Douluo: Capturing the Goddess Starting from Qian Renxue

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the writing is okay, the plot is okay, and the logic is smooth. There are some flaws There is too much hatred for the protagonist group. In fact, there is no need for Douluo fans to cling to Tang San all the time. They can downplay them, including the protagonist group. Especially there is no need to break up the relationship between the original couple (similar to the male and female protagonists). But compared to Qian Renxue. A poor woman like Hu Liena could use a little help. The other is the emotional scene, which is too frivolous. It's best not to take up a large proportion of emotional scenes. It doesn't have to be too studly either. The overall look and feel is okay. Unfortunately, it was written about Douluo. He can never surpass the third young master of the Tang family. You can never get past Tang 3. Downplaying the profound characters in the original work. It's actually good to write more about the inconspicuous but profound small characters in the original work.

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You can accept anyone. What do you think about accepting Xueke? Forget it if the emotional line is poorly written. The harem story is just a harem. Did you write it as a stallion👌? Is it really just a matter of accepting one when you see one or two of them?

There should be more Liu Erlong or Bibi Dong who look like Xiaowu's mother Tang Yuehua, etc. Anyway, just follow Cao Cao's standards 😏😏

I, a farmer, can't stand the poison of your belt. After absorbing two ten thousand year soul rings, you are only at level 20? The third ring of 100,000 years is only level 30? You should still have common sense, personal opinion

Just set it up to be disgusting, and also reward the system with favorability points, so that the system can directly change her thinking and let her promise her body.

Qian Renxue

One word, poison! What kind of person can write this! Recommend a book "Douluo: Falling out of love can make you stronger" It can be called the pinnacle of Douluo heroines!

Zhu Zhuqing

Ning Rongrong

For such a loose novel, you charge for more than 30 chapters. Where did you get the courage, author?

The part in Chapter 2 when Qian Renxue obtained the third soul ring was too fake. Qian Renxue was ten years older than the Tang Dynasty. That means Qian Renxue was sixteen years old and had just reached level 30 to obtain the third soul ring. She had an innate soul power of level 20 and it took ten years to reach level 10, one level per year.

Xiao Wu

This setting is really disgusting. The system's soul rings are added without adding soul power. A 100,000-year-old soul ring only has one skill. It's better to hunt the soul beast by yourself and poison it to death.

The whole book is too loose and difficult to read.

I actually looked like the goddess who started cumming from Qian Renxue 😏

Is this lj book still being updated? What kind of Douluo fan is this nonsense?

Why are there only 9 female protagonists? Dozens of female protagonists can't stand up to the protagonist?

A hundred thousand year old beast is loved by so many people, wouldn't the rabbit meat taste delicious? Or is it that the soul ring and soul bones are no longer useful?

Ye Lingling

Qian Renxue

It collapsed at the beginning. Qian Renxue was born with level 20 soul power, but she only reached level 30 when she was thirteen or fourteen years old. Are you kidding me? Even if you want to lurk in Tiandou, you can't practice so slowly. Such a good talent will be wasted. Qian Daoliu can agree, it's too poisonous.

Qian Renxue was born at level 20 at the age of 6 and absorbed two soul rings, which must be at least level 22. The author writes that Qian Renxue is now 14 years old and at level 30, and is hunting for the third soul ring. In other words, it took eight years to reach level eight. You think Qian Renxue's qualifications are Yu Xiaogang's. What's even more ridiculous is that Qian Renxue has been in the industry since she was a child. She was taught by many Titled Douluo and absorbed soul bones, and is a god-level martial soul owner. And the author wrote Qian Renxue. She can't even defeat a soul beast that is over a thousand years old. It's simply. Why doesn't this author who is not even as good as the catalog party go to LLLII/IILL!

I thought that I would be able to read a good book with some expectations, but I never expected that I couldn't help but complain. If I hadn't been about to read, I would have written a book for these rubbish to read.

Are you reading the fanfic and writing the novel? You haven't read the original work at all. It's really poisonous.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

Author, will Zhu Zhuyun in your novel die?

The most awesome book I have ever read, charging starts at chapter 30, 666

Very well written, don't write it next time

Wuhun sounds awesome but is trash when used.