Konoha: Drawing Cards Starting from the Ninja World

I told you that it can be checked, but I still have to carry it with me, wasting my time to find 😅 and then deleting the comment after finishing it, I am really convinced (; 一_一)

Don't write about the Sage of Six Paths. Everyone is dead. I'm so awesome. I'll just resurrect myself and fight. Kaguya Otsutsuki still needs the two trashes Naruto and Sasuke. There are so many variables. The ray of consciousness that remains in the yin and yang chakra doesn't need to be written so awesome. A dead person is a dead person. If you haven't returned from the underworld, you are a dead person. A truly strong man will not die, nor will he leave the future to others, but will only hold it in his own hands. Also! (In the original work, Orochimaru clearly states that Minato is Yuan Fei's puppet) If there are subtitles, the author can check it! In addition, write more grandly, look at it from a high perspective, don't be constrained, or be grand to the end, don't, if it doesn't go up or down, go down a little if it rises a little, if it's there, it's there, and if it's not, it's not. Don't deal with things that are unclear. Similar principles can be used in other aspects. I saw your reply in the comment area. You are an author who knows how to self-examine. This is a good thing. You can improve yourself and you will become better and better! Think about the problem from many aspects. What impact will the choices I make have? What will others think of the choices I make? You need to put yourself into a character, for example, temporarily put yourself into the role of the Third Raikage to think, and temporarily write the Third Raikage as the protagonist Then analyze what the protagonist does and how it will affect you, whether you want to fight or win over, start from the interests, and the interests will continue to change with the occurrence of events, thus deciding how you will treat the protagonist in different positions. These opinions can also be used for other things. In addition, Tsunade is afraid of blood, which can be solved with an illusion and psychological suggestion. Ordinary people in reality can also do this. This kind of illusion does not require high attainments. It is not so much a fear of blood, but an excuse to avoid some people and things in the village.

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It's better to be smart. The teacher in the ninja school will record the students' files, including the ninjutsu, taijutsu and so on that they are good at and not good at. It's really strange that the assigned chuunin doesn't read the files. Ninjas mainly focus on collecting intelligence, even if their combat power suddenly changes in the later stage. But the main theme is still the world of ninjas.

In the battle of Kannabi Bridge, if the third generation goes to the battlefield, there will be nothing wrong with it later. In other villages, all the shadows go to the battlefield, but there is no Hokage 🤫 The children are sent to death, and the adults stay at home. Where the leaves are flying, the fire is also endless, the seedlings are burning, supporting the flame. It is not the flame that has changed, but the will to control the fire has changed! ! ! I haven't been on the battlefield since I became Hokage 😏 The fighting power in the village is running out, dead, saplings (children) are burning, supporting him alone 🤔 There is also Uchiha Obito, I don't understand [its] idea at all, kill the master and the people in the village, so I was thinking, if someone else kills your wife, what do you mean by killing your own people? This kind of person deserves it, and he deserves this kind of fate. He can't be cleansed, otherwise I'm sorry, the person who died trying to protect the village!

Gravity can restrain light, but it depends on what level of gravity it is. The garbage gravity of exploding the sky star on the spot, Naruto can break free with his body, but he still wants to restrain the Shining Fruit? Do you think it's a black hole? Anyone who only talks about ability without talking about the upper limit is just a bully, you know?

Could it be this?

I have read more than 50 pictures. When I got to Loulan, I fell out of love instantly. Minato and his wife are still dead. Naruto is still an orphan who does not know his parents. The previous article also said that the protagonist wanted to leave the village because he saw a lot of darkness in Konoha, but he ended up hanging on to the end! If the main character still has this loser character, the book won't be popular.

One thing that comes to mind is that the people who traveled through Naruto are quite strange. Although they often opposed the political ideas of the first generation after gaining strong power, they did not seem to implement some political reforms, whether it was the old Japanese way of combining public and military forces or establishing a samurai regime. Some strangely did not develop politics even if they developed businesses to make money. ZZ in Naruto is a mirror image description of modern Japan, the emperor who has no rights but does not need to worry - the daimyo (the daimyo and the emperor are completely different things, one is a public minister, the other is a warrior and a lord), the military government - the Ninja Village, the Ninja World War - the counterpart of the World War, the ninja - the samurai.

There is no core! That's the biggest flaw of this book. It's better to just mess around and have no goals. It would be better to have some bullshit goal.

The young man burns his own will to illuminate the old man's filial fire

The surname Uehara brings fear to the ninja world 😏

It's a bit like Tokyo Drawing Cards. I quite like drawing cards, but I hope the author doesn't follow in the same footsteps and cause the power system to be too confusing. It's best to specialize in a few systems, otherwise there are too many, like the power system next door, which is so complicated that readers can't remember it.

This protagonist is very contradictory. Konoha is a big pit. The more heroic he is, the more miserable he is. The first generation, the second generation, the White Fang, the third generation, the fourth generation. Therefore, the two consultants laughed until the end and felt that the protagonist was about to get cold after beating Iwakaku, and the worse he became, the better he was.

Are you sure you are so popular? If you don't follow the mainstream and the original characters are so popular, why don't you write more and come up with an original heroine? People will like you if you write a novel. Wuyuzi

Is there someone who will succeed Uehara Naraku?

Yile is the name of the shop, and Handpa is the name of the shop owner. .

It's not that there is no one, come on, keep writing, but most of them don't want to talk, I'm afraid 😭 I'm going to die, just give it a squeak

The protagonist draws the perfect sparkling fruit and Escanor becomes invincible...

Author, you made the protagonist a pacifist. But it is clear that he has the ability to make the war less deadly and end the war earlier! I still want to keep it! Who are you writing this for? To be honest, you wrote Goldfinger and already gave the protagonist super perverted powers! In a world where power is paramount, you create a protagonist like this? I don't believe that a person who has gained such power can control his desires! Absolutely impossible! So fake! 🐶Too much!

Is the Blue Sky Plan the MLM Blue Sky Plan→_→

The writing is a bit messy, and it's very tiring to read. The heroine's character obviously changes... Not obvious at all... The part about White Teeth is inexplicable, and the protagonist's character also alternates between cowardly and dissolute, very contradictory 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄

Why has the protagonist's personality changed so much since it was released? Has the character been changed?

I watched the low-key development of Chapter 100, my strength has greatly improved, and I am ready to show off. I subscribed, and after it was put on the shelves, you wrote about Uzumaki Xianghui without any embarrassment. It would be fine if you wrote something marginal, but you disgusted me.

It's a little skinny, but it's also refreshing. Just haven't seen Pig's Foot's psychological growth?

Why are card draws a thing of the Pirate World?

In the first chapter, I thought the protagonist was a genius. The Rasengan fan blew his crotch... He was invincible.

In the first world after Naruto, Demon Slayer is not very attractive.

Are you letting yourself go when you put it on the shelves?,,, I didn't expect that as soon as it was put on the shelves, I would become a ninja, and I'm speechless.

The author hasn't updated yet, is he a eunuch?