Lord of All: Draw Deathwing at the Beginning

The writing style describing pretentiousness is in line with the level of 10 years ago...

If you want to be stuck, don't restrict it. If you want to restrict it, don't open it. Now that it's better, it's half dead. . The most disgusting thing about reading novels is cheating and then restricting cheating, followed by those that insist on writing emotional scenes even though it's not easy to write them.

It is better not to open the big hook and limit it. Either open the big hook and push it horizontally, or open the small hook to develop. What I don't like the most is to open the big hook and limit it.

The opening of Deathwing Tianhu was unfortunately suppressed by the author and not worth watching.

If you look at the introduction, you will know that it is a stallion story, so you should not read it.

The writing is poor and it has to be forced to show off, so it's just a setting.

Various suppression of the protagonist. Everyone dispersed.

It's outrageous to write about women without accepting them. Either don't write about women and fight for hegemony, or give some sense of being a lord. None of the women under his command are virgins. A lord with all women under his command is still a virgin. Also, the summoning cards are all women, and the lords he comes into contact with still survive. The people who came were all women, and there were some female subordinates who had been snatched from others, and some pretty female mounts (literally). I just saw how beautiful the writing was, and it amazed the protagonist, and then she was accepted into her own camp and there was nothing more to say. It was quite embarrassing, it was a pioneering work in another world, right? It doesn't have that atmosphere, it's just like a vacation. It's like ordinary people turning around and enjoying the life of a lord, right? Didn't enjoy anything. It's just like a collection of figures. You buy one when you see it and keep it at home. You don't have to worry about its quality, right?

If we really summoned the permanent Deathwing at the beginning, and then farmed to control the rhythm of the plot, it might be a lot more interesting, but it's a pity that such a good beginning, bye

There are two poisonous points. 1. Selling dog meat with sheep's heads. 2. The retro style is serious. You can see the description of the Western Fantasy 89 years ago.

Use the most powerful cheats and create the strongest restrictions!

I was confused on the second chapter. I was scared to death. Do you have any experience of being burned to death? Whether it scares or burns, he is a card talent!

I thought it was a cool article, but I never thought that when Deathwing appeared at the beginning, it would give me a four-level promotion. It was an anticlimax, and the suppression was too harsh. Withdrawal. Withdrawal.

Goldfinger is a Hearthstone card with parents. The protagonist tells his parents that he is a town lord and the counselor (because the counselor told him that he has a bad relationship with so-and-so, and that person is now awesome, so the protagonist should be more obscene). Personal thoughts: Let's write it as a Xiaobai, but also take your parents with you. Anyone who doesn't mind can watch it, I'll leave first.

It would feel much better if we changed the protagonist's character setting and forced the hero battle to fail by default if he refused.

The creativity is okay, and the start is good. This is an advantage, but there are also many shortcomings. The combat power setting is not rigorous enough, and it is completely a situation of doing whatever comes to mind. This means that the combat power level will definitely collapse in the later period. Secondly, the author jumps directly between the invincible flow and the counterattack flow. He wants to make big mistakes but is afraid of being too strong and unable to control the crazy restrictions.

Xiaobaiwen within Xiaobaiwen. I really can't stand it, and I really admire those braggarts who hide their poison and say it's delicious.

Are you practicing "Sunflower Collection" again? You should give up like this.

Do you want to drink dragon milk after reading the introduction? Don't dragons lay eggs? Where did the milk come from?

The author writes well, comparable to the Renaissance. Looking forward to the next book

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