I Carry a Game World with Me

At the beginning, you enter the game to kill monsters and earn gold coins, and then sell the gold in real life to show off? I'm speechless. There is no cure for poverty.

It can only be said that it is a bit vulgar, selling gold everywhere and then squandering it to show off, a typical nouveau riche. There is such a magical golden finger, and if you don't start to study carefully, you will start to wander.

I think this protagonist's character is really too salty. Even if something goes wrong with his subordinates, he doesn't bother to take care of it. . . In any world with an online IQ, the protagonist would have died countless times.

From Chapter 21 onwards, it's poison, but it's very poisonous! ! ! I really don't understand, you can take off just by selling gold, and I don't know what you are doing with the thief's magical recovery item! Is it just to show your IQ? Don't mention using it in the game, why don't you just kill slime goblins and get to the top level? Have you ever heard of Shilipo Sword God? When you reach the top level and fight low-level monsters, will you still need this thing? ? ?

🤐🤐50 boxes of bullets were moved into the hotel. 😅😅There are still grabs, but when they come out, there are none? Are they all fools? Speechless=_=

Play more games, what do you think I'm here to see?

The front is pretty good, but the back is the composition.

It's pretty good in the front, but I can't stand it in the back.

This kind of horse plot accounts for too much, and the word count is suspicious, and it's so embarrassing that I can't stand it anymore, and there's an ex-girlfriend 🥵🥵🥵

This book is very interesting. My favorite type is a world where the main character can level up in a world without demons or with low martial arts. But once you get involved with the government, it's easy to get upset. You said that it would be easier if you go against the government 404. It feels aggrieved to be dominated by the government, but not everyone is of the same mind when cooperating with the government. However, the book begins to have a relationship with the government. Moreover, the protagonist is a very stupid person. He obviously has the ability to lift the table, but he still has to endure it (there are many parts, especially the part where he did nothing after the special forces attacked the laboratory in another country). It collapsed even more after it was put on the shelves. It can be said that the book ended with Chapter 20 of the outline. After it was put on the shelves, it didn't even go to another world (Goldfinger. Maybe the author didn't understand that the highlight of this book is the alternate world (game world). After the outline was given, it directly changed the world (the god body that I had been pursuing all my life was gone, and the Goldfinger game world was gone). Basically, it is no different from reopening a book. The highlight of the book is gone.

Is the real world really toxic, but the game world has five chapters?

There's no need to write too much about real-world things. Just exchange some money to learn the tricks at the beginning. There is no need to think about changing cars or houses right after you start.

These ten or so pictures are just about messing with women and have no meaning at all. Goodbye

This book is hopeless. The author is probably the kind of person who looks ugly but looks beautiful. In the novel, if you have money, you will immediately find a woman. Anyway, I look down on such people. I guess it's because I can't chase women in life, so I show my perverted emotions in the novel.

There are too many modal particles and commas in this sentence. I have to break it into several sentences before I can finish it. As a book reader, it is very uncomfortable for me. I hope the author will change it.

Brother author, you use too many "commas"

I was quarreling and I suddenly thought of my ex-girlfriend, and then started talking a lot of nonsense. This way of writing is very confusing.

It was the first time I saw a Molotov cocktail used to hit people and then lit with a lighter.

If I get this golden finger, I will go to the game to identify the masters of artificial intelligence Skynet, Red Queen, and Jarvis, the three top intelligence brains. Then, if I control all the networks and technologies in real life, no one will threaten me, and then I can embody S. H. I. E. L. D.'S aerospace carriers, space carriers, wormhole shuttles, warp kinetic energy engines and other technologies in the game, and forcibly unify the earth in reality. Then send robots to take over the global industrial system, and all human civilization work will be liberated. Then use the technology in the game to unify the universe. If you encounter difficulties with other civilizations, you will create your own game and use weapons to defeat other civilizations. Then, each earthling is assigned a system that binds the soul, and each earthling is equipped with a portable space, which will become larger as the spirit, energy, and spirit become stronger. Equipped with a game and reality exchange mall for all human civilization, you can create and destroy the world in your own territory and other operations. After unifying the universe, breaking through the walls of the universe, and unifying the multiverse, each human being on earth will be equipped with a portable small world of the universe. Human civilization can freely choose virtual cultivation systems: immortality cultivation, magic, mechanical ascension, spiritual ascension, magic potion sequence, etc. Every human being on earth is immortal and immortal. Everyone is transcendent.

Indeed, if you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them

What does your chapter say? Can you finish this speech? You ate them all

This author is very good. He can insert nine commas in ten words.

Buy a large spray gun and add a bottle of ethane to sweep the game world. Combat power is not a problem.

The early writing was very exciting, but it started to go downhill after about thirty chapters, and then it kept going downhill, and then it stopped getting better. By the time it was put on the shelf, there wasn't much left to read, so you could read it or not. This situation is usually caused by the author being unable to bear to play alone. The problem is who will read a new book with dozens of chapters! The author should consider writing the next book seriously. Don't have expectations before it reaches 500,000 words. It can be seen that the author's writing skills are still acceptable, and he has a v5 level. Personally, I feel that his long-term layout ability is poor!

Starting from the paid chapter 11, global superpowers have begun, that is, various superpowers and so on.

No one wants to know his secret anymore. If you don't stay away quickly, why are you provoking this kind of person? A lot of troublesome stories. It was good at the beginning, but it started to change after writing. You can just do these monsters and upgrades. Don't deal with those businesses. It's a mess.

After writing it, I didn't even know what he was writing about. One hundred kinds of rebellion postures in the feudal dynasty, a good game world to fight monsters and upgrades, don't play blind nonsense.

Who knows, thinking about it, what dialect is it from? It looks really awkward.

Why don't you melt the gold coins yourself? Selling gold coins directly is a BUG!