The Infinite Journey Begins with Demon Hunter

To be honest, the title and introduction of the book are very important. If they are deviated from it, readers will be lost. (After all, readers come here based on the title of the book introduction. Uneasy writing cannot meet readers' psychological expectations...) In addition, the subject of infinite flow is the easiest subject to be adopted. And it becomes more and more difficult to write as it goes on... (This requires the author to write very good plots, and there is no doubt that if he cannot achieve the goal of being adopted) Therefore, based on the characteristics of increasingly difficult writing, it is best for the author not to write some meaningless dungeons (especially the maximum revenue from dungeons is money, and each dungeon should allow the protagonist to achieve sufficient goals and grow, rather than harvest some equipment that is destined to be eliminated or sold for money)

To a certain extent, the apprentice is really more like the protagonist, whether it is personality, image, ability or other aspects, they are all too similar.

How to put it, after reading the introduction, the demon's right arm is the manifestation of Nero's demon blood. If the author only uses it as a skill, it feels a bit wasteful. He can cooperate with a wave of plot to integrate it with the demon blood, stimulate the right arm, fully accept the demon blood, and feel that he accepts the Nephalem blood of Diablo, or the Nephalem blood of Devil May Cry 5 DLC, and stimulates the unique magic power of the demon's right arm. God form, devil form, god devil form. I forgot to mention that the magic of Devil May Cry's worldview is based on what one desires in his heart. The reason why Nero is so powerful is that he is extremely thirsty for power when he protects Ji Liye.

It doesn't feel right! It's boring In other words, why don't you get a Spartan bloodline and pretend to be Dante's brother or uncle next time?

It took you a month to come back and update a chapter

Speed ​​it up a little bit. 75% Of these chapters are introductions to skills, and the plot barely advances. This makes those who are not interested in this world even less want to read it. Those who want to see this world can't see the excitement they want to see. It's hard to explain in one sentence.

It's been two months... To be honest, the writing is actually quite good. It's all settled, give me a eunuch, Gan.

The plot is unattractive, and each chapter has a little bit of interesting content.

The setting is closer to Rui Tu than to Mosquito; the writing is a bit stiff, the style is a bit like Rui Tu's early works, and some of the character dialogues are translated, and the taste is exactly the same.

The pace is too slow. The first dungeon, Devil May Cry, has 31 chapters, which feels pretty good. The transition in the nightmare space in the middle seven chapters is no problem. However, the second dungeon, Terminator, has 78 chapters, which is too long. If you have no interest in Terminator, it will be difficult to persevere.

I feel that the author should determine who is the protagonist. There are too many descriptions of apprentices, which feels like putting the cart before the horse.

Not many people have written about Infinite Flow, and they have written it very quickly. I don't know how this one will be.

Try to choose the same kind to travel through time, is it a hodgepodge?

The site is short, investment is guaranteed to make a profit, and the sooner you invest, the more you will benefit. What if you fall in love after watching it for ten minutes?

Why does it feel like the protagonist is an apprentice!

This introduction is like a reincarnation paradise

Already fully booked, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง It's to my liking

It's well written, and after reading the previous part, it's pretty good, and the characters' IQs are pretty good. It's just that the fighting scenes are not refreshing and neat enough, and the data information is too bloated, making the fighting look like a turn-based game. But it's still logical. Come on, author.