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Current progress: Chapter 1: Flame Cultist Recommendation Index: ★★(two stars) The advantage is that the setting is okay. (+☆)1. The setting is not outstanding, but it is interesting enough. Don't live up to this setting. There are many shortcomings (-★) 1. The protagonist is very mentally retarded. Although the current body is said to be 10 years old, the soul is actually 20 years old. I have a little question here: Author, are you over 20? (-★)2. The plot is very stiff. The plots of many good novels are "natural". They don't write plots for the sake of plot. In other words, the coincidences they write seem to be coincidences. This book is very stiff in many places. (-☆)3. The character image is not very good either. But compared with the above two points, it's just nothing (-☆) 4. Fighting is not very good. It's not that it's not well written, but it's that it didn't give full play to its potential, and the inconsistency in its performance was very uncomfortable. Personal preference: (-☆) 1. It doesn't matter whether it is a college or not, but knowledge is truth and knowledge is power. This is especially true in another world. I don't mind the protagonist getting talents such as "photographic memory" But I am dissatisfied with the protagonist not learning. Magic precisely embodies the power of personal knowledge In reality, we cannot learn things like "gravity" and so on, and it will immediately affect reality. However, in fact, human knowledge is also embodied in human technology, such as making circuit boards. Isn't this also true for magic and alchemy in other worlds? To put it another way, what is the difference between alchemy and chemistry? The predecessor of today's chemistry is Western alchemy. Gunpowder was also invented by Chinese alchemists. In addition, it has the feel of a Japanese light novel, both in terms of description techniques and the behavior of the protagonist. This is a disadvantage, not an advantage. Because this is actually similar to "Xiaobaiwen" or something like that. China's online writing has actually come a long way, and naturally many people can't stand these things. Above (Additional: I don't know how detailed the author's outline is, but the outline is to plan the main line, and it is "general". Don't be too detailed. I suspect that the outline for gambling on stones is too detailed, which makes it difficult to change.

To be honest, the author's description of the location is very impressive. It feels like a place, not as big as the world. Of course, other aspects are already very good. There are no bad points. The plot is very exciting and the development arrangements are in place. Come on! Recommend The Master of Hyakumonogatari, well, the location transfer is great, it can be called a benchmark (but the plot is very embarrassing and poisonous...)

Already invested, currently gaining 36 points for 3 achievements, hope to continue working hard! ! !

After reading the introduction, it means that if you upgrade to MAX, can you be resurrected on time the next day if you die?

It feels like the author is not writing about a person who traveled through the first nine years of compulsory education, but a native who was killed by the natives and then absorbed their memories. The protagonist is too childish and cannot look like an adult at all.

The author himself posted: May I ask where did you readers find this book?

The author said that the protagonist is too childish, but it is just a disguise. . . I feel like it's basically described according to a child's thinking. From the names, conversations, descriptions, etc., He is just like a child. Moreover, he is obsessed with calling himself brother. I personally think that he has not been dealt with well. Firstly, it looks more like a little brat. Secondly, the interaction with the heroine is not in place, and the description does have a sense of age. But I have to say that the author's setting and plot are still worth looking forward to! But it's not a problem to keep killing like this. I think this is the trap of this system's experience flow. Maybe it can enrich the protagonist's life from many aspects. Um. I haven't finished reading it yet, but I came to comment after seeing that the protagonist never wanted to go to school. After traveling to another world and arriving in such a world, I feel that the protagonist who has undergone modern education should be more aware of the value of knowledge, especially when he has basically nothing in this world. In fact, I didn't expect that John, whom I met casually, would know so much and be so awesome. However, such an awesome person also suggested that the protagonist go to the academy, which proves that he is irreplaceable in the academy. You can also slow down the pace, acquire more knowledge, and then make upgrade plans. After all, going to the battlefield to kill enemies at the age of ten, even though he has grown up rapidly, is too dangerous in the process (after all, the battlefield), and the protagonist's growth will definitely attract a lot of attention, so it may be more appropriate to wait until he is a little older. I look forward to the author writing the gradual transformation of the protagonist and the anticipated academy or battlefield plot!

What I can't understand is why you won't upgrade to Bronze until you die? What the author said was a quick return to life. Bronze level is ten times more survivable than your so-called life recovery. Also, although a 20-year-old is considered childish by many college students today, does it need to be written as childish as a ten-year-old? They are all people who have experienced life and death, and there is no need to be naive at all. What a waste of subject matter

The indigenous protagonist wearing the skin of a time traveler

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After reading the first three or four volumes, I feel that except for the protagonist, who is not the protagonist, every supporting character is the protagonist. The protagonist is a child, so he should do childish things. There is nothing wrong with what the author wrote!

The realm of tmd has been improved, but the upper limit of physical strength and mental limit have not been increased. Then tell me, what is the use of increasing the realm?

The water panel in every chapter really dissuaded me, and it was really annoying to listen to every chapter on the audiobook I used. A battle is fought over ten times,

Just play without upgrading, right? It's enough to go up two levels, so why do you think it's just a downgrade?

I've looked at dozens of them, and I'll tell you what I think. First of all, the protagonist behaves very childishly. It perfectly shows the mental journey of a ten-year-old child. Secondly, what the protagonist is best at is adding more points when danger approaches. A plot that often appears is, what should I do if I can't beat this person? After thinking for a moment, I decided to add this talent. In addition, the writing logic is still there. It cannot be said to be a poisonous weed, but it is not a fairy grass, it can only be called a food.

I can't stand it anymore when I see that Tian Xing Hui has the same surname as Pig's Foot. It's so stupid.

Why do I feel that John is the real protagonist? He is a scumbag every day and the protagonist can only sit around and eat ashes. Don't tell me about Edith.

The book is not bad, but I read almost twenty books every day, and I always look for other books to find freshness. I have a rough idea of the current world view and setting of this book. I can't tell the subsequent plot, but I can still feel it, so I plan to move it from the bookshelf. The bookshelf is getting more and more books. There are more and more books, and I can't remember many of them. This book is not bad. According to my previous habit, I will save it first, but this time it is different. After all, there are quite a lot of good books. Since I am always looking for freshness and other things, there is no point in keeping this book. Finally, I wish the author a prosperous career and be able to have readers who like this genre to support you. I can read all genres, but there are still some focuses, unlimited flow, and pretentiousness to express different knowledge and different ideas, which makes people's eyes brighten, and the collision of various ideas.

A group has been established for this book: 1021426404. Readers are welcome to join and discuss. This book was revised while writing, and the author has been making progress, hoping to write a novel that will not be a hit on the street.

Such a good subject makes you write badly.

In fact, the writing style, storytelling, freshness, imagination, jokes, etc. Are all okay. Not to mention how good it is, it is readable. I read the book twice and was repelled twice by the female partner who interacted with the protagonist (the second time I skipped the first female partner and was repelled by the second new female partner). Author, believe me, there is no woman in my heart, and I draw my sword to the God of Nature.

The logic is very good and the writing is also very good. But the story is not enough, the conflict is not enough, and the saint is not enough in front of people. Not interesting enough. Very bland and not exciting. The story moves too slowly. The sense of immersion is too low.

Not to mention anything else, I kept suppressing the pig's trotters and upgraded them half way through, but it still turned out to be silver. There was a lot of energy but I just didn't upgrade.

I came here after looking at the title of the book in the introduction, and after reading it, if nothing else, it didn't read smoothly and I was really sorry. It's impossible to control the protagonist of this kind of subject in a normal way.

It's written as if it's a joke

It's too poisonous in the early stage, and the protagonist doesn't upgrade at all. It's true.

What did you say later to save the orcs? Why are you so upset? And who is the heroine?

I feel that the energy points are too versatile. Not only can I add points, but I can also restore the state, which is a bit invincible. It is almost equivalent to unlimited firepower. As a result, the talent of getting up on time has little chance to be used. If the energy points cannot be restored, just add more, and the blue bars and stamina bars can be more, or the skills consume less, and the recovery is slower. If it is empty for a day or two, it will not be full, or if the setting is used below half the amount, the energy will gradually lose power and the recovery speed will gradually slow down. You can also write a little plot about fighting at night until the full state breaks out at dawn. The book "Devil's Cage" is very useful in setting up the plot of the state breaking out at dawn and dusk.

I read a few chapters but didn't understand. I don't know why they were beaten and killed, but in the end there was nothing. You should explain why there is something strange, right?

Is this novel on the decline? I've had this book hanging out for almost a month. Just over twenty chapters have been updated. Is this a quick eunuch?