In Konoha, ANBU Tortured Ninjas for Ten Years!

It is full of loopholes, this is my evaluation of this novel After reading Chapter 356, I found big loopholes from the first chapter. What is the ANBU? If you find anything wrong at all, you will immediately find it. The protagonist travels there. Do you think it is appropriate for the author? As for the state in which you wrote the protagonist at the time, everyone can find that something is wrong. Since you want to write about behind-the-scenes drama, don't give the protagonist too many scenes. There are so many people looking for him for so many things. This is not to push the protagonist to the front.

Come on, author, go for it~

Overall, this book is pretty good. I've read around chapter 210. It's just relatively bland, not too poisonous, but too bland. There is no sense of participation in major events, the battles are very short, and they are basically crushing. Everyday life after time travel... Is more or less boring. After all, it is a novel, it has a system, and all the cheats are turned on, just to live a daily life, it is too streamlined, and the quality of the chapters is not high. Read a few chapters, skip 10 chapters, and read again without affecting the reading experience... The plot is not very relevant, and there is no sense of oppression. The whole book has a strong sense of detachment and cannot be absorbed. About the process, daily work--chatting with Minato---increasing strength---fear of getting involved--silencing after being discovered. The first 210 chapters are basically in a while loop... Because the protagonist's strength has grown too fast. Around Chapter 200, around the third war, he has learned hundreds of ninjutsu. His immortal body is comparable to the six paths, and his chakra control is stronger than Tsunade. At this time, he is 14-16 years old It is impossible to defeat three ninjas. It is a problem. At this time, any minor plot events seem unnecessary to be involved, because there is no threat, there is no logic to fear being involved, the protagonist's handling of this matter is also trivial, and it is annoying for the readers... The author should let the protagonist go to the Akatsuki organization... This is more in line with the character, and there is no need to worry about being exposed and involved in troublesome events. And the age issue... You can also fight every day to make money and run around like Kakuzu After being separated from Konoha, the plot description will not be difficult, because the Konoha written by both the original work and the fans will have more or less bugs and troubles with the second design. If you are removed from it, you can write how you want, and it will not conflict with the original work. The most important thing is that the persona of an office worker can be maintained. When I get off work, even Payne can't control me. I can also take care of Sister Bonan, and we are all alive. Here in Konoha, you say that you are more powerful than the first generation, but you still torture ninjas for fear of exposure, which is more or less a problem. Just like a previous martial arts novel, what is the name of the white-robed manager? He is so powerful that he even looks after people's homes and homes. This sense of separation is irreversible and problematic no matter how you look at it. Of course, these are just my subjective opinions as a reader, without any criticism. The author should write how he should write, it is just a discussion.

It was really embarrassing to see the third generation and Danzo calling others "sama". The plot really doesn't make sense, and the characters generally seem to have insufficient IQ. A little disappointed, the plot skipping had almost no impact.

I have read 200 chapters. The characters are as vivid as the author's previous books, but the logic occasionally has problems, and the jokes are appropriate. It is quite enjoyable. If you don't care about the flaws in the logic, you can read it. Recommendation index: three and a half stars

An important tip for the author, don't use so many exclamation points! Don't write a sentence into so many paragraphs! Use less exclamation points! Don't separate things that can be said in one sentence! It looks uncomfortable! If it wasn't because the plot was exciting, it would be very discouraging!

I watched the news this morning. An author was hacked to death at home because he didn't update at ten o'clock a day. I have no other intention, I just hope that the author will not be ignorant of good and evil.

The following plot is like an old lady's foot wrap, smelly and long, and it also forcibly creates conflicts, and the NPC forces it to fill in the brain.

I can't say where I am missing out, but I just feel that the author is overly concerned with the number of words. Reading it every day seems so bland. There are no explosive points. I feel like the author is rushing to finish the 10 million words.

Alas, I feel like the whole rhythm has slowed down since I met Nara Girl. Seeing this girl makes me feel alienated and disgusting. I still can't get over it.

This book is the best Naruto fanfic I have ever read. The previous one was Uzumaki 🤓🤓

Update update, update quickly

Lu Jiu has a high IQ, but he insists on writing it as 250, or the author wants to say that Lu Jiu is too arrogant because of his high IQ, but from the performance point of view, the protagonist is too arrogant, Lu Jiu is a whole 250

New book sets sail, begging readers for support

When I saw Chapter 347, I couldn't help but vomit. The protagonist is very powerful, but he still treats himself as a weakling. He even has to imitate the weaklings like the Third Generation and Danzo in his thinking (at least in the setting of this novel, he is a weakling), and he has to think like a weakling like the Third Generation Danzo when thinking about problems. Is the author female? Kiriki is so angry, go to the female channel. Also, if you don't accept the female lead, please don't be ambiguous.

It takes ten lies to explain one lie when it is discovered. The protagonist talks nonsense every day and lies about big and small things, which is strange. It's okay for you to do this, but you still have to make trouble, and you have to make trouble with important NPCs.

I feel like the biggest problem is that I overestimate the protagonist. It's okay to overestimate, but the writing can't carry the punch. Other than that, I always felt that the plot was too fussy and forced to explain.

Nara Saki is so self-righteous now, it's really annoying, I hope she won't be made the heroine

I was poisoned. The protagonist must be stubborn. Then after the protagonist reads Yun Ying Anbu's memory, you don't tell the truth. You also mislead the people in this village and emphasize that no one will poison this person's memory again. Do you hate your friend so much? Do you want your friend's woman to die? Don't tell me that the original work is fine. You've already shown up and you're still talking about the original work? Even if it's really okay, if someone reads that person's memory again for some reason, wouldn't you have exposed yourself? Yun Ying didn't do you any favors, why did you help them? How can you write like this when you are completely harming others and also harming yourself?

The Third Kazekage led a team to sneak attack on Konoha Village and even reach the Hokage Tower? Is it possible to reach Konoha directly from the Kingdom of Wind? Forcibly arranging the plot?

It took me two or three days to read it all in one go. I have always looked at it from the perspective of the mastermind behind the scenes, so sometimes I think the male protagonist is a scumbag, but the acceptance is okay - the image of the male protagonist has gradually stabilized in the chaotic camp. A few points: 1. The frequency of metaphorical driving is slightly higher in the early stage, and then the frequency decreases. 2. Meiqin's green tea image. (The kind of green tea that is simply not a very good character) 3. When the male protagonist abuses others, the plot is reasonable and the male protagonist is whitewashed by writing the reasons. It makes sense but is a bit blunt 4. The pig and deer from Zhu Lu Die appear, plus Lu Jiu, it is so frustrating! ! ! And for more than 30 chapters, it is actually very risky to write a character who is quite positive in the eyes of the public for the sake of the plot and make it annoying. 5. The image of the male protagonist is very complicated. This is a matter of benevolence and wisdom. What I like: 1. I like to analyze the original work on a reasonable basis, and the various ideas are amazing. This aspect of this book is what I think is better written in fan books, and this is the main reason why I pursue the book 2. Logic, everything is traceable, although some characters seem annoying to death from our God's perspective, but they have their own logical chain 3. There are many foreshadowings, I look forward to unraveling them later (I miss Minato for various reasons) 4. The male protagonist's character has some lovable and annoying parts, and various plots constantly show the changes in the male protagonist's mentality. It's good to watch the character's image gradually becoming more and more mature So I finally followed it. Some parts were harsh and unlikable, but overall it was definitely on the level. Looking forward to the follow-up. (Emotional part: I understand the truth, that woman is really annoying. Lu Jiu is not as annoying as her. What? The child is already looking for his head all over the floor in frustration)

The first half is good, but the second half is really watery

The plot of an ordinary person being killed in prison is really poisonous, and the discovery of an ordinary person is even more poisonous! Being so close to Danzo, you didn't notice an ordinary person nearby? ? Is it the case that the root boss doesn't have anyone around him when traveling and doesn't investigate? What's more, I still have to explain some secret matter to the warden! ! Besides, for such a thing, Danzo needs to personally take action? ? ?

Very exciting. The details are well grasped. This is the best fanfic I've ever seen in Jihojiujian and Behind the Scenes. To be honest, I don't think the third generation is a good person. It looks very kind in the anime, but if there was only the Pot King, Konoha would not be like this. The third generation must have been involved.

I think the author's ambush skills are quite impressive. You can try other genres. It turns out that the protagonist said that he was a fan of Uchiha Fugaku just to touch his head. I thought it was just funny, but who knew that this foreshadowing would be used later.

The last time I saw such a good-looking Naruto fanfic was The Man Behind the Scenes, but I stopped reading it after writing a manga. 😍 Come on, author.

Wcwc I asked why this Naruto fanfic is so good-looking. It turns out that it is the same author as the one I did on Naruto Live. It's a classic wc

More than three million words must be very watery.

It's an inexplicable saliva book, it's like a Conan detective novel, it's hot-blooded, it's watery and it doesn't fit into the theme.

Shi Tianfeng? Why don't you put aside writing novels? Your brother Shi Tianwu has begun to reopen the world