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There's a reason no one is watching. .

After reading Chapter 2, I couldn't stand it anymore. It was the set of settings in the online game property panel again. . . No, I have to read some classics to wash my mind👀

Why didn't you say that the family secrets were also learned at the ninja school?

Very good book, not enough to read 👍

I can't say it's not good, I just feel like the main character doesn't play any role in it, and I just feel sad all the time.

You can add something else to it, such as Mr. Gojo's white hair and eyes, or jobless reincarnations and fields, etc. It'll be cool just thinking about it. Say "field expansion" to the reincarnation eye spot or the five shadows 😎

The pace is too slow. The protagonists should at least have a genin and chuunin to show off their strength. There are a few little brats who are constantly seeking death. It's really boring to watch.

The relationship between the author's protagonist and Xiaonan is a little bit different, right?

Personally, I feel that taijutsu is a shortcut to improve strength in the early stage (excluding the forbidden art of Eight Gate Dungeon), the breathing swordsmanship of "Demon Slayer", the swordsmanship school of "Rurouni Kenshin", the Amagiri Morning Meiryu style of "Gakusenshishi", etc., And even Zoro's three-sword style.

It's better to write a system. Your own eyes will laugh at you.

Ninja schools produce cannon fodder

Why do I feel so confused after watching it? Do you have to let the protagonist find the place where Jiraiya and Sansho Hanzo duel? Although they are planning to trick the protagonist, they want to compete with nothing but weak ones. How can they go to the battlefield without fear of being affected and killed? There are all dead ninjas around and there is no enclosure?

The protagonist has someone to blame, so why do he still want to get in front of Nagato? Big and small bosses are paying attention!

Watched them all! What did you say? It feels a little weird! Logically speaking, this book is of the same genre as System! But he is taking the obscene development route again! Not enough days

Why don't the author think about swordsmanship and the like, like the Breathing Swordsman from Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba?

I have never understood it. Logically speaking, chakra can be used and practiced. In that case, how can a person's chakra amount be seen, but it is not internal energy that can be stored in the Dantian.

Everyone, if you have any opinions about this book, you can join the group. If there are typos or other clerical errors, you can point them out directly in this post and this chapter. Thank you for your support.