My Romance System Is a Little Strange

Halfway through the movie, the plot was too blunt. I was constantly being pushed by a teacher, asking for help and bowing if you didn't agree. The protagonist is not a pet, so he has to have his own ideas and plans. He takes the initiative to create opportunities and so on. He is always led by others and cannot even refuse.

Let me personally point out the poisonous points First: Problems with the portrayal of Jun Xiaobori, the drama club's consultant teacher My original intention was to create an image of a female teacher who would do whatever it takes to achieve her goals. But I may have used too much force, causing this character to be disliked by many people. This is a lack of ability on my part. I accept all criticism here, except of course, insults. Second: The protagonist is too passive The protagonist is not passive. The first time he was passive was because of the order of his immediate boss, the consultant teacher of his club Every action after that is for his own benefit. What you think is aggrieved is just intentional Creating this illusion, in order to paralyze the school, causing the school to make wrong judgments and profit from it Third: The protagonist's attitude towards his parents and sister This is clearly explained in Chapter 79. I think no matter who it is, facing a family relationship that they have never had, they are often small-minded. Careful The protagonist is no exception. Because it is the first time he has family affection, he does not know that there is a problem with his attitude towards his parents and sister. It can be regarded as a small foreshadowing. After all, the sister is a very important role Fourth: System Punishment This is my setting So after Chapter 47, the system is almost made transparent by me... And the punishment mechanism will be completely abandoned after the end of the main plot Finally, thank you to those book friends who have read this. If you have any reasonable plot discussion or confusion, you can leave a message and I will answer it But please don't insult me.

Let me just say that the first fifty chapters are generally tasteless and it would be a pity to discard them. The first is the setting. The system's punishment and the male protagonist's malicious speculation about Yui's previous good intentions are disgusting. The female protagonist sees a person in need of help and helps. No matter what the reason is, you should at least be grateful. In the end, you want to eat a peach to express your love, but you are rejected and commit suicide. You feel that others are not good enough to you, but they still agree to your confession... What the hell??? What's the obsession of the predecessor, which must be completed, why are you just playing with the light novel and cultivating immortals? The second is the characterization, whether it is the teacher or the members of the drama club, they are all disgusting. If the tone and positioning of the novel are like this, I have nothing to say, whoever likes it can read it. The third thing is the power of writing and plot shaping. What if we just rely on a system and a teacher that makes readers sick? Can't write anything else?

"Talk about my thoughts after reading it now" The novel should have given me a lot of advice at this point. Although the author has good writing skills and has his own ideas. But there are still some problems. One of the biggest problems with this novel is that it is too real. The protagonist's various forced actions, whether he is helping the drama department or admitting his mistakes to Qing Shui, cannot be said to be the protagonist's own thoughts, but the requirements of the (authoritative) teacher. After all, many things are like this in reality. The image of teachers created by the author is not good. Let's put it this way, the ethics of this kind of teacher are unqualified. People who use their own selfish desires to make others work hard for themselves (previous dreams). It looks a bit like An Yilun to me. In reality, there may be such teachers. It is inevitable that the drama department will join the drama department in the next plot, which is completely obvious. The author's plot has been seen through by readers, and it does not give readers a sense of guessing the next development of the plot. In other words, the suspense segments need to be set up to make people guess what will happen next, so as to increase readers' interest. This novel was pretty good before these plots that forced the protagonist appeared, and when I saw the protagonist joining the reading club, I also guessed how it might be handled next. And after the character of the teacher appeared and continued to promote the development of the protagonist, I felt that the novel had unsightly elements. As far as I'm concerned, it's very likely that I'll be thrown into the street. But this can only be said to be my personal opinion. The author also said that he will deal with the plot after joining the drama club well. Let's see how the author changes his fate in this situation~

I have a hunch that this will be a one-woman story, with Shimizu-chan winning in the end. I feel like she will finally get into the protagonist's heart, because only Shimizu cannot be seen through by Kanbaru. Curiosity is the beginning of falling into the love trap.

In Chapter 46, the protagonist is forced to reconcile. I don't understand what the protagonist did wrong? Because of the indifferent attitude? Originally, it was just asking for help from the kind-hearted host, and it was enough to show normalcy. But just because of this, Qing Shuijing wants to slap the protagonist in the face in front of hundreds of people. This shows that he does not take people seriously and does not even have the most basic respect. Is the main character this person's nanny? It's not disgusting enough to be so spoiled. There is also this teacher who forces people to do things. He helps you out of love but not out of duty, just because your dream is like this. ?????

A good Japanese love story is not complete, it has to be the whole domestic overseas students... If the Japanese female high school students come from the beautiful yearning for animation, then the domestic overseas students are too realistic... Tang Keke is not a very interesting thing...

I think it's okay, there are still some poisonous points, but the rating shouldn't be as low as it should be. Although the ending with a single heroine is a bit unsettling, it is better than a mindless harem novel.

Ah this

Why do some authors always arrange some dark history for the original owner when writing soul-traveling movies, which does not make any sense and can only show the original owner's stupidity, and the protagonist who was taken away from his body cannot show an outstanding character, and his character is still ordinary. Doesn't this look cool?