fitness and nerve response should be quite slow. In this case, there is still a fight. Normally, a person who has cultivated in the Golden Elixir stage can compete with the Foundation Stage simply by relying on physical fitness. The right way to cultivate immortality is to fully sublimate the body and soul. You cannot cultivate immortality and only have magic power. Your body and soul are still ordinary people. This setting is nonsense.

If you write a fanfic if you don't read the original work or say you don't understand the original work, I'm still convinced. The basic settings often make mistakes. Are you afraid of being trolled to death? This is similar to if you want to be a chef but you don't know how to cook. It's too careless, just take advantage of the heat.

It's either Dan or Lily, don't be disgusting and just marry

I've read about ten chapters. To put it simply, it's awkward if you can't take on the role of a female character. Most of the readers of this type of book are men. I believe there should be many book friends who feel this way. I don't know if the author is a man or a woman. If you write it for fun, feel free. If you want to write well, I suggest you go to the female channel to write it.

Isn't it going to be cold? It's too hung up. Go directly to Zhutianben otherwise you won't be able to write.

At the late stage of foundation building at the age of 20, do you really think that everyone else is a bastard...

How did this escalate so quickly? The 59th free chapter is about Nascent Soul. What kind of plot can this have? I originally came here to watch this alternative protagonist, but this is the result? There are only a few words in total so far. I wish you success. I'm withdrawing.

The first and middle stages of this book seemed okay. Abandoned after ascending. To be honest, 80% of mortal book lovers pursue ascending to the spiritual world. After watching one episode, I almost never watched it. This way there is no sense of immersion. It would be better to lose contact while ascending. Then transfer to the flow of all heavens and realms.

At the beginning, the female channel is a bit strong and a bit discouraging. Don't forget that you are a man's soul. Later, I hope that the character of the protagonist will not be soft, but have an opinion, a personality, a firm heart, and no partner. Say important things three times, otherwise it will be very poisonous and will definitely dissuade a lot of people. Okay Find a few female companions, or you can act alone, and become an iceberg beauty who is decisive in killing, outstanding in personality, and unrestrained. "You can refer to "The Cruel Emperor". If you can do the above points, it will be difficult for this book to become popular. This is a suggestion from a reader who has read dozens of mortal fan fiction.

No, brother, the rhythm is so well written, don't be a eunuch

In fact, it doesn't matter if a woman is cultivating immortality or something, and it doesn't matter if she is more open-minded. The most important thing is that the protagonist cannot be too promiscuous. In Tiannan, if you take the thousand-year elixir, you will be targeted. In the Sea of ​​Stars, the protagonist will go too far and even take more, but you will still be targeted. Will you still be like this in Dajin? There are many great monks in Dajin, and there are also several transformed gods. Even if you escape the human world, there will be more big bosses in the spiritual world. Your spiritual grass must be tens of thousands to one hundred thousand years old. Don't you want to sell it all over the spiritual world?

Except for the fact that his cultivation level was upgraded too fast, everything else was okay. A 200-year-old Nascent Soul such as Han Li could shock others. There seemed to be a Yunmeng Mountain who had a pill that could be formed within a hundred years and could shock three sects. Even the elders in the Nascent Soul stage were talking about it.

Personally, I feel that the fandom is second only to "Demon Fairy Han Li", come on

Is there any book of this type? Is there a cave among mortals?

The rest of it is boring. I walked around Xiaolingtian and didn't know what it was about.

It was fast-paced at the beginning, but after Xiao Lingtian, it slowed down. The plot was only so small, and I was not used to it.

It took me two fucking days to finish reading it. Did you tell me about the eunuch?

Stop being a eunuch, I will continue writing this week, I will order them all later

{"NickName":"Book Friends 2021030110413096954","UserId":319572583} The author writes a novel about a mortal transforming into a purple spirit and it will become popular.

The pace is too slow, we need to speed up 😊