Water Whispers in the Dust

The flowers and leaves are not separated from each other. Three hundred years have passed since the flowers were gone. How are the leaves of Xi? Without a monument and without sadness, how could Xi Ye change his character so much? The flowers fall and the leaves grow. Leaves fall, flowers bloom. Peanut, Ye Yi. The flowers are blooming and the leaves are lined. , , ? Xi Ye, cherish the leaves, cherish yourself? The remaining life is not long, it is already dust Life is also short, it is already drunk The mountains, rivers and moon meet each other Drunken by love Don't ask for directions Just wait for her

Thank you to the author for agreeing with me. The first post I didn't agree with using my trumpet was the one about what everyone wrote about the first work now.

There are twenty-four hours in a day, eight hours to work, eight hours to sleep, two hours to wash and eat, so there are still six hours left! One hour to conceive, one hour to maintain health, then there are four hours left. One hour and 3,600 seconds means 3.6K words per second, and 14.4K words per four hours. You only update a thousand words every day, which is a bit excessive (´-ω-`) In our place, this is like being soaked in a pig cage~(￣▽￣~)~

It's too mystical and the writing isn't plain enough. Although the writing is good, it is difficult to impress people, especially the readers of Qidian. Internet writing is essentially entertainment writing, and is not suitable for wordsmithing. If you want to stick to your writing style, then I suggest you refine the plot and submit it to a publishing house or newspaper. If you want to develop at the starting point, it is necessary to change the writing style and increase the intensity of updating. A thousand refined words are not as good as ten thousand words updated every day. This is an eternal truth in the Internet literary world.

I really read some chapters carefully. I think you are a poet. You can cut out some chapters and write them into poems or beautiful articles. The words and emotions are really good. But not suitable for the novel genre.