Pirates: Swallowed a Fantasy Beast Species at the Beginning by Mistake

Another short and weak chapter, come on, update more to be able to read.

Write [One Piece Fan] in the introduction, otherwise it will be too difficult to search.

The fruit can be written as a human fruit, a fantasy beast species, or a devil form Then the attached ability is to copy or deprive the devil fruit of its ability. Isn't it cool to be able to change into a devil form?

The updates in the past two days have been somewhat untimely. I would like to say a few words to the author. The important thing when writing articles is to be continuous and not to interrupt. Because if you write continuously every day, the inspiration will still be there, but if you stop writing, the inspiration will easily disappear. It turned out that I had a great idea, but I couldn't write a single word. (I have written this myself before, and this is my own personal experience.) I hope the author can work hard!

Personally, I think there are two main mistakes. Let me tell you The first is the character. It feels very strange. It feels like Conan. It feels like Conan pretends to be a child every time. The children in One Piece are more crazy. This kind of character is inappropriate. Akainu is the younger brother. Anyone who cares can tell at a glance The second is to learn the six postures. The six postures require physical strength. It's about physical strength. Needless to say, if your body can't keep up, you can't learn it at all. You can't learn comics and animation until you are twelve years old. You have been exercising your body in the past. This is considered a setting. Domineering has independent awakening and acquired learning activation. Don't write anything later The character must be changed. Otherwise, I feel like watching Conan, with the sound of licking and licking in my ears all day long.

Come on, come on, I'll give you the naming fee, and come up with a few names that reflect your personality and the fruit you want. I have a lot of cool ones in my mind, but I just can't think of a name.

I'm curious, can the protagonist only copy the natural type? If it is a superman type or an animal type, it can be copied. So what would happen if two types of supermen or animals were used at the same time? Or it can be stitched. For example, a rubber fruit is added to an animal type, and then stitched together to create an existing animal type of power, and then a superhuman type of ability.

Animal-type phantom beast human form, holy angel form, 1 ability, divine words and decrees, whatever you say is what it says. God said that if there is light, there will be light. In addition, the animal body is invincible, a pair of wings, an ability 🪖 2 abilities, holy light purification, destroying everything, 3 God's gifts, you can, let your subordinates have wings, that is, have one of your own abilities. The more central you get, the more wings you have, direct religion 😏 4. Punishment for blasphemy. Those who blaspheme must be punished by heaven. As long as you attack me, my wings will light up. Once the wings light up, the light between heaven and earth will actively form an attack and explode in your body. It is 100% anti-armor. If you hit me, you will hit yourself 😏 5. I made it up myself. There are many, invincible fruits 😏😏

The writing is beautiful and the writing is vivid. Just a few words brought me into a magnificent world. It was great. The plot is a link between the past and the following, with foreshadowing everywhere. The links of each scene are so perfect, especially the turning points, which always give people an unexpected feeling, but if you think about it carefully, it makes sense. Maybe this is the legendary coincidence. (Fifty cents per line, please delete the parentheses.)

I hope you can point it out to me when you see something unreasonable. If it doesn't affect the outline, you can change it. Newbies have new books. Comments are welcome ੭ ᐕ)੭*⁾⁾