Cultivator from Konoha

I just want to complain. The beginning was so off-putting, it completely broke the immersion and made me feel totally disconnected. It felt like a bunch of natives on top of natives. I'm just waiting for it to be a poorly written, poorly executed story about a cultivator. Is this some kind of Pokémon story? It's completely a Pokémon book disguised as a cultivation story. I was totally fooled by the title and synopsis.

Holy crap, isn't this just Naruto with its cultivation novel tropes?! I knew this trope was getting familiar the more I looked at it—it's those face-slapping and showing off tropes from cultivation novels, one after another! This way of writing Naruto fanfiction is actually quite interesting!

The flavor had become increasingly pungent, but it has now subsided.

I've never read a novel that combines cultivation and Naruto themes, and this one is quite interesting. However, I feel that the intelligence of the characters other than the protagonist is severely suppressed. Most Jonin, except for a very few, are quite calm and not impulsive or easily angered.

This is an incredibly talented genius; I used to watch it under the covers.

All I want to say is, where's your brain? I couldn't even finish the first few chapters. The titles and the plot were completely unreadable. No wonder you need fan points to leave a review.

That's a bit of a shame! The subject matter is good, and the characters are quite well-developed, but the setting is too far removed from the Naruto system, and the plot is too old-fashioned. Starting with martial arts and integrating it more with the Naruto system would probably make it even better. For example, chakra is based on the three channels and seven chakras system in tantric yoga.

😁😁😁Finally, you've released a new book! Keep it up!

I thought they were really going to write a sequel to "The Genius"—I vaguely remember saying they were going to write "The Genius 2," titled "The Creator's Blessing." 🙂🙂

I haven't used QQ in a long time. Today I accidentally saw a group message and found out that you, Haozi, have released a new book! A quick search shows it's already 180,000 words long. Time to devour it! I've always loved your writing style. Keep it up, Haozi!!!