This Is a Fake Elf

After reading about 50 chapters, the protagonist here is like a loser. He is always in trouble for doing nothing. Being a leader for him is really bad luck for eight lifetimes.

This protagonist makes me feel so uncomfortable. He has no opinion at all. Anyone can sneer at him. His subordinates are always unhappy and the protagonist has to coax him 😅

What should I say? I read Chapter 49 and said that there is indeed frustration, but that's not the problem. If the protagonist is really just a small lord, there is really no good solution. But the author, you set the protagonist to be the son of a duke. When he went to the border to investigate, the duke and the duchess didn't even send a few guards or anything? The protagonist's father keeps saying that he wants to ease the relationship between father and son. Is this how you ease it? It's all about talking and doing nothing. No wonder the protagonist has no good impression of his father. His father is a political bastard. It's all words, and his mother is completely indifferent. Is the protagonist really the son of the two of them? Isn't it given by charging phone bills? And the mentality of the protagonist is completely wrong. After discovering the secret of Haiyan City, he should have thought that the lord of Haiyan City would not be kind to him. Although the assassination of the protagonist by the lord of Haiyan and the attack on the village were a bit abrupt, it was not completely unreasonable. However, the protagonist was almost assassinated in the first round. If he didn't die, he should be very vigilant to know that Haiyan City will attack him again, because assassination in the aristocracy is a complete betrayal, it is life and death. As a time traveler, it is impossible not to know, as a modern person, there is no such vigilance. The protagonist has really completed nine years of compulsory education? But when the protagonist returns to the territory, he does nothing and prepares nothing. Then the territory was also handed over to a completely inexperienced novice. Don't you know what the consequences of this will be? The teacher said that the protagonist really doesn't look like a time-traveler, and is almost like an aborigine in thinking. With nine years of compulsory education, even the political protagonists are old, and you don't remember any of the remaining conspiracies and tricks played by your ancestors? That's it. As the son of a Duke, he doesn't even have the slightest alertness to crisis. This is outrageous.

Ah, it's messy and jumpy, and the narrative structure is confusing. The protagonist is just good-looking. Tasteless.

It's not a sadistic story, but it's the kind of story that makes you more and more unhappy the more you read it, especially the protagonist's parents. The father is a heroic figure who directly throws his son out as a hostage. The mother is the kind of woman who should obey your father no matter how wrong he does. She doesn't care about the protagonist's inner feelings at all. The sister is the kind of person who plays pranks directly and doesn't care what others do. The kind of character who is favored. The protagonist is the kind of character in a sad drama whose father does not love his mother or his sister and makes you suffer every day without letting you complain. If you read this kind of novel, the only ones who can read it are great people. After reading the public chapter, I have no idea of ​​subscribing. This kind of novel becomes more and more aggrieved. There is no love at all. It is already aggrieved enough in reality, but I still want to suffer in the novel?

It doesn't feel very good... It's a bit too frustrating. What kind of book is this? If it's about abuse, I won't read it. It's too frustrating to read about abuse.

Personally, I think the biggest problem is that Pig's Foot is too controlled. The early foreshadowing makes people feel that Pig's Foot is a character who can be ravaged and bullied by anyone. It's too frustrating. I don't think it's relaxed and cheerful.

After reading the beginning, I thought it was too nonsense. Attacking a small town, let alone how many people there are, let's talk about the fighting style. No one in a small town will run away. As an elf, the forest is the home field, but he has to go head-to-head with heavy cavalry. In street fighting, he can shoot arrows from the roof. What is the use of the opponent's infantry protecting the crossbowmen?

Other small poisonous points are acceptable. After the protagonist brings his own people to the village, the villagers chase the protagonist with weapons. . . . . . I'm numb, I'm numb It seems that the author's setting is similar to the Middle Ages. How brave are the people in the village in this era? Obviously the protagonist seems to be a very strong professional, and they don't want to die? The author can't bring the feeling of modern society into writing. The lives of civilians in that era were very cheap, and they said that there were professionals, but they were so brave that they didn't want to die? You can accept it when you write that you can do it in person or in person, and you can do it in person. It's not like the medieval aristocrats at all. Putting it from the perspective of civilians, it feels very poisonous.

The temperament of the elf was completely lost by the pig's feet. Why did he directly transform into a human in the first place?

Reading novels requires a strong mind because you don't know what is waiting for you in the novel.

I think my writing is pretty good and I might get some grades.

Isn't the protagonist a great druid? The legend can transform into a dragon, but the protagonist needs something different. Look at this dragon, how beautiful it is, bah, it's so powerful. The legend transforms into a thirty-eight-winged feathered dragon

Now we are recruiting some supporting characters. The format should be as follows: Name Age Family Lineage Profession Growth Strength Skills Agility Physique Magic Spirit

The plot is a bit rushed. In the sixty-one chapters of the first section, the author has written nearly ten key supporting characters and six or seven major and minor forces. Coupled with the plot foreshadowing and ambush, the three-dimensional sense and personality of the characters can hardly be seen. If this problem is not improved, the plot will probably collapse.

This career system and power distribution, there are too many elements of Crown of the Gods, right?