Boys Dormitory, Girls Stop!

Lin Shengtian: Do you want to listen to a boy's love story? There once was a little boy. Due to family reasons, his world has lost its color. In his eyes, the world is all black and white. The little boy's mother grew desperate and tried to pull her child back, but it was all in vain. Until one day, the little boy suddenly told his mother that he wanted to be friends with a girl. She was a very beautiful girl. The boy took the initiative to touch the heaven with his own hands. It was very warm. At this point, the world also ushered in the morning light. The boy and girl have been together since elementary school, junior high school, and high school. Even in daily life, they have never been separated. Their hearts have been tightly together for ten years. Until the high school graduation reunion, the boy mustered up the courage to confess to the girl, knowing that the girl would definitely accept it. But the girl's ruthless rejection impressed his ears, and the boy's world once again lost its color. He was desperate and wanted to escape, escape from this ridiculous banquet that would be ridiculed next; escape from this gray world; escape from the girl who gave him heaven and hell.         ，，，， The boy was indeed not abandoned. He once again met the girl who gave him warmth. It was another paradise. Last time, the boy took the initiative to touch Heaven, but this time it was Heaven that took the initiative to approach the boy. This time it was even warmer, repairing the boy's heart in every possible way. Time passed, and the two finally walked into the hall. The girl from the past did not come, only her best friend came. It was as if she had told the boy what she was mocking, and she even scolded the boy angrily.                                                                                                     but ruthless time tells you that the misunderstanding will not get better, but will only get worse. The faults in the world are all pushed to the boy, but you don't know that he simply wanted to take another step closer, but in the end he couldn't even take half a step. Maybe everyone is right, but what is wrong is that people in this world are too complicated and cannot withstand the torture. Looking back at the time, the boy once again stood in front of the girl. Not surprisingly, it was the same joke rejection. Unfortunately, the brokenness that had been silent for a lifetime could not return and see himself clearly. What the boy heard was not an attempt to make up for regrets, but a sense of joy and ease. The boy thought about the future, trying to find the warmth that filled up the brokenness. Maybe it wasn't a dream. What he didn't wake up from in the dream was the light that illuminated the entire heaven.

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To be honest, I personally feel that there is something wrong with the structure of this book. First: Xiaoxue will have problems when she is three years old. Where does the conflict come from? There is no direct meeting in the Shura field. Although the author cleverly connected the three people, there will not be a direct meeting. I think the author might as well start writing from the sophomore or junior year? After her first confession, Xiaoxue will appear directly, at least in direct contact with the male lead, right? It's possible that the two women know each other but cleverly don't know each other's identities. There is another fatal problem with the three-year-old. Judging from the author's current direction, the heroine is beginning to take the initiative to strive for happiness, but there is still a three-year gap before Xiaoxue will appear. Can a male protagonist who has ten years of relationship destroyed by one sentence really withstand three years of indiscriminate bombardment? I think it's been difficult all year. The key is how does Xiaoxue appear in this crazy bombing? It was an unexpected discovery that there was no place for her at all, wasn't it? Halfway through, I thought of a story line in which the male protagonist accepted the relationship under the initiative of the female protagonist, and then felt ashamed of Xiaoxue and cut off the QQ connection due to future changes or something. Then the confused Xiaoxue accidentally discovered that the QQ of her best friend's boyfriend was the same as the QQ of her future husband, and started a new round of infighting? Second: I wonder why the author completely ignores the butterfly effect? At first, I thought that the male protagonist said that I randomly dialed a QQ account and felt that we were destined to chat more. Then Xiaoxue deleted QQ, and then created a chance encounter based on some of Xiaoxue's habits that the protagonist knew. Then Xiaoxue also felt that they were really destined. Would it be better for the story of the two to start like this? As a result, he blew himself up and revealed a girl's personal information and privacy. If it were me, I would definitely tell my parents in junior high school, and I would definitely call the police directly in high school. This is not fun at all. I just feel that it is intrusive. This happened to me and my high school girlfriend. I liked her from the beginning, and then secretly collected information. Later, when she found out that I knew a lot of her information, she told me that she thought I was scary and a pervert. Think about it. . . A female high school student who just came to a new city, who just applied for a QQ account, was stripped naked. I just said this, don't you think it's intrusive? Third: The character problem is super serious. Many people in the comment area said that the character of the heroine's best friend will never not confess to the hero for two years. She will help the hero break up, and then she will definitely find the hero to explain the matter clearly (this is really a big failure. Although it seems that the author is trying his best to remedy it, it is still a huge failure). Also, I think the heroine's character is a bit too much. . . I don't believe that a woman who loves a man so deeply would not take the initiative at all, not even struggle? Just because I saw that boy having a passionate fight with another girl during military training? Isn't it a wise saying that love is selfish? So confident? After reading these 170,000 words, the outline and direction of the story have almost been decided. What I can't accept the most is the direct contact with Xiaoxue and the best friend's character as my future husband. On the contrary, I really like the heroine's slightly bitchy image. 🙂, anyway, it seems that it is almost a eunuch, so I just wrote it like this and vomited it quickly. If the author sees it, I hope that if I think what I said is right, he will read the next book and think about how to correct it. If the author and book friends think it is too one-sided, please feel free to criticize it. . ;-) Also, in the initial setting, I am the wife of the heroine in her previous life, and as for the written content, I am the childhood sweetheart, which is too good for my taste hahaha

To be honest, I was confused by the male protagonist's way of doing things. He didn't show his basic behavior as an adult, and he wasn't sophisticated enough. Don't take advantage of each other

Rubbish, writing articles is not about whether your writing is good or not, at least you have to have an attitude. I insist on using genuine coins to read your books and invest in your books. I have not read pirated ones. Whether your writing is good or not is another matter. First of all, the writing attitude is extremely improper. I update it every two or three days. Then it has not been updated for four days. And at this stage of the plot, it seems to be very watery. Dozens of coins. Am I right? The writing is so-so. Apart from sensationalism, I don't know how you feel about this stage of the plot?

When I came across this book before, I thought it was in line with my interests, so I added it to my bookshelf, thinking of keeping it, but who would have thought that it would suddenly disappear. Author, you said that the performance of this book is not ideal, but you try to update it normally! There are no updates, where can you get results? You are not a well-known author yet, but you have a large readership base If you were to start over now, I think you still have some chances.

It feels like what the female protagonist did before the time travel was like Gong Huo, finding something to talk to the male protagonist about so many things, but now the contradiction is: the male protagonist's relationship with Fang Enxue for 8 years before the time travel, and the conflict between the first love for An, his childhood sweetheart of 10 years, and the complicated feelings of understanding the original reason. From an emotional point of view, An is currently very weak. Due to her refusal to confess her love, pretending to be dead during the summer vacation and the sense of estrangement from her past life, the possibility of getting back together is basically zero. In the long run, there is only a 20% chance of winning in the finale. But Fang Enxue is different. She has been in a long-distance relationship for 8 years. She is already married to the protagonist, so she has an absolute advantage. The variable is her friendship with An, and the breakup between the protagonist and An, which caused Fang Enxue to distrust the protagonist. Judging from the proactive actions in the previous life, it is impossible to give in. Once you confirm your love for the protagonist, it is basically equivalent to sealing the victory. If you are still hesitant, Fang Enxue's character will collapse, and there is no need to read this book. Therefore, the main conflict will break out after Fang Enxue enters college, or it will break out in advance. Due to the characteristics of love triangle novels, it is inevitable that the male protagonist is the central air conditioner. After all, it is the core of the conflict. Without the core, there would be no need to write this book. As far as the current plot is concerned, An Simeng's characterization is a failure, especially the lack of events in high school, which results in her having the frame of a silly, sweet girl who has been a childhood sweetheart for 10 years. She has no interaction with the male protagonist to accumulate the audience's feelings, and there are even very few cute and cute character profiles in daily parts. This leads to the fact that An Simeng, one of the heroines, has no core plot and the content fills directly into the core point of the conflict: recovering the lost love. This is a very scary thing. There are three main characters. The male protagonist is responsible for promoting Fang Enxue's plot, and then An Simeng drives the plot with the male protagonist. Fang Enxue and An Simeng deepen their friendship and serve as the core of the conflict. As a result, one of the female protagonists, An Simeng, has not yet established her character, and due to the natural loss of points due to her refusal to express her love at the beginning and inaction during the summer, An Simeng's character has gone in the direction of a green tea tauren forever. The number one heroine in the audience's mind now is Fang Enxue, and An Simeng became the actual third party before she knew it. The character setting of the heroine Fang Enxue is also a hard-core heroine setting. In just a few chapters, her family background, growth environment, and behavior style have created a character who has a strong love for love.

This book is too poisonous. After reading dozens of chapters, I felt like my intestines were twisted together. It was really frustrating.

One chapter a day. You'd better stop writing. What do you want the readers who like to read your book to think about Hunger Marketing? Or if you want to pass the time by writing in your spare time, then don't complain about why your book is so bad. You deserve it if more and more people unsubscribe. Finally, I have been reading your books and saw a letter you wrote to a reader. I also understand what you wrote next. It was not very satisfactory and I also said goodbye (in the end, don't complain if you don't like it, personal opinion)

In fact, this book has great potential from the introduction But the content is not that good. Ten years of childhood sweethearts are not as good as eight years of long-distance love (I don't think so anyway) Although Lin Fei was rejected after the college entrance examination and was reborn at this time. Although An Simeng refused to confess, his feelings for Lin Feisheng could be seen by even a fool. Not to mention that in the latest chapter, An Simeng was still licking Lin Feisheng in the hope of returning to his original relationship. Where is Lin Feisheng? Fang Enxue, the girl who has been in love for eight years, is only a freshman in high school, but the protagonist is a freshman. Wouldn't it take three years for them to get to know each other? Book lovers don't have such leisure, after all, this is the era of fast food. Forget about waiting for three years. I really can't understand the rhythm of QQ messages. This and An Simeng's licking of Lin Feisheng are the two major poisonous points of this book at present. The rest can be tolerated. This is how I view this book at the moment

Awesome

I felt so uncomfortable when I saw it, and I couldn't tell what was wrong with it 😢😢😢

I can only say that "setting", something where the author has the final right of interpretation, is really easy to use. No matter how many teas and female watches are created, it can be solved. I rejected you, I didn't give you an explanation for several months during the summer vacation, and I didn't look for you once in two years of college. But I am "set" to like you. There are reasons for those situations.

Author, I'm different from others. I just saw you, the protagonist, hooking up with a school girl who hasn't even taken the college entrance examination in college. I followed you because my girlfriend is also a sophomore in high school and I'm a freshman, so I wanted to see how he talked. And I also have a childhood sweetheart in college, but I haven't seen him since high school.

The writing is quite good, but there is no problem in writing such a detailed plot on a daily basis, but the update is the biggest problem. It is so short and it is updated once a day. I will save at least a hundred chapters before reading it. Will there be eunuchs in three months?

Come on, I still can't stand this kind of subject matter.

In order to celebrate the old pigeon's awakening and restoration of updates, a special event is held, with a reward of 4500 points and a reward of 5000 points, limited to one person. (Already made an appointment) Since the fund will not be available until next month, relevant personnel will come to claim the prize next month.

Generally speaking, there is nothing wrong with Ascension and Simeng. Before rebirth, Simeng was his light in Ascension's world. The light disappeared, darkness enveloped him, powerlessness, anger, anger and all other negative emotions accompanied him. Simeng also dared not go to him because she was afraid that he would ignore her and yell at her. If her best friend had been smarter, this would not have been the ending. If you have to argue about who is right and who is wrong, it would be the author and Simeng's best friend.

Please agree to join me in the group. 😆

A mere 150,000 words made me cry three times? What do you mean? {"NickName":"Qingmei Cooking Wine Elementary School Girl","UserId":214319208}

I read novels in the fifth grade of elementary school, and now I am a sophomore. I have no money, but I have a feeling that if the level and quality remain the same, this book can be regarded as a god. At least I like it very much. Come on. Author {"NickName":"","UserId":214319208}

Yanzu, did you come in to read book reviews again? I must have caught you. The book review area is very messy, just refer to it for reference, we can't grasp it. Come to the comment area after reading this book 🤓. This way you can see the truth.

Many people say that elementary school girls are still just passers-by. How can one like elementary school girls? In fact, I think (personal opinion, please don't comment), Ann makes me depressed, and my elementary school girl makes me heal. Why should I like Ann? We have been secretly in love with each other for ten years from elementary school to high school. There is no explanation for the classic saying "I don't want to fall in love before college". It breaks my heart. You still want me to be nice to you as if nothing happened. Is that so mean? The elementary school girl has been with you for the eight years since your freshman year, from campus to marriage. Although the time is not as long as the time you spent with An, she has gone from being embarrassed to cheering up. When you are in a low mood, there is someone who stays by your side and never leaves you. You will never forget it even if you want to.

Funny, are you serious about this update? Before, when you were thinking about the eunuch, you said that you would lose it if you read too much. This is the update. You should die if you read too much? How do I ask someone to read it?

I heard that the author was scolded by a cat, but what Qingmei portrays is a real tm. She is not lovable and feels a bit annoying. This best friend is also a bitch, and she has succeeded in making Qingmei even more annoying. It doesn't matter. The male protagonist is also a tough guy who can't get enough of her. He flirts with a girl from elementary school while being awkward and pretentious with Qingmei. Like a certain book reviewer said The male protagonist should be clean. Qingmei feels that if she doesn't pursue this blue friend, she will wipe it out. Bravely chasing her husband and competing with the elementary school girl instead of getting more and more annoyed by these two.

If you are a high school student, just treat what I say next as fart. Really, really don't write novels in the future, it's not suitable for you. My other account has automatic subscription turned on all the time. The content can't be said to be that good, but there are really not many such as Qidian, so I feel that there are a lot of people following it. Let's take a look at a few single chapters you posted. What you mean is that due to the special period, you are preparing for the exam and the updates are slow. Then you start to talk about your grades and feel that the subscription has dropped a little bit. No one has read this book. Everyone knows that updates are the main problem. In fact, it was very problematic for you to update before it was put on the shelves, but many people still followed it. After it was put on the shelves, the first order was over 3,000, and the next few books were still over 1,000. In fact, in the light novel category, the first order was over 1,000, don't you have an author group or something? Over a thousand is really not too low, and that's still under the circumstances of your underworld being updated. It can also be seen that you are taking this book seriously and created your own group. Although I did not join, it is actually not a good thing for a new writer to gain a readership. This book is entirely your own problem, and I believe you know it. It feels like you are already thinking about the content of the next book before this one is over. If you can't guarantee your updates and say nothing, your enthusiasm will be dampened. When this book still had some success, you didn't try to update it steadily for two weeks to see how readers would retain it. I only saw your intermittent updates, chapter by chapter, and then disappeared. Then you opened a Talking about your grades in a single chapter, my God, isn't this just like green tea? You feel like your grades are not good because we didn't follow up on the order, and then you can't write anymore. In the end, it's still your fault. Then you start to prepare your new book, and it will still be like this for the next one? Is what you wrote interesting? As a newcomer, you can openly tell everyone that this book ends here because of your own problems. There is no need to talk about other things, which will only make people disgusted. You only need to explain to the people in your group. The last chapter you opened is really unsolvable.

After reading a few chapters, I was really speechless by the novel and couldn't help but come to the comment area. I'm not saying this novel is bad. If it were, I would leave immediately. There's nothing wrong with him. The question is, with all the plot development and character psychology, why are you posting a male video? 😅😅😅I'm going to vomit, it's really rotten. What I want to see: [Actionist] The male protagonist strengthens himself and stays away from Qingmei. Qingmei is puzzled and watches the male protagonist go further and further away. Finally, he realizes that if he does not seize the last chance, there will be no future. He muster up the courage to fight for his love. I believe that no matter how the three endings of the three-part family reunion between childhood friends turn out, at least this plot line will be acceptable to everyone. What the author thinks I want to read: [Emotional School] Qingmei Qingmei doesn't know, the school girls don't know, the male lead and the male lead are entangled here, not to mention the later development, not many people can endure it until the end, but everyone is speechless.

Is it okay to give a happy ending, or a harem? Life is already very heavy. After all the hardships, happiness comes. It doesn't matter whether it's right or wrong. Don't write light novels in a sadistic way. Have a happy ending. It's really painful to watch.

I have been reading novels for ten years, but I have never seen such a mean protagonist, such a teasing heroine, and such a good friend all appear in a book worth 100,000 words, md, I believed the author's lies after reading it, tui, spat, and left.

Alas, this author's operation is really off the mark. Let's not talk about whether you can achieve the initial order of 3,000 in the future. Just this operation of this book will ruin your character. If you see this author in the future, you will avoid it. If you want to be a bad eunuch, then be a good eunuch. Send out the outline and don't hang around. Book friends, if you want to write, you can even update it once a day. You post a code every day, hoping to let the whole world know that you are going to update. As a result, you don't even build Word, and every word of the code disappears every month. It's really yours. I will avoid this author when I see him in the future.