I've Been in Konoha, Collecting Corpses from the Battlefield for Ten Years

Author, the current reading progress has just reached Chapter 18. Generally speaking, it feels good, but there are some outstanding unreasonable points. First of all, let's talk about the Corpse Veins. It doesn't take much for the protagonist to obtain this bloodline limit for the purpose of integrating the Otsutsuki bloodline in the future, but the setting is a bit hasty. This sloppiness does not mean that there is a problem with the acquisition process or channels you set, but that the protagonist uses it too sloppily. First of all, since it is known that there is blood disease in corpse veins, it is too hasty to use it directly when there is no guarantee that the disease will not occur. After all, the protagonist has returned to the village and will not die at any time on the battlefield. The choice between limited improvement in strength and the death of blood disease is too hasty. Why don't you consider adding a patch without blood disease? Otherwise, if you make a protagonist who has blood disease and has to do something to survive, it will be very dissuasive, really. Secondly, the strength of the corpse veins is too high. Comparing Kimimaro Hayabari's Dance to the Tree World is an exaggeration. Kimimaro's use of Hayabari before his death was almost a desperate blow, which can almost be said to be the strongest blow. However, we see that his range of skills is still limited. At most, it is compared to the first generation of Yutu who appeared in the Chunin Exam. This is because the four purple flame array limits the range of skills. The most important thing is that Kimimaro used the Hayabari Dance when the Earth Curse Seal was complete. This comparison is not actually very useful for reference, and because it is the final blow, whether this skill can be used as a normal skill is also open to question, so the author had better make responsive patches and considerations in subsequent settings. Finally, there is a description of Orochimaru's priority target for reincarnation. Kimimaro is indeed an undeniably excellent experimental material, loyal subordinate and reincarnation target for Orochimaru. But regardless of whether Kimimaro is sick or not, his priority will never surpass Sasuke, because the Sharingan is Orochimaru's inner demon. He never defected when he saw the young Itachi doing kunai avoidance training. When the Akatsuki stage failed to attack Itachi, Orochimaru only had the Sharingan as his number one target. And you wrote it wrong. Sasuke was chosen as a backup because Kimimaro had a hemorrhagic disease? I dare say that if you don't change it here, you will definitely be ridiculed. That's all the above opinions for the time being. I hope the author will write better and better.

The author please don't write about the joint chuunin exams of the big villages at this time. It's really stupid. I've come across several books that write like this (the most outrageous thing is that there is a war in the ninja world and the five big villages take the time to hold the joint exams). You don't want to think about it. The war is about to start. All the big villages are actively preparing for the war. The border The conflict is intensifying rapidly. If you send some trash genin from the village to fool you, it doesn't make sense to show off the village's muscles. But if you send the village's geniuses to participate, it would be even more stupid. Danzo is a good guy. The next generation of other villages hopes to catch them all when the war comes. Kishimoto doesn't even dare to think about it. Why does the original work have the Joint Chunin Exam? Looking at the basic situation, first Konoha and Suna signed an alliance, and others (such as Yun) seemed to be armistice agreements. Then, the original time point has been relatively peaceful for a long time, and Suna only participated for other purposes. Just like in the real world, special persons or under special circumstances are restricted from leaving the country.

The protagonist seems a bit condescending. He talks about being afraid and trying to survive, but in fact he regards the natives of the ninja world as fools. He has no choice but to escape from death many times that does not match his strength. He just bites him to death without knowing it. Then he is targeted by Orochimaru. He talks about trouble, but in fact he is dissing others in his heart! There are many things that cannot be explained. If you are arranged to participate in the plot, there is nothing the Hokage can do about it, but Orochimaru asked you to express your opinion. Shouldn't you, a stubborn person, say you don't know? In the end, you are still talking about it, what are you doing? They say one thing, but their actual actions are attracting attention like crazy!

First, this is touching corpses, not collecting corpses Second, I would rather see some basic attributes obtained every time, than see this kind of experience card, fragments... Is the system planned by Goose Factory?

Madara was one of the founders of Konoha and was not judged to be a traitorous ninja. Regardless, it was treated as if he had gone out and did not return to the village.

The name seems strange. The kind of blood and secret techniques in the Naruto world. They are all kept secret, and Naruto also has the ability to extract memories from corpses, plus people use corpses for experiments. Therefore, the only people who collect corpses are civilians, and only those without blood are allowed to be collected by you. People who have blood and family secrets have kept them for themselves, and they are afraid that you will get into their corpses and get their secrets.

Emmmm... I can't say that to the readers. Everything the readers say makes sense, huh. The author is poisonous, so if everyone complains, please leave it here. I will come and read it regularly. Well, that's all 😡

The sight of a waistcoat replacing the protagonist makes me sick, and I dare not live like an upright human being. What wonderful novel can I write? He also has a super-perverted plug-in that is so badly written that he can touch corpses. He is so obscene and has a weak heart. Abandoned

I'm not a troll, I just simply think this book is not good to read and the main character behaves like a mentally retarded person. There are also descriptions of those in the ninja world, including corpses to express sexual innuendo, etc. Can't stand it

To be honest, there are not many books that can be read at 7 o'clock. The process for finding books now is as follows: open the latest update time of all book categories (do not look at the high ranking, daily poisoning and three zombies) - scan the introduction of the book title - open the book review and look carefully - close it directly when you see Shennong's appraisal and a lot of likes - continue to find the next book and so on.

I really don't understand how someone would think that they still have to smoke after being reborn and no longer have the craving for cigarettes. . . For non-smokers, this kind of poison is too disgusting

Chapter 43 There is an obvious mistake. Senju Tsunade did not participate in the Third Ninja World War. Senju Tsunade participated in two Ninja World War, namely World War II and Fourth World War. Due to the death of Senju Shenju and Kato Dan during World War II, Tsunade left the village and wandered around. It was impossible to participate in the Third Ninja World War. Moreover, Tsunade suffered from hemophobia at the time. It is impossible to participate in the Third Ninja World War. If the Third Hokage insists on her coming, the most likely thing is to go to the rear medical team. Tsunade who is suffering from hemophobia cannot exert her full strength, so it is impossible to participate in the frontal battlefield.

To be fair, the storyline is well written in terms of enjoyment, but the experience cards are indeed a failure. Occasionally, one or two are used as life-saving trump cards. Who can be disgusted by the continuous experience cards? It's not a real time travel, no matter what you have, as long as you have it, it's just reading a story, who is disgusted by the constant experience jam? If you're afraid that your combat power will collapse, just add some physical and mental strength. Don't just keep adding experience cards just to limit the protagonist's strength.

When World War III broke out, Konoha challenged four countries. . In the early stage, there were only small-scale battles with Iwagakure and Sandgakure. The most intense battle was when Obito Kakashi entered the battlefield, and it was also Nagataimei who inherited the record of the Fourth Hokage.

I originally wanted to take a look, but I saw that there was an experience card in the catalog, so I said goodbye. Summoning, experience card, possession. All poisonous

It is indeed a large number of people in the studio who have been updated at the same time.

In fact, I don't understand why conscious clones are always used This kind of thing can easily become a poisonous point for ordinary people Even immortals and ancient heroes generally have very little space to describe their external incarnations. The clone is consciously testing the edges, and keeps letting the clone add to the drama... "The clone keeps talking about the original body," and it feels like something will always happen for no reason The shadow clone in Naruto doesn't go out of its way to describe its long-term existence...

Why do you need to find kunai clothes and the like when you touch a corpse? Do you just pull these things out without your own hands? Why not just take off all the clothes on the corpse and touch it naked so that you can only touch the bloodline and skills? A system to touch the corpse and find out the clothes, soldier food pills and kunai?

This is another novel where the main character is replaced by 🐶 without any sense of violation. With this system🐶 you can reach heaven.

The Shadow Clone Technique will divide the chakra of the main body equally. How can the weak protagonist have the confidence? Normally, the clones pretend to be others, and there are several clones... Also, the puppet itself has no heat or breathing, so normal ninjas cannot sense it? What's more, professionals like Baiyan...

It's ridiculously poisonous. If you want to use the template of the prehistoric style, don't apply it to Hokage. The tailed beasts can be killed permanently. So why are the six paths and Hashirama busy for so long? The protagonist can do these two things and can't do it? Just kill the tailed beasts, and write the shadow clone as an external incarnation. To retain the independent consciousness of the shadow clone and the long-term existence of the external incarnation, you might as well rename it "The Road to the Saint of Konoha", and finally kill three corpses.

I love Rin more than Obito

Really, it's too poisonous. The author seems not to be good at the behind-the-scenes flow. As he writes, the protagonist changes from the original owner to a puppet of the original owner, Sarutobi Hikaru, and from the behind-the-scenes flow to a cool novel. . . . In the end, the original owner directly replaced Sarutobi Hikaro. . . . It's too poisonous and vulgar. . .

Damn it, I didn't even see Hinata until the end.

This book seemed okay until the first 80 chapters, but became more and more toxic as I read later. It was okay in the early stage, although it was a bit holy, but I got by with it. In the later period, it became more and more holy. It really poisoned me. If you don't like the holy book, try to stay away from this novel. Read the comments before reading the book. This is a good habit. This novel will probably poison five or six people with the power of Shen Nong.

After reading more than 20 chapters, I couldn't stop reading. I knew the plot was a cheat. Another restriction cheat, annoying

A good book, worth reading. It's pretty good among Naruto fanfics.

This is what you get in exchange for a full subscription. . .

It became more and more toxic later on, and I felt like I was losing my mind

Which Naruto touchingcorpse novel is it? It was criticized very much in the comment section of other Naruto novels😓