Build the Strongest Mausoleum

The first 30 chapters of this book are okay, but the real world at the end looks messy. There is no need to write about the real world. Isn't it good for you to grow up in the game world and then wait until the players come out to show off and slap you in the face?

In the style of ancient online games, the genius protagonist hides his identity. . . .

I came to see you in the Skeleton Sea, but you opened a trumpet account. Forget it, how many accounts did you open? What about the Skeleton Sea? Have you become a sea of ​​being? Just open a few and forget it. Opening the first avatar, a human avatar, there are only a few chapters left. Have you ever started exchanging bodily fluids with women? Forget it about exchanging bodily fluids. Still weird. Oh My God! You have a game with a fantasy undead genre, but you told me that there is also a suspense genre? ! ! Okay, are you talking about a magical demon? Hmm. . Not to mention any of this. I came to see the Sea of ​​Skeletons. You learned formations there, various types of magic, and even light magic. It's amazing, it's amazing. You just start the game as God, explode on the spot, and have omniscience and omnipotence.

Is this one of the three emperors of hell? She's cute, silly, and silly. My 10-year-old sister is smarter than her.

What is the selling point of this book? The protagonist is lying in a tomb, getting something for nothing through the souls of the dead, showing off through external incarnations, and showing himself as a saint in front of others? ? ? Anything to watch?

The biggest flaw of this book is that the cultivation system Western Fantasy and Taoist knowledge are intertwined, making it unreadable.

These writings will basically collapse. In the middle and late stages, one is the experience issue The other is the combat power system issue (and I feel that such a talented scientific researcher cannot be so perverted...) There is also the writing of reality + main body + clone, many of which are inconsistent with logic. Like others said, the combat power system will basically collapse (if you write novice + cool + stallion writing, I didn't say it)

If this book had not written about reality, the results might have been much better.

Damn it. Which great author has traveled through time ten years ago?

It's embarrassing. There is an NPC in this game who has a higher IQ than the protagonist, and anyone can play with it at the drop of a hat.

Everyone was dumbfounded😒

The early stage was okay, but later on it felt like I was writing two books.

Sheep head and dog meat, a dream that goes back to eternity. This Shennong almost thought that he had traveled back in time to eat grass. . .

There is not much to say, just a word, body + clone will be enough, and I made an earth body

It's a new month, please invest!

It's fine in every aspect, but I personally don't like it. Let's talk about the reasons why I don't like it: the zombie body of the protagonist has no role, the upgrade is too sloppy, the clones are really diligent in collecting the harem, and the pretentious slap in the face is too cliché. The one on Earth is similar, quite boring, just pick it up The awesome people in the small village include the blacksmith/caster, the blacksmith's wife, the pharmacist, the Feng Shui master/war god, and the crippled priest (only a four-winged angel was summoned. The protagonist casually summoned the twelve-winged fallen angel for the first time, and summoned the evil-eyed tyrant for the second time to scare the fallen angel). There are various attribute point bonuses that only you can imagine, no author can do it. The two white-robed priests were stupid enough to embarrass the protagonist just by someone else's casual remarks. They were cruel when they first came up, and even said they shouldn't be beaten back. After the earth's clone returned to the country after being resurrected, he didn't even ask carefully. He said that he had a high credit rating, and there were less than 100 of them in the country. . . What I mean by being okay in all aspects is that the writing is okay, otherwise I wouldn't be able to see so many poisonous points. Gone, gone

It's a very popular online game story that I can read, but it's not very attractive. In addition, reality is a poisonous point.

It's a good idea, but it's too messy and all kinds of messy.

It's so embarrassing to have a heroine who is still a useless kind of heroine, and the official announcement was speechless

Open a supporting post The plot is about to be pushed. Now call the supporting players. They can be NPCs in the game world or players who are about to enter the game. Please reply to this post with your thoughts. If you like it, it will be included~ Name, gender, occupation, appearance, and personality. The occupations here were fixed before level 30, including martial arts master, magician, psychic, and telekinesis master. After level 30, you can change to anything. Please let go of your imagination and just write down the occupations after level 30. If you have any ideas about equipment, you can also mention your identity. For example, who is the eldest son of a certain family? Let tens of thousands of people help you control monsters for you to kill, give you all the resources, etc. Let your imagination run wild~ Please support this book! Thank you!