Yogg's Scythe

It's coming, it's coming, I just opened the starting point, but unfortunately I don't have the number of investments.

After reading it, it's not bad. There are quite a lot of this kind of subject matter now. But when I read it for the first time, I felt that the writing style was very Western. It echoed the style of this book. It was too little and I didn't notice anything. I look forward to the follow-up.

Please hurry up and write hard enough for me to read╰（‵□′）╯

Congratulations to the author on signing the contract, it's not easy

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After only reading the first two chapters, I felt that the narrative was very confusing. 😐

After reading it, the author's writing style is good. And the writing is very imaginative, I guess the prose should be well written. But as far as novels are concerned, the rhythm of this writing is a bit awkward, right? And there are also some flaws. 1. In fact, a person is not that important to a world, unless this world is the world in the person's fantasy. The author describes too many passers-by's attitudes towards the protagonist, and also explains that this is not the state of the real world. Everyone will only care about things related to themselves, especially in a world with an open social system. Only in a particularly closed world, a foreign intruder will attract big attention. For example, Peach Blossom Spring. 2. Does everyone know the killer who was killed by the protagonist? This is absolutely impossible. If a killer is known by everyone, he will be dead long ago. 3. The social ecology of this world is very illusory, and the social activities of people in the society are very twisted and weird. I can't quite understand many of the author's descriptions, so I can't have a sense of immersion. Everyone has their own writing style, but I think the novel should be based on the story line. Good writing is an advantage, but it's best not to turn it into a liability. Let's encourage each other and give support by collecting it.

I'm a little numb now. As soon as I saw the summary, I couldn't help but wonder if the author was going to take a leave of absence.