I Started Cultivating Immortality from a Mortal

I still can't understand that Dou Di is the same as transforming into a god. Dou Emperor can easily manifest tens of thousands to hundreds of thousands of feet of Dharma, with explosive combat power. How can a transformed god have such expressive power? Don't tell me that Dou Po Space is weak. I don't see the protagonist's destructive power increasing. Don't tell me that you are afraid of the protagonist being invincible. There are only a few realms above Dou Di. I don't even think about how many realms there are for mortals to become immortals. At least there are more than Dou Di, regardless of the upper limit?         ，？ If the author is not good at writing and is afraid of running out of words, then why would he choose to fight against the sky in the second world?         ，，， I am not a troll. A troll would not write so much seriously. I hope this book will get better and better as it gets written.

It was okay at first, but the main character was Ye Liangchen, the former top four sex king. Now it's very embarrassing, isn't it? After that, when I started to cooperate with Han Lao Mo, I gradually stretched my hips. The description of Han Lao Mo was not at all accurate. With Han Lao Mo's temperament, if you told the secret of the vial, it would be great if Han Li didn't secretly kill you. He also cooperated with you, and then acted like he was the leader. I can't stand it anymore when I see Nangong Wan being accepted as someone's favorite. Abandon it, there is no well-written Mortal fanfic, I'd better go back and review Mortal 😒

I couldn't stand it anymore after reading chapters 53 to 55, so I forced myself to be enlightened. It is obvious that there is the inheritance of the alchemy of the top boss, the knowledge of the old monster who transforms into gods, a system, a mall, and a portable system cave. The protagonist who was still in the early stage of foundation building almost died because he couldn't get training resources and gave birth to inner demons. There is a time and space gate that has been broken (you can go back and forth at will), but I have been struggling with it, not daring to go, and before I went, I looked like I was going to die. If you don't dare to go, just practice hard. What's there to worry about? You are only at the early stage of foundation building, and Nangong Wan of Jindan is by your side. You can't advance to Nascent Soul yet? If you are afraid of death and don't dare to go out, why don't you take the Heaven-Building Pill even though you have it? Pretentious? I don't know what the author wants to express. Rubbish. Chapter 52 is readable from the front, but unsightly from the back.

Others accept spiritual pets, the protagonist accepts people's pets

The writing is passable, but the plot is a little bit toxic, mainly because the protagonist has a problem with his character and IQ! He didn't dare to seize the Heavenly Bottle when he needed the elixir, but instead went to a showdown with Han Li. As a result, he gave Han Li some secret formulas of peerless skills, and they worked together to make elixirs. They thought that Han Li had become his little brother, and wanted to take them with him to run away, but he broke the tracking mark and ran away. I was prostituted for free for some secret formulas of peerless martial arts. The reason was: "The host will be forced to become a demon if he has insufficient luck and kills the lucky protagonist. Please choose carefully!" He needed Yao Lao's alchemy skills and went to deceive Xiao Yan. As a result, he changed from getting Xiao Yan's ring, to accepting handwriting, to accepting disciples, giving away martial arts equipment, and giving peerless immortal cultivation techniques...

In the first world, the author may not have seen Dou Po. In Dou Po, no matter the performance or positioning, the Dou Emperor kills any Nascent Soul among mortals who are cultivating immortals. The Warcraft Lion King makes several mountains explode with a roar. The Dou Ling two-headed snake can destroy half of the city. The four-star Dou Emperor Xiao Yan destroys the fire lotus and wipes out an area of 7853 square meters. Kilometers [Three Mysteries of Heavenly Fire Transformation into Seven Stars], look at the mortals, transform into gods, barely hundreds of square kilometers, well, although the four-star Dou Huang Xiao Yan is the benchmark for the seven-star Dou Zong, Hai Bodong's performance can kill any Nascent Soul, this is not a matter of stacking data among mortals

The main character's hang-ups would be enough for any normal person, but the main character's behavior is like a baby bird waiting for food. I want more, I want more, this performance is so fucking incompetent.

I don't know why, but I always feel like the main character is written in a petty style.

It's too open and not worth seeing! ! The name of the key protagonist makes it difficult to get involved

It's so disgusting. Where does it say that Han Li is the reincarnation of the Taoist master in The Mortal Cultivation of Immortality? Please read more of The Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. It's not that Han Li is wretched and he has died countless times. You, a time traveler, are afraid of Han Li. It's funny.

I don't have the strength to write a masterpiece fanfic.

Nowadays, many Zhutianliu novels do not dare to seize the opportunity of the protagonist, fearing that the protagonist will travel through the timeline in the future and cause trouble for him. Could it be that you who are familiar with the plot will be a waste in the future? If the protagonist is awesome in the future, you will not be awesome in the future.

Today I realized how important reading is! Today in the author group, I saw some big guys discussing about pursuing reading, and I realized that the most important thing about a book is pursuing reading. This is directly related to whether this work can advance to the next round of recommendations, so please don't get fat, okay? It's easy to keep a small work to death, but if you really want to keep it, could you please turn the book to the last page? Please 🙏

You have accepted Nangong Wanren as her pet, I don't understand! I just put it on the bookshelf and saw it. It's hard to tell!

My last name is Ye Liangchen. This name sounds so familiar (ಡωಡ)

It's a bit unbearable to treat people as spiritual pets, and I'm still a woman

I have already read several eunuch fanfics.

The protagonist is too naive, and cultivating immortality in the mortal world is entirely a magical method

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]

Chapter 60 is outrageous. After being stabbed in the real world, he starts to become cowardly and has inner demons. Even if the protagonist has cheats in the mortal world, there is no way he can survive the Nascent Soul.

You can change the name to "The Legend of Immortality" and "The Legend of Immortality". If you lick Old Demon Fang, you will be severely rewarded. If you lick Old Demon Han, you will be severely rewarded for being taken advantage of.

Let's simply change the name of this book to The Story of a Dog-licking Cultivation of Immortality, The Story of a Wasteful Cultivation of Immortality, The Cowardly Cultivation of Immortality, and The Brainless Cultivation of Immortality A book that persuades people to quit in the first chapter.

The author writes well. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Click on the avatar to go directly.