After Our Divorce, the Crown Prince Dotes on Me

The plot is not compact, and it drags on for more than ten chapters with the same content written over and over again. The number of words is added up every day for updates, and the author seems not to care about the quality of his writing.

Elementary school student writing. It's a mess with no plot at all. . It was actually written by a great god. . . If it can be written like this, there will still be people reading it. .

It's just a prince who covets the queen over and over again, and everyone knows that he covets her. As the emperor and the queen, they do nothing and don't mind, and they don't think of a perfect way to deal with it. They just let him dance around and disgust people, and then the punishment is painless and that's it. It's really incomprehensible for a prince with ulterior motives who never banned him and allowed him to continue to enter and leave the palace freely!

It's so bad. I can't stand it anymore. There is logic in front of it. It's so bad. Let's avoid lightning 😓😓😓

When will the mysterious Mr. Zhao Taifu appear? When the prince of the dynasty was plotted against in his own family, as a member of the family, he didn't come forward. This was because he didn't take the prince seriously. Why does the prince often stay overnight at Zhao's house? It's not like the prince's mother clan.

The imperial concubine has been tortured for long enough, so the master should take care of Zhao Zhao. How regretful the emperor will be when he remembers his concubine

I am actually a very tolerant reader. If the logic of the plot and character design is not really bad, I will never complain. Because I deeply understand that it is not easy for every author to write a book, and it is even more difficult to write a good book. Everyone who is committed to writing good stories deserves respect. Therefore, as readers, we must be tolerant and tolerant. If it weren't for the gap between what was written and what was written, which makes it logically unreasonable, I really wouldn't express my opinions one after another. It's really unbearable! The original intention is also to hope that the author will carefully read and compare his own article to see if there are many problems. At least it must be logical and smooth, and do not make people feel that the gap between the characters in the story is too big. If the characters' actions are out of the plot, it will be really uncomfortable and awkward to read. Now the characters created by the author (strictly speaking, starting from the time when Emperor Xiao Ce retrieved his past life memories) have begun to slowly separate from the story and cannot be well connected. I don't know if it is because the story is too long. From the text, it is obvious that the author is unable to control it. There are signs of collapse in the characters and plot. Many places are very unreasonable, and there are also phenomena that are deliberately done for the sake of events. Don't the characters all serve the plot of the story? Characters can be enriched and filled in through the advancement of the plot. This is the basis of writing a book. What I see now is that the plot has become weaker and the interaction between characters is highlighted. This was originally a good thing. Real emotional exchanges began to occur between the male and female protagonists. Unfortunately, the author did not grasp the relationship between the relationship and the advancement of other plots. The author only greatly described the sweet interactive relationship between the emperor and the empress, but almost did not advance the unsafe and hidden dangers that existed in the past and present life at the same time. In this way, the storyline It seems relatively thin, and the image of Xiao Ce, the emperor and strategist, who has taken the advantage is not well presented. Instead, it seems that Xiao Ce's character becomes particularly weak in the later parts, only jealous and sour, and all his thoughts are spent on Qin Zhao. I didn't see him taking effective precautions for the safety of the family of three and Nan Qi, and the heroine Qin Zhao's character is also superficial. It is related to the safety of the two of them and their future. Both of them think more and do less, which is very difficult to understand. Especially the plot of the Great Yueshi Seth's visit to hunt, there are too many shortcomings, and it should be written better and more rigorously. I also said it in the previous chapter, so I won't repeat it here. Anyway, when I read it now, it feels very careless, perfunctory, and imprecise. I hope the author can pay attention to this. Really, write carefully and write well, and discard these unreasonable, imprecise, and illogical places. This book is still a novel worth reading despite its flaws.

Why is Xiao Ce becoming more and more of a scumbag? Why is he so arrogant? Does a person who can't trust his feelings truly love the imperial concubine? No wonder the ancients said that the deep palace is like the sea. The emperor used the art of toying with the emperor to also use his emotions. Isn't it too cold-blooded and ruthless? Qin Zhao is right in dealing with sexual thinking.

Xiaoxiang Academy cannot be evaluated recently. Is this emperor still saved? I really want to slap Si Xianfei

I feel annoyed when I look at Wu Xirou. When will the drama between the three of them end? I can't stand it anymore.