The Light of the Sun on the Journey to the Stars

Thank you to the book friends who voted for recommendation! It is your actions that allow this book, which is hidden at the bottom of the sea of ​​books and has rarely seen the light of day, to float up a little bit, allowing me to have the confidence to continue writing. Thanks to my friends who have read this book. Whether you have collected it or paid attention to it, you have all witnessed the existence of this book. This is where the author finds comfort. I believe the book will get better and better. Please give me more time and try not to disappoint everyone.

It can be seen that the author is very careful and put a lot of effort into setting the background. This book is also worth reading. But I also made some suggestions. First, break down the background introduction in the first chapter and integrate it into the plot. You can learn about it through dialogue or the protagonist reading a book. Not many people in today's society like to focus on the background settings of newcomers' works. Second, pay close attention to paragraphing. This is also an opinion that others have given me. Try not to have too long paragraphs, preferably one sentence at a time, because now people like to read novels on mobile phones. The mobile phone screen is small and the fonts are small. Paragraphs that are too long will seriously affect reading. Third, if you look back at the finished work on your mobile phone, you may find some problems that were not discovered when you wrote it. . Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it