Cultivation of Immortality Starts with Time Management

Youzhu Acceleration Plan will start a fairy tale light novel seamlessly after finishing "Girl, There's Something Wrong About You". Firstly, the new book is planned to be about Wei Guangzheng as the protagonist, and secondly, the number of female protagonists is limited to 6. But the title of this book smells like crumbs at first glance, tsk. The protagonist travels to this world, is selected by the Kunlun Mirror, and is given the task of finding the Nuwa Stone and saving the world. The Nuwa Stone is divided into six parts, so the protagonist has to play six different personas and search for fragments of the Sky-Mending Stone in six places. The purpose of playing the character is to maintain the talent brought by "Through the Looking Glass", and to follow Novikov's self-consistency principle through time and space. According to this setting, this book is neither a clone style of "using clones to pick up girls" nor a mask style of "girls fall in love with masks". Instead, the only male protagonist (not a clone, not a mask) travels among various sects by playing a persona (same body, same face). The author calls himself Aizen-ryu. This book is about real hard-core time management and six-line operation, instead of going out of the mountain to quickly find the Sky-Mending Stone fragments in these six places after becoming invincible. Qiu Changtian is the direct disciple of the headmaster of Kunlun Taiqing Sect and the chief disciple of this generation. His character is invincible and his talent is "bright heart". Her junior sister Xu Yinglian is extremely talented and has a cold temperament, but she can't stand it in front of the protagonist. Qiu Changtian pretends to be invisible in front of her every day to refresh her character, which arouses her high morale. The main plot includes teaching as a teacher, gaining experience and making money. Among several characters, he is relatively well-off, and can provide various spiritual stones, Taoist techniques, etc. To other characters. Ling Yunpo is a disciple of the Qingluo Peak of the Qing sect on Shu Mountain. There are only three people in the entire Qingluo Peak. The character is unyielding, and the talent is "natural sword bone". Because the master was seriously injured and in retreat, and he and his senior sister An Zhisu depended on each other, the spiritual stones were also in short supply. An Zhisu was nicknamed the "Grass-cutting Sword Immortal". He killed many of his fellow Shushan disciples, and his reputation was very bad. The main plot includes fetching swords in the sword pool and sword competition in Shushan. This character has a lot of pressure at the beginning, and the culture of cultivating gu in Shushan is a bit underworld. Luo Yan newly worshiped Penglai Yuqing Temple, seemingly unable to restrain a chicken (in fact, the realm, Taoism, and magic weapons of all characters are common). The persona is hypocritical, and the talent is "once you hear it, you will realize it a thousand times." Miss Shi Liulishi was the most favored, innocent and in short, very cute. She once suspected that Luo Yan was a spy, but later recommended her to her father as his apprentice. The main plots include the entry-level written examination and the refining of weapons and cauldrons. The atmosphere in Penglai is very good, but the plot line has not yet unfolded. It has only been serialized for less than a month, with only 100,000 words. The next few characters have not been released yet, and may appear in the Demon Cult and the Monster Clan. The three major orthodox religions also give people completely different perceptions and are not homogeneous. I am very much looking forward to the follow-up development. Although Youzhu is short, it is stable and not watery. In the later stage, it will even start an acceleration plan and not be sloppy. If the number of female protagonists can be stabilized at less than 6, it should be easier to control the subsequent plot, and it will not be too big and difficult to wrap up. The characteristic of the male protagonist of Youzhu is disdain, and disdain means there is no internal flavor. I don't know whether the author is disdainful, but the male protagonist's disdain for the new book is once again off the charts. What is crumbs? My understanding is that the male protagonist has no time to love his children, and the main plot is other things, such as going home (meeting his mother), surviving (treating diseases/maintaining the family), and saving the world (the road to immortality), so the male protagonist is very urgent "to become stronger." But because of the author's will, the male protagonist will get to know the female protagonists, and the female protagonists will gradually fall in love with the male protagonist. The female protagonists will hint or even confess to the male protagonist, and there may be less intense Shura fields, but at this time the male protagonist cannot respond. It wasn't until the end of the novel that a little external force, such as the state's order, the mother's arrangement, or the backstabbing of a magic weapon, brought the hero and heroine together quickly. The male protagonist of this book revealed this personally. He explained his views on the several female protagonists to the Kunlun Mirror, indicating that trust and dependence are the behaviors of the weak. He will only become a strong monster and will never stop moving forward until he reaches the top. The so-called saving the world is just a pure exchange of interests to obtain the peerless talent of cultivation. Kunlun's mirror is broken. After all, she is also a girl (a true heroine). So she, who is supposed to support the male protagonist unconditionally, will occasionally make mistakes and let the female protagonists realize the true face of this guy. If you can accept such a disdainful male protagonist, you might as well follow it from the new issue. If you can't accept such a disdainful male protagonist, then you should read it immediately and criticize it.

Shushan in Kunlun's eyes: Sword Madman Penglai in Kunlun's eyes: nerd Kunlun in Shushan's eyes: melons in the greenhouse Penglai in Shushan's eyes: playing support Shushan in Penglai's eyes: the reckless man Kunlun in Penglai's eyes: the Riddler

After three books, each one is more like an assembly line text than the last, which is too serious. . . The rhythm is long and uninteresting. After forming a first-grade golden elixir, it started to turn into several timelines with the same plot over and over again. It was supposed to be a coordination of multiple timelines, but instead of making them coordinate, it ended up being a boring plot that was repeated many times. I finally cracked Emei in one go. I thought it would be a whole volume, but it ended after a few chapters. I kept up with the updates all the way, but I just felt that the complexity and simplicity were inappropriate. The battle between good and evil was meaningless, with both sides sitting on the podium doing boring things like pretending to be slapping people in the face, but when it came to the heart-pounding story of returning to Emei to save the senior sister, it was finished in just a few chapters. The battle of wits is child's play, and the fighting power is strange. They are both superior in skill to the others, but sometimes they feel inseparable. At least the heroines at the beginning are still alive, but as we get to the back, they feel like they have lost their true form, as if they were walking around with labels. The second generation Shi Liuli felt like he had become a tool in the management of Tiangongfang, and the relationship between husband and wife was as light as water. I have read all the chapters of An Jisu twice in retrospect, and I feel that An Jisu has less and less presence, like a pendant. I have no memory of the others. If I hadn't counted them on my fingers, I would have been completely unable to remember Xu Yinglian. Ever since he broke the Zhuxian Sword Formation, this one has been like an automatic arrogant machine, just saying a few words over and over again. The plot is also like running water. The stable upgrading of the secret realm has no ripples. It is always very big in the early stage. The development of the soaring cannon in the later stage begins to accelerate the pace of upgrading crazily as soon as the golden elixir is entered. When the baby is born, it is difficult to feel the huge benefits brought by the difficulty of the first-grade golden elixir. Cang Qing has reached the law level. At least he has outstanding law skills and cooperative benefits. His fellow R4s also have their moods changing as the strength of their forces changes. After a girl reaches the fifth rank, at least her political power will increase significantly, and fights will come and go. The upgrading of this book is more like marking the numerical level, and the function of upgrading is to accumulate skill points and continuously upgrade existing skills. The skill list can be seen at a glance. This book is very streamlined, and the supporting characters are not eye-catching. When Cyan Hood died, she can still remember Hood's last words and the identity of the lord of Askberg Village After the girl opened her eyes, although there was a Titan Soldier But the limitations of the Titan Soldiers are there. It is not impossible to open high-level Titan Soldiers, and it can pass the plot smoothly, and it will not be directly pushed to the throne halfway through. As soon as this book Su Ming came out, the immortals were chopped to pieces like melons and vegetables. The biggest feeling is that they can just open the state and grab the sky patch, so there is no need to lurk. Although the girl has a strong smell, she is still pretty good at following up. Cang Qing even watched it two or three times, and the whole world structure was clear. This book feels more like it is tasteless and a pity to abandon. It is a pity that I have read it for so long.

"Senior brother, the clan is pressing for our marriage again." Xu Yinglian entered Qiu Changtian's cave and asked, half distressed and half expectant. Although the clan's behavior made her feel that she was rushing to further connect with her senior brother, she did want to take this opportunity to further test his senior brother's intentions. Ever since Headmaster Ziwei made it clear some time ago that she would pass on the position of Headmaster to her senior brother, she has always had a bad feeling in her heart. It's not that she is unhappy with her master's choice. Over the years, she has long accepted the fact that her senior brother is better than her, and she no longer even wants to catch up. Instead, she has become 'as long as she can stand by her senior brother's side'; but recently, her senior brother has always given people the illusion that he will leave at any time. "There's no need to worry." Qiu Changtian could roughly guess what the Xu family was thinking, but for the sake of his own plan, he still wanted to answer this way, but when he saw Xu Yinglian's unhappy face, he decided to change his mind. "But if you are willing, junior sister, there is no harm in getting married as soon as possible." Partly to deal with it, and partly to predict that Xu Yinglian's temperament would never take the initiative to express his desire to get married as soon as possible. Qiu Changtian decided to respond in this way, but the subsequent development really surprised him. "Well, senior brother, there is an auspicious day this month, how about we get married?" Although the rosiness on his cheeks could no longer be concealed, Xu Yinglian insisted on finishing the sentence. That premonition gave her too much pressure, and even though she was so shy, she wanted to make it clear. "Okay then." It was completely beyond his expectation, and Qiu Changtian didn't know how to evade it. 'Hey, you agreed now, what will happen then? ' Kunlun Jing asked immediately. 'There is no other way but to agree first. When the time comes, execute your previously planned escape plan in advance. ' 'Then if you agree to Junior Sister Xu's wedding, are you going to abandon her and leave directly, disdainful person! ' 'Shut up, Broken Mirror! Do you think I want to, instead of getting married to Junior Sister Xu and then getting away, I might as well just do it. ' 'Then are you really willing to give it up? ' After a brief silence, Chen Guanshui finally gave his answer: "Qiu Changtian may be reluctant to let go, but I, Chen Guanshui, have no choice." However, where he could not see, Kunlun Mirror finally made up his mind. Xu Yinglian, who still didn't know about this, was slightly calmed down by his senior brother's answer. "Senior brother, I remember when we escaped that wedding, I said that although the process was flawed, at least the result was okay. But now I don't think so. It should be said that maybe the process is not perfect, but the result is indeed the best. I can see the moon in the water and the moon in the sky, and my sweetheart and intimate person are the same person." Even if she had made up her mind, it was still difficult to say such words, but she finally said it. "Senior brother, husband, I like you, I love you, then, do you love me?" Since the answer has been given on marriage, the answer at this time is irrelevant. Qiu Changtian thought so, and therefore gave a direct response. "Junior sister, I love you." Even though he had made up his mind, Qiu Changtian was still touched, and the moment he answered, he was stunned. In such an answer, no matter how much it is, it is always sincere. After getting the answer he wanted, Xu Yinglian once again mustered up the courage to hug his senior brother and kiss him deeply. Qiu Changtian was unable and reluctant to break away for a while. After walking out of senior brother's cave, Xu Yinglian's face was red, but the corners of her mouth had an uncontrollable upward curl. 2 months later "Master Qingyang," Jian Qingnan said with a sad face and saluted Xu Changqing who came to visit. "Senior Sister Xu... Hasn't left Senior Brother Qiu's cave yet." "I understand." Xu Changqing's face was also very ugly. Whether it was as an investment from the family or because of private contacts, Qiu Changtian's death made him very unexpected and very sad. At this time, the situation in the entire realm was complicated, and both the Kunlun and Xu families needed someone to step forward. However, Qiu Changtian died unexpectedly, and his little Phoenix was also unable to recover. He really didn't know what to do. But the object of their worries was not as low as they thought. Xu Yinglian was very calm at this time. She was really heartbroken when she saw her senior brother die, but now her sadness subsided slightly. On the one hand, she did not want to believe that her senior brother would die so easily. On the other hand, she did notice some doubts. At this time, she began to carefully review the entire process. First, the eternally burning Sun Fire at the Realm Gate was extinguished, and the Sun True Sword was suspected to have been taken away. Then she was seriously injured by a dragon from the East Emperor Demon Realm. Therefore, she was unable to arrive at the battlefield in time, and only saw her senior brother die. In the last scene, An Zhisu of Shushan was also seriously injured by the Demon Lord Wei Dongliu and was unable to participate in the battle. Ling Yunpo's revenge failed to find Wei Dongliu, only injuring his witches and several apprentices, and broke through their mountain gate. Long Hu, the wife of the dragon in the East Emperor Demon Realm, found Penglai Shi Liuli for some reason. By various coincidences, no one close to the people who died in that battle showed up. Kunlun Qiuchangtian, Shushan Lingyunpo, Penglai Luo Yan, Demon Lord Wei Dongliu, and Long Long from the Donghuang Demon Realm died together in the battle. If she didn't know about Long Hu, An The news about Zhisu and Shi Liuli may not necessarily be so suspicious, but adding these things together through the Xu family's intelligence capabilities seems too coincidental. What's more, she arrived a little late at the time, but for some reason, for a moment she felt that these people were so similar, even though they used different skills, Taoism, and flying swords. Even if it's just for a moment, it's like an illusion. "Senior brother, did you lie to me?" Xu Yinglian thought that his senior brother might not be dead, and the pain in his heart eased slightly, but another kind of sadness surged in his heart. However, even if her senior brother had lied to her, at least he was still there. "No matter what, I must find you." Thinking like this, Xu Yinglian drew a portrait and walked out of the room. "Senior Sister Xu!" Jian Qingnan was very surprised and delighted. "Send this painting to Master Qingyang and ask Kunlun and the Xu family to offer a reward together. I want to continue to retreat. If there is any news, I will send it to you immediately." "Is this? It looks like Senior Brother Qiu, but it is a little different?" Xu Yinglian did not explain any more, just walked into the cave and started to retreat. 'If senior brother is really lying to her, at least, she must have the strength to keep him the next time she sees him. ' "Senior brother, no matter what, I will definitely find you." In three months, the casual cultivators discovered that Kunlun, Shushan, Penglai, Demon Sect and even the Donghuang Demon Realm had successively offered rewards, and the portraits they gave were so similar.

Although I don't know how long it will take the author to further develop Shi Liuli's character, but I think Miss Shi Liuli should grow into version 3.0. The character development of this character is actually quite clear. Almost pinching Yue Lingshan all the way. In the beginning, he was innocent and ignorant of the dangers of the world, but now he has undergone drastic changes. He has suffered from PTSD and no longer trusts others. However, Yue Lingshan will not have a happy ending. Logically speaking, there should be a process of returning to nature, allowing Miss Shi to know that there is still sincerity in the world, so that she can put down the mask of a arrogant man and reopen her own defenses. (Then he was betrayed and killed by a naughty man (by mistake)) This 3.0 Change is particularly important for both the main plot and this love line. First of all, let's talk about the love story. The main reason why many book friends are dissatisfied with the 2.0 Version of Shi Liuli is that Liuli is no longer completely open to Luo Yan and is always suspicious of and wary of Luo Yan. Although the scumbag man is indeed a scumbag, one-liners in love are meant to be sweet, and these two people definitely cannot continue to maintain a state of being in a relationship where I'm on my guard against you and you're on my guard against me. In addition, from the perspective of character development, Liuli's psychological state is not so much mature as PTSD, with the unresolved knot of betrayal by her master and the violent death of her father in her heart. This knot is reflected in her relationship with Luo Yan, which is worrying about gains and losses, hoping to tie Luo Yan by playing the role of "wife" (I personally feel that this is also the soul pinching him Yue Lingshan). Untying this knot is a plot expectation of readers. If this is not done, not only will the character of Shi Liuli be unable to stand up, but the image of the male protagonist will also be basically destroyed (after all, that would be Lin Pingzhi's real hammer). Therefore, as far as this character is concerned, knowing the dangers of the world is not considered mature. Only after knowing the dangers of the world and understanding that there is true love in the world can he be truly mature. Secondly, from the main line, as the plot progresses and the identity of the protagonist is exposed, the protagonist and the five heroines must go through the emotional test of "betrayal" and survive this emotional test. Otherwise, logically speaking, the ending will be a nice boat explosion in the Shura Field or a direct breakup. However, the "betrayal" ptsd state of Shi Liuli in version 2.0 Is obviously unable to withstand this kind of emotional test. It is difficult for readers to imagine that there is enough emotional foundation between this version of Shi Liuli and the male protagonist to allow Shi Liuli to choose to maintain trust after being betrayed by the scumbag and go to the scumbag to find out the truth. Therefore, in order for the main plot to finally reach the harem ending, the character Shi Liuli must evolve to version 3.0 Before the male protagonist's identity is revealed, and truly open up to the male protagonist and have a heart-to-heart relationship (instead of showing an inexplicable smile to the male protagonist all the time). After all, it is impossible for Yue Lingshan and Lin Pingzhi to have a happy ending. Shi Liuli and Luo Yan need and must push their relationship to the level of true love. My humble opinion, please forgive me.

I really want to use the emoji about the national football team refunding money to describe the feeling after reading it. Most of the book depends on it. The story after the identity is exposed hangs the readers. Finally, when they eat what they have been waiting for for so long, they find that it is a twisted thing. This book also really pioneered a new way of writing. It used a very beautiful-looking bait to dangle the readers, and then in the final showdown it turned out to be a piece of shit, and the money that should have been earned was also earned.

My favorite of this book so far is indeed Senior Sister An! Who doesn't love a gentle and cute sister character? As the only monk in Qingluo Peak, before Lingyunpo became a disciple, Senior Sister An achieved the fame of the grass-cutting swordsman by herself as a weak woman, and supported the facade of Qingluo Peak. She is gentle and considerate, and only thinks of her junior brother wholeheartedly; she is also strong and determined, and will draw her sword against all odds for the one she loves. As a sword fairy, she does not lack the aura of the mortal world. Facing her father who abandoned her mother, she stubbornly only wanted to call him master; facing her subtle feelings for her junior brother, she would also be confused and hesitant. She is not only a ruthless mountain immortal with a sword, but also a girl who loves to drink and is shy when drunk. How can one not love such a senior sister?

I feel like it's not as well written as the first Cang Qing book, but it's much better than the second one.

How should I put it? The context of this plot about the dead father-in-law is relatively clear Youda has also discussed how to rationalize the harem before, and this is not difficult to see in the design of this book: how to solve the problems of various harems after the identity is exposed: patching up the sky is a righteousness, giving an excuse for emotional forgiveness, and the irreplaceability of these identities to the woman to a certain extent is the key to the success of the harem. Apart from the never-expanded Jiang Bai line, Qiu's beacon to her junior sister, Ling's interdependence with her senior sister, or Longhu's admiration for Long, these will prompt them to maintain the emotional connection with the protagonist as much as possible, and then advance to the Shura field where they love to see and hear. But there is one person who is different, and that is Miss Shi. She has an old father who dotes on her, and a group of senior brothers and sisters who are like family. In this way, even if she discovers that he is a mole in the middle of the fight with her junior brother, even if she chooses to forgive out of righteousness, she has a way out when facing the Shura Field, and she still has many other emotional support. So how to get her into the game? Youda gave the answer from the setting of Penglai. Penglai is rich but weak, so he prefers harmony, but it is also Penglai who is rich but weak, and becomes a breakthrough point for the Demon Sect. In the first round, the ghosts destroyed the family, and the image of the senior brothers and sisters who were like family gradually collapsed, and then added the loss of the father, and now to a certain extent, the only one left to rely on is the protagonist. Of course, there is no problem with the setting of the idea, but the sudden cut of the plot here feels a bit abrupt, but after all, I am not the author and I don't have an overall perspective. I don't know if there are any other considerations in arranging this paragraph here (manual 🐶

Looking at the character files, it should be that the five female protagonists all have a knife. Senior Sister An's last sentence is "It's hard to keep a heartless person." The yandere Senior Sister is a real hammer.

I think the writing of this book is actually quite interesting. I don't want to brag about it. At least the plot of each heroine is well written. I think the setting is quite good. Saving the world is very reasonable and well-founded. This also shows that at least in the early stage, it is completely understandable. As for the later stage, I said it was a bad ending, but in fact it didn't feel that bad. The whole book can be justified. It is said that Yuanying's combat power is broken when fighting against immortals. In this book, there is no other level between Yuanying and immortals. Now that he is holding a savior artifact, I think it is quite normal to cross the first level. The only thing I can say is that maybe many people want to see Shura Field. I really didn't put too much emphasis on the later stage. I think this level is enough. I can't really watch the "clone" with the head cut off... The ending is worse than just being in the lower world. At least there is no need to say how bad this book is.

I'm doing daily detoxification. Try harder! Master You, you are number one on the list 🤭

I like this book very much. The last time I followed it every day was still Da Feng, but the problem now is that five lines have been opened, and it feels a bit too much, and there are too many chapters to lay out a new character. As a result, Ling Poyun👀 Luo Yan and Wei Dongliu have almost not appeared recently, and the impression is somewhat diluted. All authors are now in Let several lines intersect. Junior Sister Xu meets Miss Shi, meets Witch Jiang, and later Qiu Changtian will meet Senior Sister An. It is indeed a good solution. However, I feel that there are too many characters after five plus. I think three to four are more ideal. I think six is a bit too much. Just a little personal suggestion, don't comment if you don't like it

It seems that many people want Miss Shi to stay the same and don't want her to grow up. What I want to say is that this is unrealistic. A good work will only be read if it leaves regrets. With the development of online writing, it can no longer simply meet the perfect requirements of readers. Just like ourselves, we were so energetic and energetic in our youth. But the burden of life has gradually erased our edges bit by bit, and we have gradually become silent in life. That's probably it. People should always grow up. Even the arrogant Shi Liuli should realize the cruelty of reality. I think it's good for Youzhu to write it down like this. Let the arrogant Miss Shi remain in our hearts. Maybe Shi Liuli after transformation is the real her.

Ah Jing wishes Dianniang a happy birthday!

Regarding the ending of this book, the original design was actually to have Chen Guanshui ascend to the sky, and then let them regret it for the rest of their lives. However, they felt that this was too twisted, so they later changed it to being forcibly pulled down to live a life without shame on the way to the sky throne. When it comes to this topic, we have to talk about the choice between "immortality" and "emotion". Because death is a topic that people cannot avoid, there are cultivation texts with the theme of "seeking immortality by any means necessary". I used to love reading this kind of novels when I was in high school. For a while, I even thought that "everyone in the fairy tales except immortality is inferior". But later I changed my mind because of Xian San, who "only envied mandarin ducks but not immortals", and slowly began to realize that "compared with being able to 'live longer', 'living happily' is more important." If you can achieve immortality by cutting off love relationships, I don't really like it anyway. Even though I have been watching for a long time, my thoughts are still unclear. What's the point? So for a while (before I wrote the book), I even thought about setting up such an open ending: let Chen Guanshui choose between "Ascension to Eternal Life" and "Ladies", and then end it when he is about to make a choice... But in the end I couldn't be cruel, hahaha, otherwise he would probably be sprayed to death. (The promises made by the author at the end of the last book and at the beginning of this book all turned out to be farts)

In the third year after the Donghuang Realm Gate was opened, the human race and the demon race entered an all-out war.                                              In the tenth year after the opening of the Donghuang Realm Gate, the righteous Sanqing and the Demon Sect implemented a limited alliance.        ， Penglai announced to retreat to the East China Sea to cultivate and recuperate, the Kunlun Sect and the Dragon Clan promoted a pilot supermarket where humans and monsters can live together, and the Shushan Sword Immortal is still hunting down Xiaoxiao who disturbs the human world. At the same time, cracks are regenerating in the alliance between good and evil, and the alliance that has finally been relaxed is about to fall apart. In the same year, due to the problem of resource depletion in the Eastern Emperor Realm, the Dragon Clan Alliance and the Phoenix Clan Alliance started to fight again. In the spring of the 100th year, the output of spiritual veins in the human world and the Eastern Emperor Realm dropped significantly. At the same time, unknown cracks appeared everywhere, which were suspected to be connected to the netherworld. For a time, rumors spread that the world was about to collapse, and it was rumored that only the secret realm of the Immortal Family could save itself. The tacit understanding was broken, and the war started again. In the 110th year, the East China Sea Islands retreat battle. Looking at the monster group that appeared out of nowhere in front of him, Luo Yan said: "Senior sister, you should leave first." "No" Shi Liuli responded firmly. "Senior sister, if you don't believe me, you have to believe in your hexagram. Didn't you say that our trip was safe?" Luo Yan responded to Miss Shi while silently setting up the formation. "But" before Miss Shi could finish her words, she was stopped by Luo Yan's hug. "It's okay, I'll catch up later." While hugging, Luo Yan hung the treasure bag tightly on Shi Liuli's waist. Before Shi Liuli could react to the sudden intimate gesture, several magic weapons flew out of the treasure bag and led Miss Shi to the army. "Junior brother, don't lie to me" "Senior sister, how could I lie to you" Shi Liuli looked at the figure in the distance, and a huge formation of light rose into the sky. In the 110th year, the blocking battle of the East China Sea Islands. [Although we suffered heavy losses, as long as we bring this treasure back, our clan should be able to survive the coming catastrophe. All this depends on your two highnesses] The leader of the dragon clan looked at Long Long and Long Hu who were resting in the rear. Longhu leaned against Long Long and was playing around, while Long Long gently stroked Longhu's hair "How could it be possible? Damn it, we have obviously taken a detour overseas for safety. How could the human monks intercept us here? There is a spy! It seems that today is less likely to be unlucky. At least the two highnesses must be sent back." The war began. In the pool of blood, looking at the figure in front of him who blocked the "fatal blow" for him, Longhu seemed to have returned to the past. "No, Long Long, no," the weak and powerless young fox is almost exactly the same as before, "Don't leave me alone again." The wailing Long Wei shocked everyone present, but the figure seemed so weak and helpless, just like a child who has lost his support. "I don't want to be alone anymore!" "It's okay," Long Long, who seemed to be no longer able to support the huge real dragon posture and fell into a weak mortal, gently stroked the cub's hair. The gentle touch made Longhu temporarily stop crying, just like before, just like when he remembered his new family. "I said, I will send you home." The essence and blood of the Dragon Clan ignited, and the powerful pressure of Yinglong made all the people and monsters present, regardless of their level of cultivation, frightened for a moment. At this moment, the Dragon Fox was quickly sent to the direction of the world, along with the monsters present who were loyal to the Dragon Fox. [Promise, I made it] Longhu seemed to have read this sentence from the figure that was quickly moving away. Three days later, the Righteous Alliance issued an announcement that Penglai was ambushed by cruel monsters during its retreat. The cruel and shameless demon clan coveted the Penglai magic weapon and sent out the Immortal Bloodline to pursue it. During the battle, Luo Yan, the leader of Tiangongfang, deployed a formation and exploded with almost immortal power to repel the monsters. Because Luo Yan, the leader of Tiangongfang, gave up his life, Penglai was able to retain most of its vitality. Unfortunately, when the formation stopped, the aura of Luo Yan, the organizer, had been burned out. Now Penglai has rebuilt the mountain gate and promised that justice will be sought. The Dragon Clan issued an announcement. The despicable and shameless human monks coveted Yinglong's bloodline. They were so shameless that they sent people to ambush the two highnesses. His Highness Longlong risked his life and sent His Highness Longhu and most of the tribe back to the Eastern Emperor Realm. This situation will definitely be recovered. In the 120th year, the demon clan completely retreated to the Eastern Emperor Realm. The one hundred and twenty-fifth year. The five demon sects surrounded and killed Shushan Sword Immortal "Junior brother, are you okay?" An Zhisu, holding the Taiyin Suming Sword, came to Ling Yunpo's side. "Sister, please don't worry." Before he finished speaking, a dark and obscure aura descended on the battlefield. Immortals, to be precise, immortal-level demons have descended on this world. "Junior brother, I will create an opportunity later. You can take advantage of it and leave first." An Zhisu tightened the Yin Suming Sword in his hand and said. "It's okay, senior sister, I won't lose." The Sun True Sword in Ling Yunpo's hand burned violently, as if it was going to burn out the sword owner as well. Half a year later, there were rumors in the world: The Six Paths of the Demon Sect surrounded and killed the Shushan Sword Immortal. The Shushan Sword Immortal suffered heavy casualties, and the Sun Sword Master was missing. Afterwards, the Taiyin Sword Master continued to hunt down the disciples of the Demon Cult for half a year, killing them on sight. Every Demon Cult monk who went out for activities was in danger, and every disciple of the Nascent Soul stage and below was out of ten. It was not until the pursuit of a certain group of Mortal Life Dao disciples that the Taiyin Sword Master's pursuit temporarily subsided, and the demon sect disciples who were secretly operating slowly reappeared. Three months later, a certain swordsman from a certain family who wished to remain anonymous revealed that the Taiyin Sword Master had gone into seclusion and was trying his best to break through the void. In the 130th year, it was rumored in the Demon Cult that Kunlun held three copies of a treasure that could still protect one side even if the world collapsed. The 130th year, autumn. Qiu Changtian, the headmaster of Kunlun, paid a visit to Shushan. When he returned, he was suddenly ambushed by the Demon Cult. It is rumored that the leader of Kunlun was seriously injured, and the demon sect Yuanying and above suffered heavy casualties. Only a few people disappeared mysteriously, and the demon sect has ceased to exist in name only. In the winter of the same year, Jiang Lizhen held the letter in his hand and loudly urged his two disciples: "Hurry up and practice hard." He was thinking silently, "Damn Old Thief Wei." ] I couldn't help but recall his appearance [But Lord Demon Lord must be fine. ] The one hundred and thirty-first year, the beginning of the year. Heaven screamed, cracks suddenly appeared in the sky, and alien creatures poured in. The remaining righteous monks spontaneously began to resist foreign enemies. "Senior brother, your injury" Phoenix Fairy Xu Yinglian looked at the crack in the distance and turned around and said to Qiu Changtian. "Junior sister, I will leave Kunlun to you. I will come back as soon as I go." "Senior brother," Xu Yinglian's tone suddenly became a little evasive, but it changed back in an instant. "Senior brother/junior sister, you are scared," the two said in unison, and then looked at each other and smiled. "I'm waiting for you" "From today onwards, the Phoenix Fairy Xu Yinglian will be the head of the Kunlun Sect" Qiu Changtian summoned all the Kunlun Sect members, and then he drew his sword and flew into the sky with even greater momentum than before. "From today on, I am the acting head of Kunlun," Xu Yinglian announced calmly.       ，， On the same day, a shocking sword energy came out of Kunlun, flashed across the nine states, and wiped out all enemies in the world with one sword. Later, the figure of Immortal Qiu Changtian rushing into the crack was engraved in the sea of ​​consciousness of every monk. Three days later, all the cracks in the world were gone. One month later, the output of spiritual veins, which had been declining for several years, finally rebounded. Outside time, above heaven and earth, a person, a mirror and a sword are walking along the avenue. "Ajing, Qingping, celebrate, the throne of the sky has been empty for a long time, and today it is finally going to welcome its owner" "Congratulations to the master of the sword, congratulations to the master of the sword, you have worked hard and tried hard, but today you finally got what you wanted, and your long-cherished wish to ascend the throne of the sky has been fulfilled" Qingping said in a cheerful voice. "Ah, congratulations, congratulations," Kunlun Mirror said to Chen Guanshui in a perfunctory manner. Recalling that he had endured humiliation, planned painstakingly, and worked step by step, and finally saved the world with his own efforts and allowed himself to ascend to the throne of heaven, Chen Guanshui couldn't help but be so happy that he no longer cared about Po Jing's perfunctory treatment. Chen Guanshui walked slowly outside this world, browsing the endless avenue, and held a "coronation ceremony" that was not known yet. When we arrived at this place outside the sky, our good partner Kunlun Mirror silently recorded everything that happened here "in every detail" and "accurately and accurately". And package it all and send it to a few "random" "fateful people" so that this historic scene full of "memorable significance" can be passed down to future generations.

1. Kunlun Qiu Changtian vs Xu Yinglian The invincible chief monk and his arrogant and shy Taoist companion 2. Shushan Ling Yunpo vs An Zhisu The unyielding and tenacious swordsman and his fierce and strong senior sister 3. Penglai Luo Yan vs Shi Liuli The smart and narcissistic young lady and her loyal dog 4. Jiejiao Wei Dongliu vs. Jiang Lishen The evil and profound devil and his love-minded witch 5. Monster clan Longlong vs. Longhu The sick and melancholy little princess and her loyal and corrupted guard 6. The body Chen Guanshui vs. Kunlun Jing The real protagonist who is extremely filthy and A Jing who finally turned into a human form

"Xu Yinglian Who Knows the Truth" Oh, what kind of hearts are in harmony, what kind of lovers are made in heaven, I only know that two people are happy and become a couple, but who knows that mirror flowers and moonlight can make fools, who can enjoy the blessings of immortality in this world, and live a long and single life in this life, I dare not enter Kunlun in the future, for fear that the old scenery will bring back old feelings. Let it go. I wish to marry a solitary child in a thatched cottage, but I will laugh unsympathetically with others. I once watched the water with the ups and downs of the waves. Xu Yinglian stood by the lake in front of the house. If the author hadn't painstakingly planned it, how could he teach the broken mirror to become round again?

Kunlun Mirror got the Sky-Mending Stone, Dragon and Fox solved the problem of bloodline and no longer be bound, the junior sister became the well-deserved number one in Kunlun Mountain, the senior sister revitalized the sect, the eldest lady became strong and independent, and the demon girl no longer has to worry about living. I, Chen Guanshui, also successfully ascended the Sky Throne These multiple happinesses overlapped together. I should have received more happiness. Why is this happening?

Chen Guanshui was an ordinary high school boy. By chance, he owed 60 million to the female boss Yaoyao, and was forced to work at his subsidiary Vtuber company to repay the debt. In order to pay off his debts, Chen Guanshui made a bold decision. He decided to make his live broadcast with multiple leather bags. During the live broadcast, he used different leather bags to attract beautiful girls from the same school. The tsundere school girl Xu Xuyinglian who has always been the number one in age, the senior school discipline committee member An Zhisu who is not good at talking, the innocent foreign language department senior girl Shi Liuli, the wealthy daughter Longhu whose father died young but inherited a large inheritance, the gangster eldest lady Jiang Li'an and other beautiful girls fell one after another and paid for their ships. Chen Guanshui did not hesitate to play with the feelings of many girls in order to pay off his debts. After paying off his debts, he graduated at the speed of light and lived a precarious life incognito. Nowadays, various rankings are searching for the real person under the skin, but they bump into each other. One ranking found that the leather sheath they were looking for was suspected to be the same person. Female boss Yaoyao was very indignant when she learned that Chen Guanshui was playing with the feelings of young girls, and exposed many personal clues about Chen Guanshui during her live broadcast. Ms. Suming, the agent who ran away with him, said she was just a fun-loving person. After Chen Guanshui was caught by the girls, he was punished day and night. It was too painful to directly break the defense and shout during the live broadcast.

It's a kind of humor to be able to write it like this

Penglai Keywords: Learning Advantages: Peaceful competition is less stable, rich in diversity of means, development is smoother after obtaining channel status, and pressure is low. But the road is narrow and depends on opportunities. Even if there is no opportunity, even if you have talent, it will be easily buried. You need to judge the situation and deal with the relationship with your brain. Kunlun Keywords: Development Advantages: Provides a large amount of resources for development, status is directly proportional to talent, and there are certain means to protect it. The true development path has everything you need. But there is an undercurrent behind the scenes, the enemy is secretive, we are competitive, we are passive Shushan Keywords: Raising Gu Advantages: Rich experience in actual combat, status is more based on actual combat ability, and there is a chance to obtain divine equipment based on talent initially. However, the competition is extremely fierce, there is no time for peaceful development, and it pays attention to gang affiliation. If there is no means to deal with the competition and strife in the early and mid-term, it will easily die. Growing up in a harsh environment.

It is recommended that Warthog publish a collection of leave requests

One artist: winni_wc

From now on, I will never read your book again. It is too short and short. The only highlight of your book is that the protagonist plays multiple roles and develops a relationship with the heroine. What is the result? It is poorly written. The final Shura scene, whether the protagonist and the heroine resolve their differences, was delayed just for the sake of money. Take a look at what you wrote. This book is only good in the early stages. And with your character creation, you almost made An Zhisu a person with low IQ and EQ. Isn't this called protecting one's shortcomings? What's interesting is that from entering Shushan to Shi Liuli's dramatic change in temperament and then to Jiang Anli becoming a demon, the story continues. I'm really tired, goodbye

You have a gentle temperament, are honest and honest, and are the most kind. You keep saying that you are working hard to become an immortal in order to ascend to the throne in the sky. In fact, you are doing it for all living beings, always showing mercy to the weak, sacrificing yourself for others, and being loyal to your feelings. You are so majestic. In order to mend the sky and save the world, the Pillar of Heaven was about to fall. You risked being killed by fairies and witches after your identity was exposed, but you still sacrificed your life to sneak into various sects and save the world. You are gentle, honest and honest. Faced with the challenge from Junior Sister Xu Yinglian, he always defeated her seriously. Senior Sister Shi Liuli is so coquettish and capricious about all kinds of benefits that she has no heart to refuse. Even if it delays her practice, she still has to work hard and be satisfied. Senior Sister An Zhisu came back from injury. She took great pains to take off all her clothes and stripped her naked to treat her injuries. Even though her body was overdeveloped and severely uneven, which greatly increased the difficulty of treatment, she carefully examined her whole body. Faced with Senior Sister An Zhisu's worries, he encouraged her in turn with a weak and unyielding attitude. I accompanied Senior Sister An back to Xixiang to visit relatives. I was worried that the accommodation fee would be insufficient, so I politely suggested that two people could share a room. You are considerate of the weak, worried about having adventures outside, and your cultivation has soared far beyond that of Junior Sister Xu. Even when you go out for training, you don't forget to take her with you. Junior Sister Xu is afraid that life is short, so even if she chooses a Taoist partner, she doesn't want to regret it and sacrifices herself to get engaged to her. In order to comfort Senior Sister Shi Liuli during the Guixu Formation, ease her anxiety, let her face unknown fears, close the relationship with her, and sincerely say to Senior Sister, "If I am trapped with Senior Sister for a million years, I will be willing to do so." You are loyal to your feelings, and when faced with the warm and affectionate Jiang Witch, you push her away coldly. Senior Sister Shi is innocent, romantic and tender in every possible way. She still pays attention to propriety and leaves no fetters. Although I flirted with Senior Sister An anytime and anywhere, I never really wanted to fall in love. In order to prevent Xu Yinglian, who had a strong personality, from leaving regrets that would be irreversible throughout her life, she still chose to take her away from the marriage even though they had already made an engagement.

As shown in the picture, this is probably the way the Kunlun Mirror predicts the future and solves problems

Recently 🐔 I have opened a new book. It has only been seventeen chapters and already the male and female protagonists have begun to have an ambiguous relationship. It makes the aunt laugh and feels that it is natural and not abrupt. Then comparing the writing style of Warthog, I found that the style of Chicken Fork is similar to the positive feedback mechanism of a game: the reader takes on the role of the male protagonist and every time he meets someone The heroine begins to emotionally cultivate and pull, making the reader smile like an aunt. Finally, the boss is defeated in a timely manner, just like the BOSS is defeated in a small stage of the game. The heroine being pushed down is regarded as a reward for defeating the boss. This kind of reward feedback mechanism is similar to the game's stage-by-stage reward feedback mechanism. Although it is old-fashioned, it is really easy to use. Of course, there are also disadvantages, that is, in the later stages, the heroine who has been conquered in the early stage is easy to retreat and lose her character personality. When the reader takes the place of the male protagonist, it is always the heroine who has not received more attention. The style of Warthog is that in the early stage, the female protagonists are too good in character. If they play this style for a short period of time, they will be overthrown. With the pride of the female protagonist, logically there will be no more female protagonists behind the male protagonist, otherwise the female protagonist design will basically collapse. This is like a game feedback mechanism. There is no reward for defeating the BOSS in the early stage one after another. The early stages will be rewarded to you one after another until the final BOSS in the later stage. This does not constitute a positive feedback mechanism for the game. Moreover, after defeating the stage BOSS, The rewards are obtained when the atmosphere is in place, and the rewards are distributed one after another in the later stage, which even makes people feel a little irritated and fatigued (the step-by-step promotion of girls at the end of Cang Qing Sword). There is a big difference between the two feelings. Most of the people who can persist until the end are true fans. Although this allows the personality of each heroine to always be clear and the reader's focus will not be limited to one heroine, the effect on performance may be affected. Of course, this is just one aspect I see. The author himself must also take into account all aspects of the factors that we don't understand. I still hope that Warthog's performance will improve, and the more he writes, the better.

Goodbye, delete the book and leave. It would be better for this long-browed person to continue to be stubborn and be hacked to death by the protagonist. Why should he be treated lightly? As soon as the father-in-law came out, he stopped completely. Is this also a swordsman with a hot temper? Why, if you become ruthless and become affectionate, don't you become funny? My daughter and son-in-law have been bullied to this extent, and they won't pursue anything after they give in? No one will dare to bully them again in the future. Once this place is over, there will be no chance or reason for revenge. Others don't dare to attack them anymore, and Senior Sister An can't take the initiative to deliberately find trouble, and then the whole Emei starts to change their mind and clean up their innocence, right? The immortal takes the lead in admitting his mistake. From now on, everyone will be brothers and sisters, and the whole family will be happy, right?