The Silver Dragon Emperor

Invited by the author, I would like to comment: Good points: The description of family relationships is pretty good. In the context of the starting point where most of the dragon stories are about five-color dragons fighting alone, a metal dragon story with a family and a background is very valuable. Disadvantages: A common mistake made by newbies in online novels. The perspective is always God's perspective, and there is no sense of immersion. The development of events jumps and feels discontinuous. After reading one chapter, I don't know what the protagonist's character is. Is it rational, lively, or middle grade? There are also some descriptive things. I re-edited your first chapter, because I didn't know what your outline was, so I simply revised it. If I had written it, I would have added a more obvious main line, strengthened the character of the protagonist, etc. Half asleep and half awake, Leon felt like he was wrapped in a warm liquid, as if he was in his mother's arms. What's going on? Am I dreaming or have I been swept away by the water? The narrow environment around him made him subconsciously want to stretch his body, but he ran into a "wall". Is this an eggshell? Before the confused Leon could ask three philosophical questions, a vast amount of information rushed into his mind. True Dragon Heritage! The memory he received instantly gave him a huge impact. A large amount of information containing dragon history, combat skills, and various geography, biology, and other knowledge were quickly stuffed into his mind, and they continued to consolidate and become part of his memory. Silver Dragon... Bach Plane... Holy Land of Frost and Snow... Information flowed through his mind like flowing water, and only these few words stayed in his shallow consciousness. Leon quickly understood his situation - he became a silver dragon still in the dragon egg. What an unexpected surprise! The little silver dragon in the shell was secretly happy Having been suppressed by life for a long time in his previous life, he always dreamed that he could travel through time and become a powerful creature, without being bound by 996 or having to worry about endless worries such as mortgages and car loans. Now it's finally happened. I don't know if it was because Leon was still just a developing embryo. Before he could finish his excitement, a burst of fatigue hit him, causing him to fall into a deep sleep again. I don't know how long it took before Leon woke up again. The time of birth has come. In the Bach plane, this dragon is here, haha! Leon exerted all his strength and kept tapping the egg shell with his small claws. Under his unremitting efforts, a crack soon appeared in the dragon egg. Click! As he continued to exert force, the cracks became more and more numerous and bigger. Finally, as Leon raised his head gently, a silvery light came into his eyes. "Leon Bellocate..." After announcing his true name loudly to the world, he took a deep breath of the magic-rich air, opened his mercury-like eyeballs, and looked at the surrounding environment. This is a huge palace, and everything you see is bright silver. Before he could take a closer look, Leon felt a shadow envelope him. When he looked up, he saw a huge silver dragon head looking at him happily. This is an adult silver dragon. There was also a silver dragon of similar size next to him, also looking at him. He didn't feel scared. The warmth of the same blood coming from the other person made him feel safe, and he began to look at the father and mother of the dragon curiously. The horns are huge, reaching straight into the sky, the pupils are light silver, as clear as water, the scales all over the body are exuding a silver metallic luster, a pair of huge bat wings are close to the sides, the slender dragon tail is covered with silver ice crystals, and a cluster of ice crystal bone spurs is formed at the tip of the tail. So handsome! Will I become like this in the future? Leon's eyes were filled with little stars. The two silver dragons are both very large in size, with a body length of more than 400 meters, which makes Leon, who was just born and only one meter long, look very small. "Oh!" The smaller female silver dragon raised her head proudly as she looked at Leon emerging from the shell "Enlek, look, how healthy our little son is." "Yes!" The slightly larger dragon dad on the other side nodded in agreement. "I didn't expect that just over a thousand years later, we would give birth to another son! Although we only had one dragon egg this time, we were very lucky to give birth to a true dragon." The reproduction of giant dragons does not end with laying dragon eggs and waiting for them to hatch. Many giant dragons will eventually become dragon beasts with extremely low intelligence because they are not fully developed in dragon eggs and do not receive the inheritance of true dragons. This kind of dragon beast is not recognized by the real dragon at all, and will be regarded as a shame by the real dragon. If the five-color dragon gives birth to a dragon beast, the best result is to be thrown directly out of the cave and left to fend for itself. If the metal dragon gives birth to a dragon beast, it will be treated as a pet at most. It will be thrown out of the nest after being raised for a few days. If the baby dragon in the dragon egg develops normally and becomes a real dragon, then it will have a completely different fate. Even a five-color dragon with an evil nature will raise the baby dragon until it is a teenager. The easiest way to distinguish a true dragon from a dragon beast is to see whether it can pronounce its true name after birth. If you can pronounce your real name, it means that the inheritance of the dragon clan is normal, and you must be a real dragon, otherwise it is a dragon beast. The chance of a dragon egg hatching into a real dragon or a dragon beast is about 50-50. Sometimes if you are unlucky, there will be several dragon eggs in a nest, all of which will be dragon beasts. Leon's dragon mother and father are very old and very powerful, so it is not easy for them to give birth to children. Before Leon hatched, they were also worried that the dragon egg they had conceived for thousands of years would give birth to a dragon beast. They had seen this feeling of failed hope from other dragon parents, and they really didn't want this misfortune to happen to them. Metal dragons are kind-hearted in nature, unlike five-color dragons who raise children just to fulfill rigid targets. They attach great importance to family ties. If Leon is really a dragon beast, it will be a torment for them whether they abandon him or continue to raise him. Fortunately, Leon's birth and his real name completely dispelled their worries. "Mother and father, your well-behaved son says hello to you!" Leon thought for a while, but still said hello to his parents in this life in dragon language. Unexpectedly, Father Long and Mother Long were immediately shocked. Although true dragons are born with inheritance, these inheritances also need to be digested slowly. A newborn dragon only has the IQ of a child of a few years old, and can only speak a few simple syllables. Apart from its real name, it cannot speak a smooth and complete sentence at all. And his son actually said hello to them in dragon language fluently. Bahamut is up! Looking at the surprised father and mother, the little silver dragon also imitated his mother and raised his head proudly. He is not afraid of the suspicion of Father Long and Mother Long. He himself is extremely talented and his money should shine. Even if he makes himself matte, it will be useless. Besides, he is not resurrecting a dead body. Even if the true god comes, there will be no abnormality. In addition, most metal dragons are kind-hearted in nature, and their parents will not harm them because of their special behavior. At most, they will be considered as alien dragons, and they may even be specially trained. After all, he is a good baby dragon who belongs to His Majesty Bahamut, and he is not of the blood of the Five-headed Dragon Queen. There are many alien dragons born from the blood of this five-headed dragon queen, and there are many colorful alien dragon predecessors who shine in the multiverse. For example, Deathwing, Frostwing, Winter Lord, Thunder Tyrant, Red Dragon Emperor, Green Dragon Doctor... The emergence of these alien dragons has made the dragon clan, which already has a high status in the multiverse, even more powerful. In today's era, it has gained the reputation of "the true god who lives in the world" and "the darling of the creator of the world". Of course, among all dragon clans, except for the five-headed dragon queen who is unhappy, other dragons have an attitude of awe or welcome towards the alien dragon. Because although these seniors are more powerful than the other, they do not listen to the orders of the Five-headed Dragon Queen at all, and even openly confront and humiliate the Five-headed Dragon Queen! Although the Five-Headed Dragon Queen is also an elder of the Dragon Clan, facing these rising stars of the Dragon Clan, she can only withdraw sadly. As for their metal dragon clan, they have also produced several mutant dragons, one is known as the Red Gold Dragon King, and the other is honored as the Forbidden Silver Dragon. Now, we have to add another handsome dragon king, Leon! Therefore, he is not worried about the consequences of his Guolong wisdom being exposed. "Treya, did I hear you correctly? Our child is greeting us?" Dad Dragon dug his ear holes with his paws in disbelief. "Yes, you heard it right." The petite dragon mother on the side also rubbed her beautiful dragon eyes with her paws. "I was born with powerful wisdom. Could it be that we gave birth to a strange dragon?" "Maybe so." "Oh!" Dad Dragon happily covered his heart with his paws. "Such a good thing can happen to us, which makes me happier than becoming a god." "It is my honor to make my parents feel happy." Seeing his parents so happy, Leon, who was standing aside, also interjected. "Oh!" Father Long exclaimed in exaggerated praise, just like an old father seeing his son get perfect marks in the college entrance examination: "Leon, our baby, your wisdom shines like the stars in the sky, you Your tongue is smarter than the angels on the Holy Mountain. Thank you Dragon God for giving you to us. " The Dragon God here is not the Lord of the North Wind, the Platinum Dragon King Bahamut, but the ancestor of the Dragon Clan, the late Nine-faced Dragon God, Io. Mother Long looked at Leon, who was chewing the eggshells, with a loving look on his face. "Dear baby, are you feeling hungry, do you want something to eat?" I have simply revised it. Because it is in a hurry, there are still many shortcomings. The author can understand and improve the creation of new chapters. Wish the fire🤓

Silver Dragon

How do legendary dragons compare to legendary humans? As long as the giant dragon flies in the sky, humans can't catch up, right? Even if humans reach legend and can fly, they can't be more flexible and faster than dragons, right?

This setting is rubbish. The human race doesn't have any legendary dragon that can compete with the dragon race. When it reaches the human empire, it will be the pinnacle of existence. Then why the hell is the human race still alive? It has been extinct long ago. What are you doing with the five-color dragon?

To be honest, I still like the five-color dragon. I don't know why, maybe it's because the authors there are more awesome.

I'm curious as to what use the protagonist's artifact, the Silver Mirror, is at the demigod or true god stage? To play a holy realm, you have to use all your cards, and it seems to have been emphasized several times that you can only copy enemies below the god level. Will this artifact be useless once it reaches the god level? Isn't it a bit incompatible with the quality of its artifact?

This translation is so disgusting to me, I can't stand it anymore, so I'm leaving.

The dialogue in this article has the feeling of being translated into a film... I was instantly moved and speechless.

The Red Dragon Emperor, the evil dragon turned into a good dragon The Silver Dragon Emperor, the good dragon turned into an evil dragon ,,,

I hope you don't use the five-color dragon as experience points and stepping stones.