Ninjas with the Wrong Lineup at the Start

A dog's salty fish system, an adult's soul, a world where human life is not as good as a dog's. Adults should know the value of knowledge, let alone a dog, how many years can't it be done? He applied for early graduation within less than a year of school, and went out to live a life of a lackey with no tomorrow. The Will of Fire is really scary. A time traveler was brainwashed in less than a year. And to someone you just met for a few days, you teach Tai Chi and give you system treasures and psychic scrolls. Obito is your son? Or is Kakashi your wife, how do you explain it if the third generation knows about it?

Ten Naruto books, nine Konoha books, eight Uchiha books, and seven Invincible books.

In fact, the writing is quite interesting, but can you remove the self-pleasure content and delete the plot where the protagonist quarrels with the author and Naruto's character is an inexplicable prophet? As a reader, I actually hate this kind of plot. Not interesting, but embarrassing

The author basically didn't take the original work seriously and wrote it without thinking. It is recommended not to read it with thinking.

It's long-winded and messy, and the proportion of self-pleasure is still high. It's not that easy to write routines and short stories, so practice more.

Thank you Shennong for testing poison. This was a routine from many years ago. It's too old.

To be honest, the protagonist should have been born in Sunagakure. The main abilities I got were from Sunagakure Village, but I didn't dare to use them in Konoha. This kind of thing is obviously very awesome but cannot be used well. It feels aggrieved.

Thank you Shennong for testing the poison. He slipped away.

The Chuunin exam does not require magnetic release and sand gold. Didn't you know that a genin in Konoha who knows the magnetic release ninjutsu would be an even greater blow to the sand ninja village? Afraid of a ball?

Why not just write about Sand Ninja Village? Wouldn't it be more innovative to change the place?

It is recommended not to write about things outside the ninja world. If Tai Chi is written at a low level, some people are not happy. If it is written at a high level, some people are not happy. Later, didn't Hinata also create a boxing technique that combines hardness and softness? What can I say? Also, when Obito went to the Pure Land, Lin was always waiting for Obito, saying that he finally found me... The article said that Lin had always liked Kakashi, was it in this river?

Chapter 13: Being poisoned, giving Kakashi props and mini Kakashi in public is like giving out a mobile phone that can watch Tik Tok in the 1990s. The problem is not to be caught by the root.

The content is a bit complicated, and after reading some of the previous ones, there is nothing particularly attractive. In fact, you can learn from comics and animations, but you have to choose. Many plots of old animations or comics are actually cliche. After all, if you want what others want, you can also want it, right? The plot has been used so many times over the years, so it's very cliche. Anyway, I still don't see anything from the previous parts.

In fact, the earth is also a legend of eyes. The history of biological evolution is also a history of eye evolution. Friends who are interested can go to station b and search for the video, Kidd: The Evolution of Eyes! !

Daily poisoning A weak system gives a weak ability. I was targeted by the Third Hokage and Danzo, but I couldn't take care of it well. I even took care of Obito and Kakashi. I was drunk. I am Shennong. I withdraw. No need to thank you.

I searched all over and couldn't find where did Kakashi get his Kamui before Chapter 31? Obito didn't even graduate yet so Kakashi already had Kamui? And I remember that Kakashi graduated after his father committed suicide. His writing was messy.

Improvise, and explore the style that suits you while writing (mainly exploring how to be cool, bah! How to write comfortably.) I always write whatever comes to my mind, so if you don't like it, don't force yourself to read it.