The Heroine Got the Villain's Script

He Tiantian

The author comes out a lot. If each plot world of this novel were a movie, then the first few chapters were used to unfold the plot and release tasks, and another dozen chapters were used to complete the tasks. It gave the impression that the progress bar was at 56%, and there should be several chapters of exciting plots in the back, but suddenly the next chapter was (finished), and it was very sudden. For example, it's not very good. Let's re-analyze it. The protagonist starts out as a poor scholar who is looked down upon by all kinds of people. Then he studies hard and starts the imperial examination. From a scholar to a Jinshi, he becomes an official. The reader thought that the protagonist was about to start showing off, but the next chapter (ended). That is, I feel that the article you wrote was normal at the beginning, but when the protagonist completes the task, according to the reading inertia, I thought there will be many exciting developments later, and it suddenly (ends). Not every plot is like this. A plot in which the protagonist lives to the end of his life is very good. Instead of the protagonist just completing the mission, he was young and still had a lot to do, and then suddenly left.

This book is really novel. There is not so much revenge and cruelty, and there are not so many heroines who are not confronting the protagonist, and there is no forced whitewash. When the heroine knows that her family is a liar, she will guide her family, and she will try her best to return others' kindness when she is a fake daughter. I really want to find a quick travel novel now. I say that eight out of ten books are all about abuse. It's not that it's bad, but there are too many similar ones that are too violent. This book by the author is quite good. The content is witty and a bit funny. I hope the author will update it quickly and keep this style. The heroine can be written faster. I want to see the heroine feel at ease and travel quickly to meet different scenery.

The author should write more about real life. No matter how powerful you are, you have to have your own happiness. Don't you have an island? Don't be too outrageous to create a scene of birds and flowers. I am not as miserable as before I traveled through time. I still have to live a leisurely life. 😉 Retro buildings, small bridges and flowing water are in people's homes. I keep a few smart dogs to accompany me, dance and play the piano in the sea of ​​flowers, soothe myself, settle down, live a leisurely life that others envy, and go out to sea to salvage a few treasures for the country. Hahahaha, go to the book to experience life and learn some knowledge.

How should I put it, I feel like the writing is a bit perfunctory. There is no logic and the story is not delicate enough. The characters and the story are not that good yet, this small beginning is over. The protagonist is written like a supporting character. You may say that it is written in a simple and easy way, but it is better than these. It's better, but it's much worse. Overall, it doesn't feel exciting and the pace is very fast. After reading it, I didn't feel at all that the author wanted to say something through a short story. You can read this to pass the time in a book shortage

The typical novel has a somewhat incorrect outlook, mainly because the system knows that it is a villain and it has to be based on the villain's personality. It is abnormal to be both bad and bad but not completely good and good. It feels like the author wanted to write this and that again but failed.

Personal preference: I don't want to have a cp. If I do, I also hope that I can meet someone I like in a world and have a sweet love and get married. But if I don't like it in every world, it feels bad. I have seen a lot of cp1v1. Although it is said to be very clean and loyal, in every world, the female protagonist is not raising the male protagonist. The male protagonist is raising the female protagonist. In fact, I think a fixed male protagonist is not suitable for a fast-traveling novel. Is it about doing tasks or falling in love? Especially when most female protagonists meet the male protagonist, their IQ drops, and many things are done by the male protagonist. Therefore, this is a fast-traveling male novel 🤔, so I prefer to be in some worlds. You can really fall in love when you meet someone you like in it, just like how many people in life don't fall in love. Some fast-traveling novels don't fall in love, and you don't get married or have children. Although I like the writing, I always feel that it imposes some limitations on the author. Maybe some tasks are difficult to complete, so I won't write them out. Besides, I I feel that many of them are fast-travel counterattacks. For example, the previous life was tragic and the missionaries were required to counterattack in this life. Most families wanted the next generation. In the end, the missionaries were clean physically and mentally and were unwilling to get married. This is still acceptable in modern times. In ancient times, I think it was a bit too difficult, especially in ancient times. Everyone wanted a child... There was also talk of adoption, but the feeling was different. Heehee, I hope the author of this new book can be bold enough to dress up as a man, woman, animal, etc., And let the author take full advantage of her nature as a stepmother! I have finished watching the first two parts and I like you 😄

Well, I have read more than 500 chapters. At first I thought this article was great. The heroine is very strong and makes people feel comfortable. It is definitely my favorite. I feel like it is a treasured article. But I felt tired while watching it. There were too many explanations, many ideas were repeated over and over again, and a lot of words were used to repeatedly emphasize the heroine's thoughts, explaining this and that. The characterization of the plot and characters was slightly lacking, with too little description and too much explanation. It's a pity that I decided to stop at Chapter 541. Maybe I will be interested in reading this book again after seeing it on the bookshelf.

I particularly like the character of the heroine, who repays kindness and revenge. Although the heroine is very partial to her family, she has a clear sense of right and wrong and has very upright views. She naturally cares and protects her good relatives.

What is cp≈none? If you have it, you have it, if you don't have it, you don't have it. Is the author using this label just to take advantage of both sides? And it seems from the comments that there is indeed a male protagonist. Please don't deceive readers and remove the no cp tag.