Dream Projection Begins with Naruto

This book is okay overall, but I would like to make a personal recommendation. The first is that the emotional line is really not that good. I hope the author can handle the emotional line better and not make the existence of Kaguya and the Uchiha woman too weak. This Uchiha woman is completely free, and Mio actually accepts it. I don't understand why it is written like this. There is no foreshadowing in the middle. It seems that it is written purely for the purpose of opening a harem, which is a bit inexplicable. The second is that I hope the author can change the character of the protagonist lsp. The part about sucking Kanae's neck is completely unnecessary. If she is not awake, she still has to accept it reluctantly, but the protagonist is already awake, and deliberately doing this is a bit too much. There is also the previous paragraph about saving Ye Cang. There is no need to write that the protagonist is interested in her back. It is easy for people to think that the protagonist saves her because of lust (such as me). There is no need to write these plots. The third thing is that I hope that the world the author writes about can be more popular, or that readers' opinions can be seen. Refreshing the sword for the totem world was already very confusing. When writing Infinite Stream, what you focus on is the audience. Whether you choose the world first and then write the outline, or write the outline first and then choose the world, the audience is very important. There are always some worlds that have many people who like it, and it is also useful for the protagonist's strength. Demon Slayer aside, I've heard of it but not seen it. It seems to be quite famous, but I've never heard of the Totem World I'm going to write about later. I think I'm not the only one who feels this way.

The writing is smooth, the plot is acceptable, and the emotional description is not harsh. I personally think it is a good book, but I hope the author can improve his writing style and provide a little more emotional foreshadowing and progress details (personal evaluation, if it is not in place, please don't criticize too harshly)

As the Hokage, Minato went to war, and the three generations were in power. He was euphemistically called the city behind 🤫 Rainin, Raikage went to the battlefield🤫

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Don't read this author's books anymore. He copied them. I have seen a book called (Xinhua Dictionary). He just messed up the order. I can fool you, but don't try to fool me.

Quick update

Here is an idea. Look, there is no Caged Bird yet, and the protagonist is still researching on extracting the essence of Byakugan. If the protagonist is asked to develop Caged Bird, leave Yibidian as a backup. For example, the real function is not to destroy Byakugan, but to drain the essence of Byakugan in an instant after death, and then transport it to Black Zetsu 😏😏😏

😂I have read a lot of Naruto novels, and I have reached new limits again and again. Three, four or five years old is ordinary. He rose to prominence at the age of 6 and was on par with jounin. He became famous in the ninja world at the age of 7. Eight-year-old film level. Having had a super shadow at the age of thirteen, of course, there are also those who had it earlier. The Six Paths will begin at the age of fourteen. The protagonist must have Wood Escape. The protagonist must learn magic. As for Uchiha, there will be a kaleidoscope at the beginning. The authors have never thought that no matter how powerful the blood stains are, your body will have to grow to adulthood to be able to withstand it. Senju Hashirama and Uchiha Madara did not debut until they were in their 20s and became famous in the ninja world

Senju Hashirama, Tobirama, the protagonist randomly chooses Senju's house, wouldn't it become Senju Hashirama?

Every time I read fan fiction, my eggs break when I blow the Hinata Baguazhang! Stop blowing Hinata's Baguazhang! It's just a show-off technique with no real meaning! Why slap someone so many times just to block someone else's chakra? I could tie a dagger to someone and turn them into a hornet's nest! Wouldn't it be nice to directly destroy other people's meridians with one palm, or destroy other people's internal organs with one palm? Why are you bragging about hitting Susan with more than 500 palms? He didn't hit anyone, so Susan stood still and let you hit him? If Susan is slapped directly by someone else, if you don't dodge, you'll turn into a pulp! Naruto's Hinata Baguazhang was a failure and was completely for show, so Kishimoto has been downplaying Hinata's chance of playing in the later period, and added a Divine Sky Strike to Kaguya and Tsuki Hyuga!

Hei Zetsu is really the number one filial son in heaven, okayヽ(￣д￣;)ノ

I don't want to poke the needle, I hope that the subsequent plot will not be too shocking, and more importantly, everyone will not be outwitted 🙂🙂🙂

There are not many honest people like this author. It is really rare to be able to write a refreshing article that is not annoying. Although the author can't control it, he always pulls the crotch halfway. But I think the author still has a lot of room for improvement. You can watch more anime, novels, movies, TV series, etc. Make up for the story details. Travel through the world several more times. I hope the author can write interesting and long-lasting refreshing articles.

After reading hundreds of pictures, I suddenly realized that you are the author of Naruto's explosive equipment. I really don't know what to say. ^_^♪ Come on 😄

The author will update soon, I will watch the ads to support you after it is released🐶

The protagonist wasted five or six years just for the 50% discount, which meant saving about 10,000. This time is enough for the protagonist to travel through time more than a dozen times, and he has already become invincible. Water for the sake of water, forcing the protagonist to be suppressed

You can use the Demon Slayer Breathing Technique or even Tsukuni Enichi, but if you get a half-ghost body, it will be disgusting, because the ghosts in it are really disgusting. If you stick a little bit on it, wouldn't it feel like you stepped on shit?

What is this world called Demon Slayer? This world is over. The author called me "Haha" and I continued reading. I didn't even know what Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba was.

Danzo: Whether you are a time traveler or a reborn person, please listen carefully. Please stop showing off. The root is already full of people. The ninja school shows off its strength every day, and there are people doing big things every day. Please keep a low profile and study hard in school. The 6-year-old jounin, 7-year-old special jounin, 8-year-old shadow level, 9-year-old shadow level, 10-year-old six-level level... In the root can all form a division. 😁😁😁

The protagonist returns to the prehistory of Naruto. As the emperor. Haven't you given Princess Kaguya a correct outlook on life for more than ten years? He can also raise two traitors and be sealed. . The world of Naruto can also be developed. Speechless. I'm speechless. . .

I just saw that you have opened a new book. I came here from the old book. I haven't read this book yet, so I want to check in first. 😁😁😁

This is the only book I haven't read. I read it when it's updated. I wait until two chapters on time at 0 o'clock every day. First of all, I haven't watched more than 700 episodes of Naruto, but I read novels and play Naruto (2nd Dan Kage, so I count it as a Mizukage), but I have read a lot of readers' words and some plots in fan books. , I also know the order of the big plot of Naruto, and I also know some of the smaller ones, but I don't know any more. I have read a lot of settings of Naruto fanfics, and I have turned them over and over again. It seems that they are always the same: a happy family, a high-popular life, a low-popular one. Death is outrageous, and there are also people who do research, but those fan books that do research, grab Orochimaru, throw in a knowledge book, or say a few brainwashing words, Orochimaru is willing to work. I admit Orochimaru is obsessed with science, but he doesn't become willing so quickly. It's as fast as three seconds (you, readers and authors, can take as long as you want. I read this book, my dear, and even copied the book reviews, which is very interesting. The author often comes out to chat, and after reading the content of the book, I think it is one of the best Naruto fandoms, and it suits my taste. , As for the harem, it is more acceptable not to let other harems know about it. When it comes to Orochimaru's research before, I strongly suggest not to write the same thing as that. If you do research later, you can bring Orochimaru, but don't be so hasty, and I think it is necessary to improve it. The thoughts of some people in the ninja world, if they want to be the mastermind behind the scenes, let Black Zetsu infect some people from childhood, or the author will accept talents in the future, and the author should unify the goals of the organization. I think one person's strength is not strong, the key is that a group of people are strong, that is strong, Ninja The world is very big. After defeating Otsutsuki outside the world, you can completely open up your imagination to the ninja world. Especially the Otsutsuki outside the ninja world must have a few experienced martial arts people. Otherwise, I really don't know how this family spans the stars. It can completely start a tug-of-war and develop the land at the same time. While facing the enemy, this is my evaluation of this excellent fan novel, as well as my future thoughts. The evaluation has yet to be formulated. After all, these are the three golden chapters in the early stage of this book (although I have invested in it). Everyone understands it. If this is the case in the mid-term, I will make a direct profit.

1. In the latest chapter, the author posted a method to get points by watching advertising videos. But it takes some time. 2. Everyone, please post more fanart pictures and get some coins. (Original ones can turn on the easter egg chapter button, andfanarts or fan videos copied by the author can get 188 points in the next week, and get a "Fan Touch" title. It can help the author subscribe to more than 5 chapters. This is the easiest way to earn some coins.) If you can't think of an original picture to post, you can post the meal or food you ate today, or just take a photo of flowers and plants on the roadside. 3. When this book has an operating fund, book club activities can be held. Everyone can participate according to their own conditions. This is another way to obtain point coins. The premise is that the majority of book friends need to support all the way and post fanart.

My hands are so mean, it's just this small, click in, isn't this asking for abuse o(╥╥)o, the author should update it more

As the protagonist's son, Black Zetsu is extremely reliable. His wife is Kaguya Hokage, which is rare in the literature. It feels a bit like a science fiction novel, with various timelines and various foreshadowings.

This book is based on a misunderstanding of chakra. Nowadays, Naruto fans basically understand it this way. They forcefully believe that chakra needs to be cultivated to be enhanced. The plot based on this is too uncomfortable to watch.

Well, I suggest the author not to write too many original characters in the early stage. One Hyuga lady is enough. That Uchiha girl really destroys the sense of substitution.

I want to know when to bring the Butterfly Ninja here... This book feels quite good. In fact, it feels too grinding at times. Danzo can obviously be killed directly, but he still put it later and tricked Konoha again with the Third Generation. But this was probably just to disappoint Minato. I really want to see what will happen if I take Demon Slayer's two wives back. And I feel that projection is of no use to the current protagonists. People who can only train soul-type protagonists cannot be brought through... Now that Naruto is finished, the importance of those subordinates has been reduced. They only need to guard against the Otsutsuki clan, but there is no need for the protagonists like scientific research, whose strength has greatly increased. It would be good if the protagonist's subordinates could directly use the projection to attack the heavens.