Douluo: Flame of Hidden Mountain

Haven't watched it yet. Keep it first. But if there are too many peripherals, no one will probably read it. Because there is nothing Douluo about it.

Nothing about Ornn at all.

Quite a novice. This is the first book by the author.

Since it is a Douluo fan, don't describe too much about the place of writing. Just write a level 99 guardian of the inheritance projection place. And don't write about the inheritors of "Thunder Ice". Are they the protagonists or the protagonists? What level should use the same inheritance as the protagonist? Unless it's the protagonist's woman, it's really too poisonous for a Douluo native to get the inheritance of a bear.

Tsk tsk tsk, it's a bit hard to read. The author must make sure whether you are writing Douluo fandom or lol. You have to arrange the plot reasonably. At present, there are already too many lol elements introduced. I hope you can continue writing 🙂

Overall, if the level of writing can be maintained, then it's okay.

How can the protagonist beat a bear without awakening? And there's no need to forcefully lean on the protagonist, right? Even the awakened people have to come out with Su Yunhai. Tang San's name is Su Yuntao, and the protagonist's name is Su Yunhai when he awakens. You have created a story that you like in your mind, but you have not considered the rationality, or even carefully checked for bugs.

You've made me even wonder whether you are League of Legends or Douluo Continent

Is the author still updating? In fact, this is okay, for Douluo fans. There's no need to care about other people's opinions