My Martial Arts Ability Is Upgraded to Fight Monsters

There are completely two styles before and after Chapter 19. I don't know if the author is in a hurry. In fact, it was really interesting before Chapter 19. After that, it felt like the protagonist was almost talking to himself. I wonder if other people feel the same way as me.

I was thinking how could anyone dare to block the bridge when a high-level sect member was summoning disciples? Have you played too many chicken games? Isn't this blatantly opposing the sect's senior leaders?

I don't know what to write

Trash, if someone wants to kill you, just let it go just because you are a woman.

One word: chaos. I can't understand what is written.

Let me tell you about the daily poison guide in this book.

When I see 60, I feel like the person who wrote the book is enjoying himself. . .

Was the protagonist beaten stupid by that chapter or something? Looking at his subsequent performance, he was still pretending to be a boss. The author's handling of rhythm and emotions is a big problem. After that chapter suppressed the protagonist, the protagonist should be in an angry and serious mood, but it turned out better. He squatted by the bridge and watched people fight. He talked to himself too much and acted like a boss. Those who didn't know thought it was the protagonist who beat up that chapter or something. I read the comments and it seems that the author wants to increase the appearance of the protagonist, but what readers want to see is the actions of the protagonist, not the protagonist's soliloquy. This is not as good as half a chapter describing the normal actions of the supporting characters, and the other half is reserved for describing the actions of the protagonist. There shouldn't be too much psychological description.

If we don't have any writing skills, we'll just write it in a regular way. Don't be sensational. Also, your sensationalism is really unreasonable. The protagonist who has just traveled through time-travel is in a life-or-death crisis and shouts that my fate is up to me (that's pretty much what it means). Such stupid words are really unreasonable.

The logic is confusing, messy, and boring.

It's a bit confusing, reality doesn't need logic, fiction does

The outline of this book is not very good, it doesn't have the right taste. It's better to end this book quickly and start a new one. Since it starts with martial arts, why don't you try to find some resonance with it? ?

After reading Chapter 30, I always feel confused and don't know what to read.

Those born in the 19th century are so vicious. It's really unreasonable for this kind of sect to remain immortal.

It's really hard to watch. It's been more than seventy or eighty chapters, and the protagonist has never broken through a realm once, but he can easily kill people who are higher than him. He also crosses a different realm to fight, poisonous

After reading the first chapter, I probably made up my own cultivation realm and forgot about it.

A book of poisonous weeds. I'm not criticizing him, everyone's general reaction was too confusing. It's probably because the jar was broken and dropped.

Doesn't the novel also make sense? Looks so useless

I don't know what this book is about. . . . . . .

Can my martial arts be cultivated automatically?

When I saw the half-dead scene in the first chapter, I remembered the days when I was keeping accounts in the institute. At least I survived the hard days. I suggest you young people read more of this kind of article that remembers the bitter and the sweet, so that you can face life optimistically, and everything you read in the future will be interesting.

The introduction is too excessive and dog lovers are dissatisfied

It was good at first, but not so good later.

There's a lot of psychological description in the front, but there's very little character interaction.

It's a pity. If the author could continue writing as he did in the first dozen chapters, he would definitely become a god. There will be too many things he wants to write later.