Reading Makes You a God

The timing of this book was wrong. If it had been written in 2015, it might have had a chance to reach platinum status. Writing it in 2021, however, offered little hope. Readers are no longer novice; their experience is more mature. While the author may not understand the underlying tension, the constant angry outbursts are repetitive and repetitive.

The writing is alright, but it's too tragic, and the plot twists are too weak.

This is an original, awkward story. In the first few dozen chapters, the human race gets slaughtered by thousands every now and then. When the actual fighting starts, the teammates are all just talking nonsense; not a single one of them believes the protagonist can beat the enemy. They force a fight where a one-punch kill is possible. Forget it, goodbye.

Why is there not a single person in this book?

This is garbage. I watched half of it, and instead of watching the protagonist pretending to be weak to outwit the enemy, he became more and more like a pig. It felt like the protagonist was getting weaker and weaker. He could have easily defeated them with one punch, but he insisted on making it seem like they were evenly matched.

Every chapter is filled with hatred, condemning them to death and torn to pieces. One instance of this is interesting, but it's all just awkward. And they're all brainless. Upon seeing the alien race, they charge forward from kilometers away, roaring. So reckless, knowing the danger, yet they're repeatedly ambushed and wiped out. Then they start hating, condemning them to death, shouting with bloodshot eyes. It's truly utterly devoid of any appeal.

The author felt repressed, but the reader actually felt incredibly awkward.

Well, the ideas are good, but the author's writing skills are lacking. I don't have much desire to continue reading. I only read a few chapters and then I don't want to continue.

Do you even know the word "out of place"? You've put yourself into that alternate world, but is it really that easy to integrate? Logically, it's unlikely the male protagonist would react with such madness upon hearing about the killing of humans, like he'd lost his parents or gone mad. I feel like you're prioritizing plot over character development.

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