Contractor of the Secret Paradise

Do you think it's appropriate to have such a close relationship with the past and not have two tentacles?

It's best not to make your abilities too complicated. Zhanmei Su is just a knife from beginning to end, cutting, slashing, and adding passive skills. I haven't written much yet, and it hasn't been published yet. The protagonist already has a lot of abilities. If the abilities are too many, readers won't be able to remember them if they are too complicated.

Is there any mistake? The foreigner next door saw it and thought I was looking down on it. Who could watch it with just one update? One more update, one update per person!

I took a look,,,,, why is the smell of reincarnation so strong?

I hope the author will work hard. I really think this book is quite interesting.

Are you planning to go to the Fallen Star to become an Ancient God?

If the quality assurance can be comparable to Samsara Paradise or even surpass it

Breaking update? So, you are very brave?

Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this

With the favor of the past, even the lowest level should look directly at "God", right?

The protagonist can control the contractors, but the protagonist's ability is like the one in the later period that has too many defaulters.

Jingliang article 1. Unfortunately, the plot still lacks a little meaning, probably because there is less foreshadowing 2. The power system has begun to get out of control, and the protagonist becomes invincible too early. If the protagonist in the following article suddenly falls into a disadvantage in the comparison after the transformation of the power world, book friends who are used to being invincible in the previous article may be lost 3. You can feel the author's understanding of the mission world The personality of the characters in the world is quite well grasped, and I have an in-depth understanding of it, but for book friends who have not read "Naruto" and "Shokuseed", it seems a bit self-indulgent (such as me) 4. The character of the protagonist is interesting, but the complete superficial brotherly behavior can easily make people feel disconnected, such as the death of the ❌rope in "Naruto" The above is only a personal opinion and does not represent the public.

Overall, it's very good. The setting of multiple time-travelers makes me a little unhappy, but the sense of presence is very low. The protagonist's personal suggestion is to make it more childish. The overall style of the painting is relatively warm now. Although he has been pretending, I personally hope that the protagonist is not an old Yinbi type. Also, since he has joined the battlefield, I hope that contractors from other villages can appear. After all, there is such a setting as contractors, and the protagonist has come into contact with two in Konoha alone.

Remember to let the protagonist go to the Pokémon world 😏

There is a bit of a gap between Evil Energy and the Old Days. The Naruto chapter is pretty good, but the progress could be a little slower.

Erha-chan~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (⁎⚈᷀᷁ᴗ⚈᷀᷁⁎)

Does the protagonist look particularly feminine? Weak feeling type?

Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this.

I haven't read it yet, but the introduction is pretty good.

Go to: Monster Planet and get a Godzilla human shield.

If you don't update more, how can I help you vote for more monthly votes and recommendation votes, right?

Baby, didn't you create a group?

What about updates?

The writing is very good so far, keep up the good work! Recommended to you My friend just sent me two mp4s, and I felt really depressed after reading them! The plot is so perverted, yucky, mentally polluting! Read a book slowly

It's pretty good. Let's save and update it first. At least one page a day. Stay tuned for updates so you can look forward to it!