My Leisurely Life with Master Baimao

Sorry, author, this book always gives people the feeling that the narrative is stuck one after another, and there are still some frame skipping. The characters are not very obvious, and the rhythm is uncomfortable.

Author, why don't you give me some background information when the scene changes? Feeling a little confused.

This is a good novel, no doubt about it. But no matter how good the work is, there will be some flaws, so please allow me to list a few suggestions that I think First, the scene transition is a bit stiff, the overall context of the article is good, but the transition from one scene to another is too abrupt. It is recommended to add one or two sentences of explanation before the conversion as a transition. Maybe the reason why I feel a little uncomfortable is that there is no so-called transitional paragraph Secondly, there are a lot of riddles. Although the plot is not obscure, this is an online novel. The plot needs to be explained straightforwardly and concise words need to be used to make readers understand what the author wants to express Just like Su Shi's articles, not all of them are famous sentences that can be passed down through the ages, but occasionally one or two good sentences appear This is the finishing touch, and the same is true for novels. They need to shine in mediocrity, not meteors in the day, which are only beautiful but inaudible Third, the characters of the heroines are very good, I like them very much, but please be sure to portray their images and personalities more clearly. I know it is a bit difficult when there are multiple heroines, but try your best Above, I will continue to read this book, hoping that the later chapters will be better, and don't be a eunuch

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Is the sense of presence of the master still low?

The most poisonous point in light novels is the living eunuch. Ask the author, how many chapters are prepared for driving? You don't have to write the details, but you have to have this behavior.

As a person who enjoys music, how can he not be a part of other people's happiness?

I will always believe in daily drug dealing, so keep it for now

┤･ω･)ﾉ Internal investment has passed, investment is welcome.

I'm here to report 🌹

I just read the first chapter. My name is Lu Yao and I feel numb.

It's very nice. I invested in it and hope to get some character cards 😄

Only one full order? The author is miserable

Is it a harem story? Does Nana like the protagonist? Or is it a harem where everyone except the master is a golden retriever?