Pirate Bone Demon

Personally, I feel that conquering the world with just one Devil Fruit and no system or plug-ins is the essence of fan fiction. Come on, author 🤭

Kimimaro's development is the weakest. As a time traveler, it is not too much to develop the undead natural disaster

The setting is okay, just by eating a Devil Fruit without any help, you will have good combat power in one day, and you will get used to the fruit immediately, as you can see from the original Luffy. So fast, what a genius, his combat power is soaring haha

No one teaches the Six Styles and Haki. It can be practiced in just a few days just by relying on the so-called principles in anime. Moreover, the physical fitness of the protagonist is not enough to support the use of Six Styles and Haki. It is simply outrageous!

Good guy, there must be at least fifty typos in one chapter. The author didn't graduate from elementary school.

The selection of fruit abilities is quite good, but the writing is a bit too taken for granted. After cultivating the fruit abilities on the island, a group of pirates will go to the island, subdue them and go to sea. Then join the navy and then enter the headquarters to practice the six styles. According to modern people's concepts, no one wants to be a pirate. Go and be the pirate king.

Good guy, he looks like a dog in front of Nami

Fortunately, you are writing from a pirate's perspective. I can't read it from a navy's perspective.

When I saw the Bone Demon, I thought of san.

Is it so easy to see, hear, and feel? Awakened on your own?