Archmage of Hogwarts

The beginning was good, but it started to fall apart when we got to Hogwarts, digging too many holes. The original heroine was already baffling, and the sister's line was very unnecessary. The protagonist has a weak sense of existence and does not study magic seriously, which is a waste of magic talent.

He's really just the Riddler. . When I see HP fans, I want to support them. . . After reading the introduction, I felt like I didn't want to read it. .

Don't think of online literature as traditional literature. These are two categories. What the hell are sister and Snape? They suddenly added drama. Sorry, I just passed the Chinese language. I can't understand it. I don't want to read it. Goodbye.

Shen Nong Tests the Poison If you can accept the BT murderer as the heroine, it is the lunatic in Orphans, and you can watch it with gritted teeth. I really don't understand how an adult with a sound outlook could fall in love with a perverted murderer and not have nightmares when he sleeps at night. The most important thing is that the orphan complains that the heroine becomes more ordinary as she grows up...

This kind of book is written for the author himself to read

I've read more than 40 chapters, but I don't understand much. Maybe it's because I haven't seen a movie with a female protagonist, and I can't figure out what the heroine is doing? I feel that the main plot is not clear at all. At first I thought it was going to take a third path different from Dumbledore and Grindelwald, but suddenly there were more scenes of my sister in the background, and they were so inexplicable that it felt like a third-rate romance drama And the title of the book is Archmage. I thought it wanted to reflect the erudition and wisdom of the mage. As a result, the protagonist is neither willing to learn nor does it reflect the role of the golden finger. The protagonist even doesn't know much about his golden finger. The protagonist is written like a background board compared to the supporting characters.

I'm very confused about the purpose of bringing Esther in to be the heroine... Isabella Fuhrman's appearance has been unbeatable from childhood to adulthood, and she is still of a type that is increasingly unbeatable... If you just want to choose a fantasy-seeking heroine who is obsessed, sinister, bitchy and selfish, then there are too many such characters to choose from in American movies and TV series that like to depict the dark side of human nature... Can you choose a good-looking one? Reader: "This Ollie stinks so much"💔 The author of Yingming Shenwu: "Well, I know this Ollie stinks"👌 "Then I will shape it into a dish and serve it in front of you"💪👍

There are many poisonous points, the protagonist looks like a fool, and the author also created a heroine with antisocial personality. So fucking disgusting

I was quite happy watching it at first, until the heroine of Orphan's Revenge appeared... I originally thought the Hermione type of heroine was boring, but now I think it's acceptable. Not to mention anything else, it's not a big problem with my sister, but I really can't handle it because of the orphan's complaint. See you again👋🏻

Fan fiction extremely weakens the protagonist's sense of existence, I might as well read the original work. After all, your original supporting characters are definitely not as exciting as the original work, are you right about the author?

This book has everyone except the protagonist and the three little ones. The protagonist is a fool and his IQ is insufficient. The author obviously wants to dig a hole, but his writing skills are simply not strong enough.

I just hope I don't make the protagonist a fool.

Good guy, I just call him good guy. Look at the introduction... The author is an old Riddler! Read the book review... I'm sorry, I was wrong, you are the Riddlers Summary: I have no idea of ​​reading the table of contents.

It's obviously Harry Potter, but he's digging holes all over the place. What the hell are Sister Pigfoot and Snape doing?

Why don't you change the introduction? The introduction really feels a bit like The Riddler.

The book is okay, the writing style, and the plot settings are okay The foreshadowing and main line are also very clear, but maybe the author prefers suspense and thriller works, which leads to some suspense and depressive atmosphere in his own writing style. At least it seems very depressing to me. Although I have read suspense-style hp fanfics, they are still different from this one. To put it simply, first of all, the author did not pay attention to the details of the original text. This is okay. After all, he is a fan, so he can do whatever he wants with the secondary design. But I just felt it was too depressing. Secondly, the author did not know enough about the HP world, which made it not read like an HP fan. Of course, the book itself is good. Secondly, the author has buried too many foreshadowings. Of course, it may be that I am not familiar with some of the plots in horror movies. They all seem to be foreshadowing. To put it simply, I can't understand it and can't get into it. As mentioned above, this book gave me the feeling that I just can't understand it and it is too depressing. But as I said, from the setting, writing and plot, it is undoubtedly a good book, but it is not suitable for me.

There is obviously something wrong with the author. He had to forcefully add a perverted and disgusting heroine from Orphan's Revenge to be the heroine, and the interaction was also extremely disgusting. After reading dozens of chapters, I couldn't bear it anymore. I have to complain a few words, otherwise I feel uncomfortable, damn it!

I read the comments, then looked at the number of fans and words... Well... How should I put it, if you write it for yourself, it doesn't matter. If you want to do it as a business, you have to follow the preferences of the person who buys it, right? Not following the plot? You can change it but don't not follow me. Wouldn't it be bad if I didn't follow you and write original fantasy? How many of those who came to see the fanfic did not come to the fanfic to make up for their regrets after reading the original work? And the most popular character is Hermione. Absolutely. If you don't want to be a heroine, you can create your own one instead... Business is popularity, and the most important thing is to meet the taste of most people. Some three or five people hate to care about him. Wait, just like the heroine of the Naruto fanfic is best to be Hinata, it must not be Sakura. It's the same as Ace Whitebeard in the Pirates fanfic. It's just because the character is popular. If it doesn't meet the taste, it means irreversible poison. Most people think that poison can be good?

When I read Chapter 41, the only feeling I felt was that I felt aggrieved, very aggrieved, and the follow-up was unclear. The heroine felt that the protagonist had been domesticated into an animal, and the protagonist's sister also wanted the protagonist's blood to make things, so she started digging holes like crazy. Orphans complained. This movie was inherently weird. It was okay if I hadn't seen it, but it was really uncomfortable if I had. It was hard not to think that it was subtly domesticating in disguise. All professors, the protagonist's sister, and parents should know what the heroine is. No matter who asked, the strength of the protagonist was not explained clearly at all. I just saw Chapter 41, and I couldn't stand it anymore, or I just felt aggrieved, so fucking aggrieved. Isn't this a fool? If anyone has watched it to the end or has watched it too much, I would like to thank you for spoiling the story. I feel really bad about this plot. Don't fight with me. I really can't fight with you.

I just read a little bit. Although I agree with the fact that wizards specialize in Muggle knowledge, I don't think a teacher hired from the outside (who is also Dumbledore's friend) will tell you that you are not suitable for Hogwarts. This will be a waste of your talents. . . . . Also, regarding the arrogance of wizards, except for Muggle wizards, they should not pay attention to Muggle knowledge. Even Muggle wizards will identify more with wizards under the influence of the general environment. There should not be the saying that I will bring you 13th grade Muggle books. I just read Chapter 4 and heard that the heroine in the back was an orphan. I didn't see it and didn't dare to say more. Anyway, that's how I felt in the early stages. In addition, I didn't pay attention to whether the protagonist was a time traveler. If so, I was very surprised why he didn't learn Occlumency, but instead showed his weird thoughts to others? Is it really the author who gives me the aura of immortality?