My Wife Is Konoha Tsunade

I feel that the current red text is too idealistic, and it is impossible without twists and turns or betrayal. I hope that in the future, the plot will be such that Hinata and Uchiha in the organization are betrayed by the original vested interests and are counter-plotted by Danzo. For example, the betrayal in the organization is known to the third generation and then they are forced out of the village to develop their ideas in other places and sublimate the organization to innovate. Because none of the G parties in the world has had smooth sailing. They are all plots that can be written, but there are rewards for flying bricks. Some good plots cannot be expanded. This is also a common problem of the system genre. It is too smooth, without passion and suspense, just like an assembly line. The system is so tasteless that it is a pity to abandon it.

When I saw the beginning of Chapter 40, I felt a little bit unbearable The protagonist had to be behind the scenes in the early stage. I thought I could see some valuable wisdom, but I found that neither the third generation nor Hinata was aware of the protagonist's plan at all Hyuga Hizu could think that the protagonist deliberately left the scroll for himself, and the ambition and plan of the protagonist later revealed to the Hyuga family head, but he did not think about whether the mysterious man who killed the branch family was related to the protagonist? This alone makes me feel uncomfortable In addition, in the early stage, it was not mentioned what the protagonist got through the golden finger, what ninjutsu he knew, and what level of taijutsu he had. Then in the battle, he felt that his combat power was off the charts, which was quite speechless. I didn't read the later ones, and I don't know how to fill in some holes in the later stages. For example, I used Flying Thunder God when I kidnapped the Hyuga family. In the later stage, unless the protagonist and Minato don't use it, only these two people in the entire ninja world can use it. Once it is used, will the Hyuga family not think of it? The protagonist has been plotting secretly in Konoha for so many years, but those plans and strategies are not rigorous at all, which is a bit disappointing. Maybe it's because I personally have higher requirements for resourcefulness... But what I suggest to the author is that when writing about Konoha, there are actually many blank periods in between. I can add a few more characters, so that I can fabricate some characters I am familiar with, which is convenient for writing (mainly because the team forces Uchiha Mikoto, but this may have something to do with the subsequent plot development) Also, I am actually here for Tsunade! Hahaha! However, there is not much emotional communication with Tsunade, which is fine Mainly I hope the author can be more rigorous about the strategy. I prefer the resourcefulness aspect. It is best to have reversals, surprises and wisdom Come on!

The writing is quite interesting, but I was actually put off by the title of the book. I saw it a few times but I didn't read the title until I found out that the reviews said it was pretty good. Come on, author! Very well written.

I just found a picture

It is not an exaggeration to say that this book is dragged down by its title. The title can only attract lsp, but I came to see farming 😏. At the end of World War II, I started writing it from the time I met Tsunade, or in other words, it started from the time when the protagonist showed his fangs. The protagonist uses modern ideas to subtly influence the public, and begins to change the ninja world. During this period, he pretends very well - "You know what I am doing, you and I are very happy, but you don't know that you are about to cry." He has the potential to be the mastermind behind the scenes. The other side is also developing colleagues vigorously and resolutely. It is expected to change the destiny of many people, which is good. Many fans are like Minato will not write if he is alive. Of course, it's really difficult, but it seems pretty good so far. The daily life between Tsunade and Tsunade interspersed in the middle of the plot is also very interesting. It can be seen that the author does not dare to write about it. It is recommended to refer to the game "Zhao Guan" and "Loading Love Game". There are many other attractive places, maybe I didn't get them. In addition, I would like to talk about some of my personal shortcomings. After it was released, there were dozens of chapters, and it became popular. After Danzo put a bounty on the protagonist, he lived for another thirty or forty chapters. During this period, the protagonist said that he was out on an inspection, but he was dry and led people around without knowing what he was doing. It was really like a honeymoon. What I watch about Taneda-ryu is that the plot is compact and develops steadily. I avoided it perfectly here... I scanned this part at a glance. If I was following it, I would probably lose my appetite in three to five days. There are also some places that are just for the sake of being funny, which are quite abrupt, without considering whether they are appropriate... Of course, this is a minor problem. In short, as a Naruto fan, it is still above the standard, both in writing and plot. Of course, as a Taneda stream rather than an upgrade stream, the audience will be smaller. After all, it is difficult for Invincible + Taneda stream to have any climax, but I hope the author can persevere and at least attract this part of the readers to have a better start in the next book, right?

Statement statement! This novel has a single female protagonist, only Tsunade. Don't think it's a harem novel just because the protagonist interacts with other supporting female characters. No, guys, I can't write all about supporting male characters (dog head). Also, get married immediately and enter the bridal chamber. The maximum number is 10,000 to 20,000 words. Don't rush to call the male protagonist a eunuch or something.

Take down Mikoto, Yuhi Kurenai, Yuugao, Hinata Hinata, Hinata Hanabi, and Terumi Mei.

This one is quite girly

It's a bit deserted. It's my first time writing a Naruto fanfic. Do you have any suggestions?

To put it bluntly, the second generation's judgment on Uchiha was basically correct. In the original work, it was the second generation who could really save Uchiha, but he did not save him. He still hated Uchiha. The second generation is the person who knows Uchiha best. To be honest, Konoha only contributed to the genocide of Uchiha and did not stop it. The people who really attacked Uchiha were the three pairs of Mangekyo who were alive at that time, Obito, Shisui, and Itachi. Shisui influenced Itachi, they believed that Konoha and Uchiha could not coexist. So one must die, and Itachi himself is not strong enough. He found Obito and joined forces to exterminate the Uchiha clan. It can be said that the mental illness after opening his eyes is the culprit of the Uchiha genocide. Uchiha's traditional way of opening eyes is the evil way, okay (Kaiōshin also said in Dragon Ball that the Super Saiyan transformation is the evil way)

Going to a world of high martial arts like Naruto, it feels a bit ridiculous to engage in a red revolution. The personal force value is too high, and no one will listen to you. Otherwise, why would a novel set by a large number of superpowers appear in a perfect society like modern times, which will inevitably impact the existing institutional system. And why the Black Robe Inspection Team became so popular, isn't it just in line with public perception?

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It seems like Tsunade's Yin Seal can change her age at will, right? Hey hey... Hey

Although the heroine is Tsunade, for LSPs like us, taking them all is the right way, so Kushina, Mikoto, these people, don't think about it 😏

During the reign of the Third Generation, White Fang, Tsunade, Orochimaru, Jiraiya, Namikaze Minato, Uchiha Tomigaoka, Uchiha Shisui, Itachi, eight shadow-level experts, four of Konoha's middle and young generations died, two wandered, two defected, and the top families in the ninja world, Senju, Uchiha, and Uzumaki families were all wiped out. If these were all in Konoha, who would dare to speak loudly to Konoha?

Tsunade

Read aloud, this novel is very comfortable to listen to.

It's a very comfortable Naruto fanfic. In terms of daily life, it skips the process of falling in love at the beginning, but then completes it with very reasonable and concise descriptions, which avoids the risk of relying on love. It is a very good way of writing. In terms of conspiracy, there is no problem at the moment. It makes full use of the different personalities of various characters in Naruto, especially Niuzachi. It is extremely rare in the Naruto novels I have read. The little one and the scorpion are really great. The ending of the original novel is really shocking. Trading farming with ninja cats is also a breakthrough. The writing is great But there are still shortcomings. The setting of the Sword Art Online virtual world novel was released in Naruto It's a bit of a drama in the middle, but it would be less inconsistent if it was changed to the illusion world (Black Zetsu means fright!!). Regarding ninjutsu, there is great control in Naruto. The study of ninjutsu in the Book of Sealings requires the approval of the third generation. Minato can suddenly fly. Raijin, Tokizai is too suspicious. This is a very obvious loophole. There is a risk of being invited to tea by Konoha's high-level officials at any time. It is not impossible to help Suna Ninja, but without the benefit of Konoha, according to the Hokage's world view, it is completely equivalent to supporting the enemy. It can be seen that Jiraiya will be suspected of teaching children to the Rain Ninja. Tsunade accepts it without any expression. It is a bit too naive. In the opinion of the Kazekage, accepting it immediately without the Hokage's consent is a bit of a downfall to the Kazekage. Intelligent, because at present the protagonist is not in the decision-making position of Konoha. Fortunately, it is unreasonable to have Sono back in the future. I hope the author can consider it again in subsequent creations to avoid bugs. From the current point of view, this book is a good article. It can be used reasonably in such a messy bug like the love system. It is much better than other books that only cheat and crash. I hope the author can keep up the good writing. Now that the word count is small, it is still full of meaning!

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Where is Tsunade's wife as promised? Why is there another picture on the cover? It's a scumbag.

When the author comes out, look at how hard people work in their novels, and you will see that they are people who make a lot of money. If you have this awareness (*'ε`*)

It turns out that in addition to Konoha, there are Tsunade in other ninja villages. One person in Konoha is not enough, we thought the five major countries looked down on us, one person per person.

It's a rare fanfic with online characters' IQs, and the main characters don't have stereotypes. Instead, it uses profiling to highlight the character of the main character, which is a good article. It's all set once it's released.

I think it's pretty good. Why did it end so quickly?

To be honest, I have read so many Naruto fanfics and this is the only one that made me pay for it. Come on, give me your monthly pass.

Some people say that Tsunade is older (not this novel, but other novels that time travel to the beginning of Naruto's plot) and likes old ladies, and old cows eat young grass. What about those novels about cultivating immortals? Isn't that several thousand years old? Where is the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl? Where is Bai Suzhen and Xu Xian? Are you old? 🤔

The writing is good, but it doesn't feel like a Naruto fanfic to me. Why do I say this? Because the most classic collision of power systems, human weaknesses, etc. In Naruto are not written out, and because the timeline is too early, most of the major events in Naruto are not included. It's completely like the author is using Naruto's skin to write his own original novel, but instead of doing this, I feel like the author might as well write an imaginary world by himself.

If there weren't many bugs in the front (such as the timeline, the age of the characters, etc., And was the protagonist ignored by Black Zetsu and Madara?), This book should have achieved very good results. Many things came out very abruptly. It stands to reason that the acceptance ability of ninjas in this era is not that strong. How about the author add a patch to say that the system has the ability to modify the understanding of the world? There was also the scene where Asuna was in the birdcage in the stage play. Well, that scene was inappropriate.

The author should take some time to write some extra chapters.