Miao Miao Cultivation Path

Come on, you can't sign the contract this time, but you will definitely succeed next time

I don't think there is any problem with the use of beauty. In gender stereotypes, there will be entanglement that men can only be masculine and handsome, and women can only be beautiful and charming. In the right situation, even if men use more feminine metaphors and women use more heroic metaphors, there is no problem. Come on, author!

The author's quality is there, and so is his storytelling ability.

The first three chapters mainly talk about the world view and setting, which is a relatively old way of writing. Nowadays, the popular method is to use the protagonist as a clue to slowly introduce the world view and setting.

Don't be discouraged. I don't accept other people's books easily. I have collected yours and am following you. Work hard!

It's okay. I saw where the apprenticeship in the arena was abandoned.

Boss, this perseverance is really strong.

After writing this book, I will add it to the editor's QQ next time and submit it. I will definitely sign the contract.

Hurry up and start a new book, it's been a long time coming

Chapter 3: The two are so bloody, the female nun must be passionate about love affairs

After reading the first three chapters, I feel that deleting the first three chapters will not have any impact on reading the novel. If I were to write it, I would probably explain the historical background in three to two hundred words at the beginning, and then go straight to Chapter 4...

To be honest, signing the contract is the three golden chapters! But your first three chapters are too confusing. Male channel female cultivator! The entry point is already low! The first three pictures are too messy! It's like reading a book from heaven!

Please support me. Come on. There is only one recommendation vote

Come on, author, there are very few female readers who like Xianxia, ​​and as for female authors, they are at the level of giant pandas! This book can be used as a writing practice. Work hard on the next book. Be sure to support me!

After reading a few chapters, I collected it. Although occasionally the adjectives were used inappropriately (for example, in the first chapter, men cannot be described as beautiful, nor can they compare with women), but the shortcomings are not concealed, and the overall writing style is very beautiful. It is different from the popular fast food literature, which is only for a short time. In comparison, the style of this work has surpassed more than half of the contracted writers. If I failed to sign the contract, I was only responsible for the editor. The wrong type of work has nothing to do with the quality of the work (you know, if an editor has been in charge of a certain field for a long time, it will be difficult for him to pay attention to other types of books). This is my most pertinent evaluation. This book will definitely be drowned in the stars in the early days, but in this impetuous fast food era, it is definitely considered a mid-range work. Stick to it. After writing this book, don't think too much. This is not your fault, it's just that the writing is wrong.

It's very beautiful. Come on, I like the heroine's character

The assistant came over to give the author a thumbs up. I hope the author can come up with a new book as soon as possible. I wish the next direct signing will be successful!

The author is great.

I came across your discussion by chance, so I clicked in and read it, but I only read the first few chapters. Let me tell you my opinion first. The advantage is that my first impression of this book was very pure, and I could see some aura in the writing style. I suddenly felt like I was seeing those sincere scenes played on TV a long time ago. But there are some shortcomings. The first is that too many modifiers are used. In fact, there is no need to use so many modifiers in many places. The novel is not a poem. You can write it in the form of prose, but the premise is that the writing power must keep up. Otherwise, it will run into a problem: people who come to read the story dislike it as long-winded and plain, and people with some appreciation level will find it messy and pretentious. But overall, the author's writing style is pretty good. It might be better if he can make his writing more smooth and simple, and while finding a good inspiration, he can think more about the connection and development of the plot. Wish you a happy life.

I pay tribute to you. I hope you can summarize the experience of this book, develop the advantages, take care of the shortcomings, and sign a contract for the next book to be put on the shelves. Directly book 10,000 orders!

Is this the finished book and you haven't signed a contract yet?

Author, you write very well, it's really beautiful, keep up the good work😊

I'm urging you to read again... I just need to look for articles after a while, but I can't find anything interesting... I like ancient immortal cultivation articles, and I often think of plots in some books I've read before, such as traveling to the sea to experience, buying magical tools with local characteristics, such as the progress of alchemy and weapon refining, etc., But the current articles don't write about those... In fact, I think routines are quite good. Routines are classics, and innovative ones may not be good-looking...

I see the assistant coming, come on, come on, come on! 😁

The writing is very good. I have read many articles on cultivating immortals. This one is very good.

Click to favorite, please comment, thank you

Keep up the good work! When I cheer for you, I cheer for myself!

I have a fantasy story but my writing style is not very good. I can share the story with you

I have played almost 100 mobile games, and there are so many stories in them. There are also many activities, such as the only mount for each server, Suzaku. In order to win the love of the female partner, a group of men are rushing to send flowers to compete for ranking, and my Taoist companion never She didn't charge money when she came, and she didn't let me spend money. When chatting with her, I found that she really wanted it. In order to win her favor, I smashed my only two hundred yuan angrily. However, compared with the wealthy people, I still had more than enough ambition and insufficient strength. In the end, it can be imagined that it ended in failure.

I'm here to promote it, the newcomer has no exposure, please give me some advice, please scold me to wake me up