My Fire Battleship

The setting is interesting, but the writing is a lot worse, and the content direction is not right.

How can I put it best? When I saw the emojis, I thought they were more everyday and funny. The content is dark again. It's a bit of a reader mentality. The protagonist is hard to describe. I would call him a time-traveler, but he doesn't treat others as human beings. His outlook and mentality are completely aboriginal, and he has no sense of involvement. The identity of the time traveler is of little use except to locate the fantasy world. The sense of immersion comes from the fantasy world itself, and it is all broken into pieces by this native who speaks emojis. There is no sense of expectation for the next world. After all, readers do not expect their favorite fantasy world and characters to be played to the end. Generally speaking, I feel that this is a dark world-destroying novel without daily antics but with emojis. A bit difficult to read.

The ideal author The real author 😠

Two headlights, I was confused 🤭🤭🤭

Good guy, the author is too diligent. He just finished the book and published it the next day. Even the donkeys in the production team didn't dare to do that 😰

I haven't read this book yet, but one of the characteristics of the author's book is that the setting has been cut down by 90%, and the golden finger has been cut down by 99%. It is probably a masterpiece!

If it were a more far-sighted protagonist, or even a more down-to-earth protagonist, he would already be a god. As a result, the protagonist has to waste resources like crazy and risk his own life to snatch a bunch of things back. Forget about grabbing things. The key is that the things he snatched back are not put to good use. After a second glance, the author treats them as background and throws them into some corner. . . As a result, I only read the one hundred and forty chapter and became more and more frustrated. . .

I read the author's book a long time ago, and here I read the comment section again. I have a general understanding of this book. The setting is first-rate, the imagination is very good, the writing is average, the plot is thin, and the cheating is very, very big, but it always seems to be ineffective, and it makes people feel frustrated In summary, it is Personally, it's not bad (I'm half a setting party) So someone has put forward their opinions a long time ago, and the author really pretended not to hear them. I can only say that the author is very determined, but if this does not improve, it can only be said to be very rigid (maybe this kind of cheat + reverse suppression is easy to write?)

I really like your setting, but your biggest problem is that it's too greedy and cumbersome. Sometimes it's better to be simple and don't want to get all the good things. Also, the story is too monotonous and has a linear structure. Look at the supporting characters. It's too easy for one person to perform a one-man show. To be honest, your writing power is really not enough.

I can still watch it in the first time, and the setting is good, but why does it start to feed 💩 in the second world, forcing the reader's IQ to the ground and rubbing it. . . I suggest you change it. What does it mean for me to betray myself? When I actually saw this paragraph, I wondered if the author had changed someone?

I used to accept girls, but now I just become eunuchs and give girls away to others.

A useless talent, actually at the Earth level? Are you cheating, or are you trying to overpower the protagonist? Speaking of cheating, dual talents are useless? Just for a name that you never had? If you want to suppress the protagonist, you can find any excuse to hide it! As for returning dual talents, returning to Earth level? He even described the level difference so hugely! Disgusting people! !

Good guy, Fire Battleship, my battleship can be upgraded

To be honest, because our country is in a period of peace and not in a period of war like foreign countries, some people's ideas are quite naive. Take the protagonist as an example. In such a dangerous world, the protagonist has no background, but has a fire battleship just like the city lord. Some people think that the protagonist should expose his talent so that he can obtain good resources for growth. But they (she) ignored one thing about human nature. If the city lord is a good person and the protagonist is fine, but what if he is not? You must know that the protagonist has a fire battleship, and when he grows up, he can reach the level of a city lord at worst. Does the protagonist dare to bet? In a dangerous world like this, geniuses must survive to be called geniuses, and those who die are usually called fools.

The author has read all your books, and I think Evolution of the Night is still the best.

Suddenly an idea came to me. The author's style and plug-in ideas are actually very suitable for the popular genre some time ago, the Kamito-ryu. To be honest, I am very interested in this genre. Unfortunately, the novels I am interested in are either tj or have changed in the middle. Let's talk about the author's books. The first one was too confusing, with almost no details and full of imagination, so I abandoned it; the second one's writing has made great progress, and I forgot why I abandoned it. After all, the protagonist is a person, and it was too confusing and I lost interest after reading it for a while; the third book, where the main character is a person, is still so disappointing. In the final analysis, as a person, the protagonist should be more reasonable in addition to watching the Invincible cheats; but the Shendi flow is different. The protagonist's divine blood at the beginning is very suitable for the author's Invincible cheats. The author's writing style is not lacking in imagination, his IQ is not bad, and it feels like a good fit. I am looking forward to the author's next book.

I couldn't stand it after reading a few pictures of this book. It didn't feel as good as those cool articles, with some meaningless expressions and a talent that naturally made me better than the average person. 🥱

I can understand when you write about technology trees like Warhammer, but when you write about Harry Potter, you plan to use magic power to modify energy sources.

Except for Darkness Infinite, the gaps between the other books are huge!

I wasn't interested in this book at all. I came to read it because I wanted to know if it was finished and when a new book would be released.

This author's books have too many settings. It seems that only his first book has less settings. The author must have gone crazy when writing the next few books.

I've already grabbed several worlds, but ended up running to school and running out of stuff. Don't force yourself to do it! Copy of hip stretch

I've read 80 chapters, and I feel like I have no motivation to continue reading. It's tasteless and a pity to abandon. . The subject matter is good, and the plug-ins are also good, but it feels a bit monotonous.

If you really fail, you might as well take the road of destroying civilization through technology and start running in the magic world, which will really make a show.

I want to ask. Just like the setting of Fire Battleship. Which book did it start with? Each module, upgrade, destroyer, battleship, cruiser, and captain also has its own talents. Then upgrading requires the origin point, but the origin point can only be obtained by going to a different space to destroy the alien race. Because I always feel that I see similar novels on various websites. The settings seem to be pretty much the same. . . . Please let me know some answers.

The first alternate world is Hogwarts? ? Science Fiction Classification Writing Magic

I asked you in the comment area, wait and see what happens next

Look at the chapter titles at the back. There are things like failed ascension. Isn't it possible that you are cultivating immortals again? The most annoying thing is that I just turned to the book on cultivating immortals.

Rats who hide their heads and show their tails are not worthy of being extraordinary

What is the difference between launching a battleship attack and throwing magic by yourself or sitting with a magic weapon? After the magic weapon attacks yourself, you can then use magic to attack.