I Got Married to a Grumpy Girl

I don't understand this book at all. If I were the protagonist, I would definitely run away without saying a word. There is so much nonsense. I am single as long as I am single. I have survived more than 20 years, not less than these decades, and I entered the Civil Affairs Bureau on the first day. You should publish this book on a female channel

There has been no update for three days. Is this book Eunuch?

Update Update I invested, don't let us down

This book title, this introduction, why not vote for a female channel? Why does this appear in the new book on male porn potential?

Looking at the title of the book, I thought it was pure love, but you told me it was child slave. Hang a sheep's head and sell dog meat, say goodbye. Also, eunuch, it's uncomfortable for you to be scolded like this.

Good guy, I update a few times a day, but the author updates every few days.

It's all dialogue. . . Just vote for dialogue novels

Daughter slave? I thought of Wu Toothpick

Something's wrong, so it's okay for a woman to go to a bar? No more discussion?

Is it true that someone's son was beaten and fractured by a stranger, so he hit him when he first saw him? He couldn't be a feminist author, right?

It's fun, don't look at logic. Moreover, unless your love story has a fantasy color, it is difficult to have a firm main line, so many people will think it is a piece of cake. In fact, if the author is a novice and has enough time, it is recommended to open both. Write a book to practice writing and learn it. After you practice it, you can write this kind of daily writing. After all, everyday writing is actually the most difficult thing to write.

Why are you so selfish? You stop updating without saying a word.

It's okay, people have different tastes, if you stick to writing, you should be able to survive. Many people like to see dog food being spread daily.

In fact, the plot is okay. The author is probably a newbie and has no theoretical writing knowledge. However, I don't know much about it, so I'll just talk about it based on my superficial knowledge. The dialogues in blockbusters make people feel that the pace is too fast. The dialogues should be interspersed with some descriptions of the characters' movements, demeanor and psychology, so that it does not seem too fast-paced and very "dry". Omit some unnecessary dialogue, and arrange the plot in detail so that it won't feel like a running account. When switching to a new scene, the scene should be briefly described so that readers can switch the scene in their minds. Some chapters feel a little strange. I've read more than 20 chapters, so that's it for now, I'll look at it later.

My investment failed🙂