Lay Lord

Dear guests, whether you are a Taoist priest in the south, a horse fairy in the north, a knife wielder in the west, or a sword dancer in the east, please listen to me talk about this worldly situation. When drinking and singing, we all forget about the worldly world. We laugh and talk about the past and present the world, and then we pick up the pen again and write down this worldly world. Taste more than three thousand Taoist treasures, and travel proudly across the sea of ​​​​thousand stars. I recall that in the past, there were many heroes sitting in the teahouse drinking upstairs. The tea was half filled with people's voices boiling. In the dark fragrance of green bamboo, stories were told until dawn. For more than sixteen years, I have been still in Huangliang. Although this body is shocking. I went to the teahouse to listen to new music, and talked about many things in ancient and modern times. Today is: In the time of Zi, the earthly world appeared, and the world of great strife arose. Twelve true kings appear, and the great sacrifice to the stove master begins. Ox ghosts and snake gods appear, and the world will be in chaos. The Stove Lord stepped up to the ruler, and Zhou Ba Ye stepped up to the stick. For the time being, I have the fan in my hand and the wooden table in the teahouse. Try to talk about this secular world, try to talk about this troubled world. How do you want to know? Let's hear the explanation next time.

After reading the latest chapter, I feel that something is getting more and more wrong, so I will write my own opinion. I can't feel the personality of this protagonist. To be precise, it's beliefs and principles. When I first came into contact with the secular world, I just played it as a game, which was nothing. So at that time, my choices were all for personal gain and comfort, which was normal. But what's the problem? It is the painting skin that comes to reality. Only then did I realize that the protagonist had actually reached full reality, and I still felt that this thing was just a pure game. (Why did you use the relics of Lord Yuanxiao? It's normal to act bravely in the past. Later, if you get it and transfer it to the government for insurance, it's okay. The question is, why are you keeping it? Boss Xiang has been a saint in front of people before, so he must be a big boss. The first person to suspect when the things are gone is Boss Xiang, and then he finds out what , I can't find anyone. Ha, now, who did you come out to? My dear friend, why don't you ask me about it? ) Why do I say it's a matter of painting? Isn't this just about online anonymity? Wouldn't you really feel disgusted when you see people who scold others unscrupulously? As long as no one knows you, you can do whatever you want? It's really painful to watch. Going back to the original question, there is no guideline. If you want to be a great hero and generally choose zf, then we should assume that he wants to be an unknown boss who can protect the people around him. Do you think this is right? If you want to protect the people around you, you have to prioritize them. Has the protagonist ever thought about it? He is still playing games, even in reality. It's completely impossible to see his appearance as a person other than the player. Let me mention this emotional line again. How should I put it? At the beginning, I thought it was a classic act of pretending to be stupid, but later it felt like a mess. Among the girls, the one who burns incense is better off, but they also have to rely on grain eaters. I really like this setting, but the characterization is really poisonous, so I stayed up in the middle of the night to write a long article. It's really hard to find a setting that suits your needs, and I really can't stand seeing the new chapter.

A wonderful book, the first 50 chapters are great. I am following the next masterpiece. After it was released, the plot became increasingly fragmented. He said he was not interested in girls while turning on the central air conditioner, while hiding himself inexplicably. At the same time, he made it clear that the heroine's talent was extremely dangerous, and asked if he wanted to join the journey.

A few chapters about the Kitchen Lord's Daughter. At present, many people think that Zhou Keke being deceived by a scumbag is a big poisonous point, but I feel that if you look at it from Zhou Keke's own perspective, maybe this poisonous point is not so poisonous. First From the current point of view, Zhou Keke seems to have not shown anything special except for repairing temple building materials. Moreover, this repair skill can be learned in technical secondary schools 16 years later, and there is nothing special about it. As the divine child of the Master of Life and Death and Zhou Bala, it shouldn't be like this. Therefore, perhaps you can think of it this way, Zhou Keke is the same as ordinary people before he awakens to his own special points. Second The plot does not seem to mention that Zhou Kekeqing is not clear that her parents are not her biological parents. What she knows is that when she was six years old, her family had a fierce quarrel over the issue of child support, which eventually resulted in her death, so that her mother smuggled her to Malaysia with her young child. According to the original text, she had a very hard time smuggling to Malaysia. Basically, the locals did not have a good look at them as Chinese smugglers. If you read later, in Chapter 223 butterfly knife In the middle, there is a passage when 09 takes Keke to eat "You have been hungry all day and night, and you don't have half a cent in your pocket. You don't know whether the next meal will be for this week, next week, or for the whole village. You will know why Zhou Keke came with 09." Maybe I over-understood. In my experience, this passage also shows that Zhou Keke has also lived a life of one meal, one meal, one meal, one meal, one meal, one meal after another, and now she is just an ordinary girl who has been suffering from hardships since childhood and has hope for the future. Maybe most of the readers are men, and they may not know much about girls' thoughts, and neither do I. So I drew on girls from TV who are in humble situations and looking forward to the future. If you are in endless darkness, a hand reaches out to you, indicating that it is willing to take you out of the predicament and take you back to your dearest hometown. If you are confused, are you willing to give it a try? Zhou Keke is just an ordinary girl. Faced with those smooth-talking scumbags, she had hope for her innocence, right? I believe that he will really fight for the future, I believe that he will really take her out of the predicament, and I believe that he can really take her back to his hometown. Maybe it was because of this that Zhou Keke was able to escape regardless of himself to protect Aji. But as the saying goes, the greater the expectations, the greater the disappointment. Now Zhou Keke is still in the period of greater expectations. I guess, maybe it will soon be the period of greater disappointment (laughing), but this will become her strength and achieve her future self. Third From Zhou Bala's perspective, from the current perspective. What Zhou Bala is now facing is that his sister Zhou Jiuling has been polluted by dust and the cave heaven and paradise have been completely destroyed. Look carefully at Chapter 220: The Kitchen Lord's Daughter Facing the dust pollution on Zhou Jiuling's body, Zhou Bala must use the Food Law to sweep away the dust for Zhou Jiuling like regular dialysis. According to the wishes of the high-level boss, Zhou Jiuling should study abroad. This means that if Zhou Jiuling fails to obtain a method to suppress the dust in the current timeline, he will need to fly abroad from time to time to sweep the dust for Zhou Jiuling. So I think that in the current timeline, Zhou Bala should be able to take the Food Law one step closer. Looking at Zhou Jiuling again, if 09 in the following article is Zhou Jiuling, then studying abroad has paved the way for 09's high academic qualifications. Looking at the Master of Life and Death from a perspective, as a secular master, I think her descendants should not be too bad. And Zhou Bala gave the future eye to Zhou Keke. There is a sentence at the end of Chapter 220: The Stove Lord's Daughter. "They want to use the future to influence the present." Perhaps, with the use of the future eye and Zhou Keke being the most critical figure in this game, they also want Zhou Ke to be stronger. Let's mention that Zhou Bala's behavior of "abandoning" Zhou Keke may also have been influenced by his character and being a father for the first time. But I still have to say one thing, Zhou Bala, you are also a scumbag, bah.

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I feel that the character of the male protagonist is not worthy of the excitement in the early stage. The plot is fun at the beginning, but just in the dull period of the plot, a group of women are introduced, which is somewhat detracted.

After reading a few chapters, I found that the penalty for character death in the game is too low. When a character dies in the game, the character appears weak as if he has a serious illness in real life. Gaining power is too simple, and there should be a higher price. Add more horror elements and mystery. The protagonist should have mission guidance when he gets the game. If he suddenly dies in danger while solving puzzles according to the mission, he will be hurt in reality and feel that the game is a pit. Tasks have time limits, and there are penalties for failing to complete them. To complete the first mission, the protagonist should ideally be injured seriously enough to be hospitalized but not life-threatening. Based on your previous description, the B-station up character should meet the protagonist in the follow-up work of the protagonist and be sacrificed to heaven by the protagonist, instead of being written as a heroine. This writing is a bit aesthetically exhausting. Game tasks and puzzle solving can be the main conditions for the protagonist's growth.

Shennong Post - Lay Lord PS. Personal opinions, welcome to discuss. No bullies are welcome. Current shortcomings: I have an unfair sister (not to mention that the sister's character is in line with reality, how many real things make people happy?). The protagonist is a petty scumbag who doesn't take the initiative and is responsible for flirting with girls. He seems to be a virgin? (The author handled this point well, at least it didn't make me feel too uncomfortable.) My roommate has a cross-dressing guy who has a girlfriend. (This is actually fine for me.) Advantages: The author's writing is good, and the worldly plot is fresh and refined. The power system is relatively new.

A very good book! After reading each chapter, I feel that I am still unsatisfied. I hope that the author will update steadily while maintaining the quality.

How can I put it? It's a bit annoying to watch. In the early stage, the protagonist has been suppressed, and then there are various ways to die. Then the talent of the protagonist feels like a joke. If you have the opportunity, you will upgrade to suppress the protagonist. Then the emotional line of torturing the protagonist is a mess. It's just for fun. If you are looking for abuse, you can read this book.

Chinese people still regard the Eight Wax as a deity that eliminates insects and protects against disasters, and is worshiped in the Ba Wa Temple. The sacrifice of the eight waxes is called the eight wax sacrifices, the big wax ceremony or the eight wax sacrifices. In ancient times, there was a sacrifice of the Eight Waxes. Every year in the month of Jianhai, when the field work was completed, the eight gods gathered together to report the event, which was called the Eight Waxes. R>4. Mail table sip: hut, field, well 5. Cat and tiger 6. Square: embankment 7. Shuiyong: City God 8. Insect Ba Wa is generally considered to be the highest god of worship in the Zhou Dynasty, so it is called Zhou Ba Wa

Folk suspense, soul-related world, group running experience, unbearably vulgar. It takes the path of games influencing reality, but games are the MUD (multi-user space) of the current renaissance. There are many low-cost text-based cultivators that have become popular. This type of game has more multiplayer interactions than simulators, and contains elements such as role-playing, exploration and adventure, monster fighting and upgrades, interactive novels, online chat, etc., But it still retains the advantages of minimalist gameplay, rich content, and the ability to use fragmented time to play. The protagonist is a college student who also writes game reviews for virtual anchors to make money. At the beginning of the novel, the virtual anchor gave the protagonist a text running game. The protagonist's game experience was not bad. Although there were no pictures and no modeling, the blank space and sense of alienation in the text were just right. When he left the game, he was pleasantly surprised to find that the rewards obtained in the game could actually be brought to reality. At the same time, all kinds of strange and weird stuff began to appear in reality, and spiritual energy revived. There were other players hidden in the school, which attracted the attention of the official polling bureau. The difficulty of the game is very hardcore. You will be killed randomly by Huangpizi at the beginning, and your waist will be pinched countless times. Even if you make weapons, it is difficult to defeat the weakest mobs. There are dangers lurking everywhere, and if you are not careful, you will die in a fancy way. The background is also very soulful. The setting of "Elden's Ring" is orientalized and folklorized, and it is quoted from other sources without knowing how powerful it is. It has a Beijing flavor from the Qing Dynasty. He talks nonsense and plays old jokes, as if he is watching the up owner in the gossip section. Grain eaters, burn down the golden tree, seize the power of the demons and demons, and become the new earthly lord. The protagonist's talent for catching weeks in the game is Kitchen God, which has the effect of increasing the trigger rate of events. This makes him a troublemaker in reality, causing trouble wherever he goes. The incense-burning girl he swore to seemed weak, but was actually very strong. She only had two strengthening branches, but one of them was a unique event-strengthening branch, and she was sworn in through deception. The reality part basically relies on labeling and stacking buffs to create characters, which is tacky but can leave a deep impression on people. The images of the socially awkward protagonist, roommate A, a cross-dressing boss, and roommate B, a sleeping prophet, are not to say lifelike, but at least they are sharp-edged. There are about three female protagonists, and their characters are all very typical. If you replace it with Riqing, it can be divided into three books: "The domineering student union leader, the soft-bossed boss, they are actually the same person", "My silly white sweet incense burner, it is impossible to really be a deaf-mute girl", "In order to fool the wronged sister, I pretended to be a couple with Qingmei". The pace of the novel is very fast, with exciting climaxes coming one after another. Even the daily parts are very concise and not watery. Although there are only more than 70 chapters yet to be released, the content feels as rich as nearly a million words. This makes people a little worried about whether they will be unable to follow up. The result of continuing to take strong medicine may raise the readers' threshold to a very high level. Ordinary cool things can no longer provide stimulation, and playing too many nostalgic old jokes is boring. The only strong medicine that can be administered at this time is poison that may cause shock. Rumors say that the author of the book is a dirty storyteller who once wrote "I was in Cthulhu, Tokyo" and "My Years as a Sewer at the Autumn Execution Ground". Those few books followed hot topics, were imaginative, used both Western and Chinese styles, and had unique styles. They were very explosive in the early stages, but they failed to reach long lengths. Although it is impossible to judge the authenticity of gossip at a glance, I hope this book can be longer and more complete, and not just dig holes and not fill them. {"TopicId":"733689449136848896","TopicName":"Qidian Reading Roundtable"}

I also saw the article in the middle and paid for some chapters. A fair evaluation 1. The advantage of this book is that it has independently developed some power systems and has novel ideas. 2. The content of the two main lines is parallel, which has been imitated by many books since "Lord of the Mysteries". The writing style is humorous and humorous My personal evaluation can only be 7 points at the moment. 1. The content has no priority and dual main lines. Does the game serve reality or does reality serve the game? Therefore, the story will appear very flat, because there is no priority 2. Regarding the thoughts that the author wants to express, or the ideas of the article, for example, "Surveying the Sky with a True Heart" expresses Jiang Buyi's promise + refreshing writing + growth. Author: When you write this book, what do you want to express? Do you want to tell me about a love that remains unyielding no matter how weird and bizarre "The World" is? Or is there justice that can finally defeat evil? Or the law of the jungle? 3. There is a failure that I suggest you can reverse the plot later, which is the gym dominated by ZF. Since Zhou doesn't believe in the gym, he suggested that you ignore it and wait for a while. Although he wants to maintain social stability, the protagonist doesn't believe in the government at the same time. He feels that the plot design here is not good, so it is better to suggest a simple script.

The author has stopped updating for two months. It feels like the disease has relapsed. Come on, author.

Faster and faster! I really want to put the author in a dark room and keep writing.

Five-Star Immortal Grass The author is really gifted in writing. This author is like God's reward. With his unconstrained ideas and profound writing skills, he can express the world in his mind. Highly recommended

I really liked this book, but the update was too slow, and it ended up going straight to the palace in the end! ! !

This book is good to read, but don't take on the role of the protagonist. Just be a bystander. It will be very comfortable to read, and you won't be disturbed by the chapters and chapters. The chapters in the free chapters are also good, the discussions are very in-depth, and they all deal with the events from the perspective of the protagonist. The plot has many ups and downs, which is very consistent with the characteristics of a word game (life simulator). If you turn the pages patiently, you will see the ups and downs after the ups and downs. Don't think about how much the protagonist earns, knowing that he will never lose money. There are three heroines in the character list. So far, the protagonist has not confessed to any of them. Based on the character of the protagonist, it is estimated that it will take hundreds of chapters. In the middle, the author will continue to give out sweets🍬, so feel free to eat. I personally feel that the protagonist pulls these three very firmly and will not let go. Looking at the date, there is one main line, and looking at the plot, there are three (emotional line/game line/real event line). Overall, it is stable and improving.

If you don't want to vomit, let me share some of my inner thoughts about "The Lord": The author seems to have mentioned before that due to physical reasons, the update is reduced to one update and irregular. This is a fact that we cannot change. Objectively speaking, the quality of the book is the biggest reason why most of the current readers are following it. I wonder if the book "Hakki Night Walk" is another one of the author's vests? If so, the current double-edition situation will be very distracting. Although they are two books of the same style, personal writing efficiency is fixed (if the author updates 10,000 words a day, he will not break chapters so smoothly). It is not a copy, and it cannot be greatly improved in a short time. If it continues like this, both sides may not be happy (because Hyakuki Night Walk is not updated very fast, and it is updated once a day, this book will probably not be as good as this one on the shelves). If A Hundred Ghosts Night Walk was a follow-up article written by the author's friend, I would have to overthrow it and re-examine it. As far as lay people are concerned, updating is a big problem, coupled with the interruption of updating. Although this can arouse readers' interest in reading, it will be a two-step process in the long run, which is not conducive to the in-depth incubation of IP in the later period. In addition, many book clubs will start the book-keeping mode, which may lead to the risk of death in the long run. The second point is the realistic plot part. As for the current environment, there is a risk of being harmonized, especially when it involves the reform of the social system (secular reform committee, etc.). "There is a Demonic Spirit" which was a hit for 18 years, was eventually removed from the shelves. I hope the author pays attention to the scale. It is best to generalize the realistic part of the plot and introduce the context. Finally, I hope the author can save some manuscripts and set an update time.

I listened to the audiobook of Himalayas and was impressed. The book mentions that games in the "mundane world" may be extended to games in the human world. "The secular world" is a human-eating world. As Mr. Lu Xun said, the background of the secular world is more in line with the characteristics of the old era. Players from modern times are called "grain eaters", and they constantly put things from the old world into their bodies, which means "Eating the past without changing it". The protagonist has the ability to digest, which symbolizes the need to absorb the essence of the past era, instead of repeating the same mistakes as history "The people of Qin mourned and ignored it, which also made future generations mourn again". I'm not sure about the "four beams and eight pillars". It may symbolize the "spiritual backbone" or something that supports a person. The words in the book quietly reveal the meaning: We want to reform and cannot continue to make the mistakes of the past. It is now 2024. I wish that the society in which we ordinary people live can become cleaner and the system will be more perfect.

Really enjoyed this book. It suits my taste very well, especially the power system inside is very rigorous and the atmosphere is relatively relaxed.

At present, it seems that a large part of the settings of this book are exactly the same as the old one, just change the vest, but the problem is not big, and no one can say that I am not allowed to use other people's settings, as long as the main plot is my own original work, otherwise it will be unfinished 🙂

Really, I will order your book again, I am a dog

What impresses me most about the author's writing is his foreshadowing, which can often be found in a sentence, a description, and a plot in the following text, and presented in a reasonable way. Although the text is short, it requires intensive reading, and due to the slow update and long foreshadowing, it is often necessary to read the previous related plots. {"TopicId":"776819114126802944","TopicName":"Praise this novel"}

I finished this extra chapter early in the morning, and I have to say that since I didn't finish the previous book, I still underestimated the author's writing power. This volume is rich in content, and it's good to end it so neatly. The ending is also unexpected and reasonable, but I don't know if there will be a follow-up to this emotional line. After reading it for several days, I personally feel that this volume is quite interesting. It has a smooth look and feel like a movie. However, the writing is rushed and the description of the future does not give me a particularly clear feeling. In fact, I quite like this way of taking the timeline. Anyway, it's really good. Come on, come on.

The subject matter was originally quite good, but the emotional line was so intense and the writing was too bland. It would be nice if the writing was more scary. The most important thing is to be relaxed and not to write down anecdotes.

It would be better to make it a single male protagonist and forcefully create a straight man, which would be embarrassing to watch.

Coming from Qiuzhan, I haven't seen such a novel system in a long time! Big cheers for the author!

Tell me your own opinion. I read this book when it first started. Of course, I read a little bit, but I found that it borrowed too much from it and was too blunt, so I stopped reading it. Now that I have gone back and clicked in, I found that some of the content has been modified, and it is much better than when I first read it. It is very interesting. The subject matter is very novel, and the process of "spiritual recovery" in the real world is also different from others. Many of the others are secret realms, and various countries compete for resources. The business competition and dojo of the two heroines in this book are novel in perspective, and the protagonist is not personally involved in them, which means that the main plot is still in the game. I think this was designed by the author and has consciously reduced this part of the content. The rest are necessary enrichment settings and adjustments after the game content. After all, don't you make a lot of money just to spend it? This is reflected in novels. Isn't it just to show off that you have super powers? It's just that some authors pretend to be vulgar, and some authors get the idea right and pretend without leaving any trace. Whether this is good or not is a test of the author's writing skills, and of course the reader's taste. After all, some people like Long Aotian's style. I have read a lot of books in total, with various themes. Many of the protagonists come into contact with various big bosses when they are still new, and are caught up in various conspiracies and tricks. They are about to save the world, and then are pushed by various crises along the way. Otherwise, you will owe a lot of money and borrow money from loan sharks. I'm a bit tired of aesthetics. I'm afraid this can't be said to be the protagonist's goal, right? I personally believe that every stage of life is different. It is impossible to become a billionaire at the stage of starting from scratch, right? I think this book is very suitable for my taste at this point. Each stage has a theme for each stage, the land of birth at the beginning, the city of joy and the city of mourning later. This is how I played the game (Old Headband), exploring map after map. At first I really didn't know what the story of the game was, but then the story line gradually became fuller and more fascinating. The protagonist's ability growth is also quite good. It's fun to see without suppressing the level, and the strength of the people around the protagonist can also play an role. It's not like many novels, where characters appear and disappear in batches. As a result, in the middle period, you will hit people across levels without thinking, and you can only continue to spawn enemies across more levels, which is a bit confusing. (To be honest, there are many novels like this. The real-life themes are revived. The protagonist is a self-employed casual cultivator who runs to crush the big brother in the national department every day. Many of them can even tie it when they leave the factory, but after a few chapters, they become a minions. Did others start earlier than you and have more resources than you, or are you just one in a million in the country, so easily surpassed by your self-employment? I don't quite understand it. The game content of this book is a mobile text game, and the operation is relatively simple (you cannot communicate with NPCs at will, and the character's ability affects event options), and it also sets a limit on the time of death and weakness. In the early stage, when the superpower is not obvious in reality, the expansion of strength is slightly suppressed, and then the restrictions are relaxed as the process progresses. I think this makes sense. A game in this form means that every event of the protagonist will be compressed because he cannot talk to NPCs or operate at will. In other novels, you may encounter a monster boss, and you will have to fight and collect goods to improve your strength. You can write two or three chapters, and then you can talk a little more, and you can also make a foreshadowing by letting things slip. But here it might just be a paragraph or two. I read that some book friends said that they should reduce the reality part, which I think is quite outrageous. "Revival of spiritual energy" leads to social changes and then affects the lives around us. These are all necessary. How is it even different from what others have written (this author is undoubtedly good at this)? What is more brilliant? Maybe it needs to be more colorful? (Personal knowledge) And after all, novels need length. The number of words is equal to rice. If the game part cannot be filled with water, and if the realistic part is not filled with water, then the emotional part will have to be dragged out a little. There is no way. After all, there is slowness and urgency, and seasoning will complement the big dishes. If you are really dissatisfied, just pay more and ask the author to write specifically for you. Authors have to eat. If you make this your career, I don't think anyone will refuse if you give me enough. Although I also like to watch the emotional line, there are indeed some bad things. For example, in the Shura field, the protagonist's various rescues are relatively stiff, and then the emotional part with Bai feels particularly abrupt, and talking to her suddenly becomes very greasy. Is the protagonist perhaps showing signs of split personality? Then I had no feelings for Shen Qian at all, but why did I have feelings for Ran? He also took the initiative to help Ran at the beginning. Could it be that he was a savior at the beginning, and then he felt it in the student union? If I didn't have relationships with several female protagonists, it would be difficult to establish a Shura field? Or should it all depend on feeling and come together naturally (not clear?). I also look forward to the author's subsequent treatment. Of course, there are also some outstanding points, such as each heroine having her own role and being able to advance the story without being obtrusive. Bai's setting of being a deaf mute is also related to the setting of being unable to speak on his own in the game. It is quite interesting to take sign language classes to advance the emotional line and so on. After all, happiness is the most important thing. I'm sorry for writing so much at once. I don't like reading books, so I prefer to read books with more than 50...600,000 Words. I read it all at once today and found that the update was quite slow. Then I looked at the discussion forum and found that there were a lot of bad comments. Just wanted to express my opinion. Personally, I think a bad ending is completely different from a eunuch. To use an inappropriate analogy, if the novel is unfinished, it can only be said that the protagonist dies, while in an eunuch, it means that the entire world of the novel dies. You should understand what I mean. After reading it, I felt that this novel was well written and brought me a lot of fun. I hope, or I wish, that the author can finish this story, regardless of how perfect the ending is (of course, no one likes a happy ending). I understand that it is very painful to engage in innovation. At the beginning, there may be a flood of writing ideas, no matter how you write, there is always something interesting, but more often you will run out of ideas, but you are not willing to continue the work, so the writing will be very painful later, and the writing will be awkward and so on. I just want to say, author, please feel free to write. If it's too painful, it's okay to slow down. I can accept a bad ending, but I can't accept a eunuch. We are all here to give a speech. Please forgive me for my poor speech.

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