Cultivator from Konoha

I'm just going to complain about it. They tried to persuade me to stop at the beginning. It was too dramatic and I didn't feel immersed at all. Aboriginal + Aboriginal. Waiting for the eunuch to fail, a cultivator is really unworthy. Are you a Pokemon? I completely put on this cultivation skin and write a Pokemon book. Totally fooled by the name and introduction.

Damn it, isn't this the Hokage who practices Shushenwen's routine! I was talking about how this routine became more and more familiar the more I read it. It turned out to be the kind of slap-in-the-face routine in Xiuzhen novels, one after another! Writing a Naruto fanfic like this is really interesting!

The smell got stronger and stronger, then receded.

I haven't seen anything about cultivation and Naruto, it's quite interesting; I just feel that except for the protagonist, the IQ of other characters has been seriously lowered. Except for a few jounin, most of them are calm and not so impulsive and irritable. Moreover, Naruto is a world of physical persuasion. It is impossible for the protagonist to intentionally contact the Jinchuuriki. I just simply find an ANBU supervisor, and the greater chance is to invite him to have tea; in the end, I feel that the protagonist's trashy plot can be overcome. There are many situations where the protagonist's behavior is unusual. As long as you have a little contact and observe carefully, it is impossible to find that the protagonist is unusual; I hope the author will continue to work hard and write better and better!

The damn genius used to hide under the covers to watch

I just want to talk about my brain. I couldn't stand the first few chapters. From the names and plots, I couldn't read them. No wonder I have to have fandom to evaluate them.

What a pity! The subject matter is good and the characters are quite fleshed out, but the setting is too far away from the Naruto system and the routine is too old. Starting from martial arts and integrating the Hokage system, it should look better. For example, chakra is a system of three chakras and seven chakras in yoga tantra. It is possible to develop an internal power system of twelve regular meridians plus eight extraordinary meridians to refine chakra. Is it feasible to use the idea of ​​​​internal power moves to release ninjutsu?

😁😁😁Finally waiting for you to open a new book, come on~

I thought I was really going to write the second part of Ghost Talent. How could I remember that I said I was going to write the second part of Ghost Talent, called Good Fortune Zhong Shenxiu 🙂🙂

I haven't used QQ for a long time. I accidentally saw the group message today and found out that you have posted a new book, Mouse. I searched it and it already has 180,000 words. It's time to give it a try again. I have always liked your writing style. Come on, Mouse! ! !