The First Dandy in Yanhuang

I have been reading this book, please use the trumpet to post a review. The author said that it took ten years for this book to be published. I believe it. This book does not have the routines that are popular today. While writers are working hard to come up with novel systems, the author of this book has no system at all. In addition, the beginning is a bit bland. It is understandable that the book has not signed a contract for more than 900,000 words. However, the author is really attentive, with very rigorous logic and worldview. The protagonist's halo is not too big, so the rest of the supporting characters can also be written with flesh and blood, and the foreshadowing is also written with great care. The three news guesses read by the palace maid at the beginning are three foreshadowings, but they are a bit too obscure. The beginning is slow, without any intense conflicts. It is completely about the male protagonist developing his power from scratch. It is considered a farming novel, but the writing style is still humorous and light-hearted. The author said that he was most influenced by the mercenaries, Zichuan and Song of Light and Darkness. The writing style of this book can indeed be seen. There are some similarities. The protagonist's character is like a combination of Amy and Lei Yan. The description of the war also has the shadow of mercenaries and Zichuan. However, this war appeared too late. The real fighting started at the end of the second volume. Fortunately, the fighting continued one after another, which was quite enjoyable. The author has put a lot of effort into brotherhood, and is obviously influenced by the mercenaries and Zichuan. The male protagonist and the second male lead are more like the CP of Guangyin Lei Zhan. In short, this book has old routines and a slow start. It is completely in the style of dynasty war novels in the early years. However, the author is very logical, has rich knowledge reserves, and writes very carefully. Each force is slowly unfolding. It is a real dynasty war novel. The more you can read it, the more you will like to follow it. If you can't read it, you will abandon the article in the second chapter. Old white people can consider reading it. Those who don't like to use their brains and just want to read cool articles may not be suitable for reading.

I have been reading novels online for more than ten years. At that time, I was still lying on the bed in my college dormitory, reading on a small-screen mobile phone. The three favorite books at that time were "Mercenary World", "Purple River" and "Song of Light and Darkness". The cat of light and darkness only wrote more than 600,000 yuan and became an eunuch. Many people were so angry that they vomited blood! As an old reader, one of my two Baidu accounts is now the bar owner of the Mercenary World Bar, and the other is the bar owner of the Song of Light and Darkness Bar. I have also reached the top ten experience points in Zichuan Bar. I thought back then that I must write a story of my own. But I don't have enough time to write, so I can only take time to write. Naturally, I don't dare to publish it easily. It took three years to conceive the story framework, six years to write the first draft of more than two million words, and nine years later I am here to publish it! During this period, I was taking postgraduate entrance examinations, postgraduate studies, and public service examinations. I left my hometown and came to work. I shed tears when I want to speak... My story does not have the popular system today, but the protagonist has a group of good brothers who truly depend on each other for life and death. They are the protagonist's real aura! At the beginning of the novel, the protagonist does not do very cool and awesome things right away, but it will definitely be written in a relaxed and humorous way. The coolness will make you passionate for a while, but being more relaxed will make you relax and calm~ As a senior military fan and history fan, the description of large-scale wars is absolutely indispensable. Therefore, fierce battles and internecine battles between emperors of various countries have appeared one after another! Especially starting from the second half of the second volume (a total of six volumes in the book), these plots will gradually become the main theme. Yuanfeng guarantees that this book has a complete worldview and is logically rigorous. Emperors and generals of all countries and races are not fools. Every behavior and decision-making of the characters is logical! Make sure the whole story is coherent! This is a real dynasty battle for hegemony! Four faiths, six ethnic groups, and nine countries are connected vertically and horizontally. A small move in the easternmost part of the continent will also cause a chain reaction in the westernmost part of the continent! In order to achieve this, Yuanfeng prepared a 100,000-word outline and drew multiple maps before he officially started writing! The most important thing is that I can guarantee that this book will be endless! After all, although the first draft is rough, it is almost complete! If you click in and see this text, if you like the real dynasty struggle for hegemony, Yuanfeng hopes that you can tolerate the slightly slow start (you can skip the beginning if it doesn't work), give Yuanfeng a chance, and give this book a chance! Of course, no matter what, Yuanfeng sincerely thanks the friends who can read these lines of text, and sincerely thanks every friend who clicks into the page of this book!

The map of this book, click on the comment first and then open the map to make it clearer. Yuanfeng is not very good at drawing, so I tried my best~

Only when the machine is filled with oil can it have the power to move forward! Please support the original version and let the author be full of power to defeat all the little monsters!

The ups and downs of the plot of this book make people feel like riding a roller coaster. It definitely deserves extra points. Mark it!

I have to say that this book is very suitable for my taste, but the number of words is a bit short and it is not satisfying at all.

Articles with similar themes have high intellectual content, and the author's writing style is really important!

It's pretty good. It's more enjoyable to watch than some of the ones on the list.

Praise! I will continue to follow, there is nothing to say about the recommendation vote.

The plot is one after another, and it is enjoyable to read.

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Awesome! The author is a cruel person! Just because you didn't publish more than one million words, I will give you the recommendation vote!

Read the comments, why do they say the good ones are all trainees?

Read the book reviews and then read the book. The seduction in the underworld at the beginning is hundreds of years old, but what follows next. Is the writing superb? Is it a good idea? A perfect piece of writing. What happened to book reviews now. Did you buy the Navy?

The evaluation is really average. The writing style is a bit inexplicably awkward, and the routine is a bit old-fashioned. It's like an assembly line work. Obviously what you write is not an assembly line work, but it feels like an assembly line Summary, the writing is average, a little better than an assembly line, but that's it.

For several important characters in the article, the author describes the relationship between them very appropriately, and the links are very natural. I don't just mess with the relationship of the characters casually to make up for the numbers. I like this very much.

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I like this type of writing, I'm attracted to it, it's rich in content.

Hahahaha, to be honest, I bet that this could be a book written by a newbie who just started in the industry? ? ?

The novel is quite good. It can contain new ideas in the ordinary. It is twists and turns and evocative. The writing is well controlled.

The protagonist's character design is outstanding, even if there are some shortcomings, because no one is perfect, but the author's description is heart-warming, and the characters are all likeable. The plot must be based on it, and the grasp is very keen. Most of the time, you will be watching it intently.

The male protagonist is still a bit kind, and now the more evil he is, the more interesting he is, but this is okay, it's pretty good. The most important thing is to maintain this writing style.

Why doesn't the author put it on the shelves?

After reading so many online novels, this is the first time I saw this novel where typos are hard to find. What a miracle!

I finished reading it in six days. It's good. Although it has some bad points, its faults do not hide its merits. It is a masterpiece. When will a new book be released?

Maybe writing this kind of novel requires imagination. The author's layout is very clear, and some places cannot be skipped. If you skip it, you may find that you don't understand it. This is what I think is the most worthwhile part of this novel.

The characters in the book are not absolutely good or bad, they just have different positions. Good book.

This book is a waste of money. The logic, plot, writing style, etc. Are all recommended 👍👍👍. It's not completely a waste of time.

A lot of high-energy and high-level settings, which is great.

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁